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ina have been hit by smog frequently, which has aroused great concern among people. Smog has a bad effect on people’s health. Many people, children and the old in particular, suffer from illnesses caused by smog. Consequently, citizens are warned not to go out without wearing masks. How does it e about? Scientists have found that it is human activity that has caused this. The poisonous matters in the air mainly e as a result of people’s burning coal, driving cars, industry production and so on. What should we do to stop the situation from worsening? First, cleaner fuels for cars and stricter emission standards for factories are of vital importance. Second, for us individuals, living a green life like going to work or school by public transport is a good choice. Also planting more trees to increase green areas is necessary. I believe every contribution counts. Only if we work together will smog weather disappear pletely. 【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們根據(jù)提示來介紹有關(guān)霧霾的情況,題目中給出了寫作的內(nèi)容,我們應(yīng)將這些內(nèi)容用正確的英語表達(dá)出來。其次要注意使用正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱,通過分析可知,這篇短文應(yīng)使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài),謂語動(dòng)詞用原形,特別要注意謂語動(dòng)詞形式要變化,這是一個(gè)寫作的難點(diǎn)。應(yīng)從句子整體考慮,使用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯和句型來表達(dá),語法規(guī)范。6. 書面表達(dá)共享單車(shared bikes)在蘇州投入使用以來,給人們帶來了諸多便利,受到人們的追捧,改變了人們的出行方式,但同時(shí)也遇到了一些挑戰(zhàn),是國(guó)民素質(zhì)的‘“照妖鏡”,請(qǐng)你根據(jù)表格中信息的提示,給《21世紀(jì)英文報(bào)》寫一篇關(guān)于共享單車看法的稿件。諸多優(yōu)勢(shì),出行方便,減少污染 ,負(fù)擔(dān)得起存在問題 你的觀點(diǎn)我認(rèn)為……(考生自擬,至少2點(diǎn))注意事項(xiàng):,要求語句通順,意思連貫。作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。Shared bikes are being more and more popular in our daily life. 【答案】Shared bikes are being more and more popular in our daily life. They have won high praise since they appeared.Shared bikes have brought us many advantages. They can be seen everywhere so that it39。s more, using shared bikes costs so little that we can afford it.But there are some problems too. Some people can39。s a way of living a green life.【解析】這篇作文要求我們給《21世紀(jì)英文報(bào)》投稿,談一談自己對(duì)共享單車的看法。前兩個(gè)內(nèi)容我們需要根據(jù)表格的提示用正確的英語表達(dá),而自己的觀點(diǎn)則需要學(xué)生們自己發(fā)揮想象力,組織語言,并表達(dá)出來,要求至少兩點(diǎn)。寫作時(shí),應(yīng)注意英語表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語的不同,不能逐詞翻譯,而應(yīng)從句子的整體考慮,簡(jiǎn)單句、并列句和復(fù)合句交叉使用,改變文章句式節(jié)奏,使用不同的句式,避免單調(diào)。點(diǎn)睛:這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。短文分成了四段,第一段引出話題共享單車;第二段講述了共享單車的一些優(yōu)點(diǎn);第三段介紹了一些問題;最后一段作者提出了自己的看法。其次短文中使用了恰當(dāng)?shù)臅r(shí)態(tài)和人稱,文章以第三人稱、一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)為主,語法規(guī)范,用詞準(zhǔn)確,句式富于變化。s easy for us to get around on shared bikes. Also, riding bicycles not only is good for our health but also can help reduce pollution. What39。正確文章行文連貫、語句通順、表達(dá)流暢。你打算邀請(qǐng)外教 Peter參加。提示詞語: school gate, nature, culture, food and drink提示問題: ●When and where are you going to meet?●What are you going to do there?●What do you advise Peter to prepare for the visit?Dear Pete,How is it going?I am writing to invite you to visit Beijing International Horticulture Exposition in I39。d better wear a pair of fortable sports shoes and take some food and drinks with you.I39。本文已經(jīng)給出了主要寫作要點(diǎn),動(dòng)筆前要先認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn),寫作中,應(yīng)注意描述的全面性,盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上;提示的問題就是寫作的基本方向,然后圍繞要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮即可。語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu),語言準(zhǔn)確,語意連貫,表達(dá)清楚,具有邏輯性。句型:not only…but also;You39。m looking forward to…。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表內(nèi)容寫一篇短文,對(duì)這一現(xiàn)狀進(jìn)行分析并提出建議。 At present only a few students do some reading after class. Here are several reasons. ▲ ▲ ▲ ▲