【正文】 師寫感謝信1親愛的父母朋友：你們好！我是李陽，瘋狂英語的創(chuàng)始人。文章的幾個過渡語也是恰到好處: to be honest, little by little等，均在一定程度上增強(qiáng)了文章的連貫性。第二段首句的設(shè)問句How kind and responsible can a teacher be? 更是精彩?！緷M分范文】Dear Miss Wang,I’m glad to write to this moment, words can no longer express my kind and responsible can a teacher be? You just gave me the perfect can clearly remember how much I hated learning new English words at be honest, I really wanted to give soon as you noticed this, you offered to help me by telling me some shortcuts to learn never failed to encourage me even when I made only a little by little, my interest in English grew and now I’m a top student in want to say thanks to will work harder in the future to live up to your hope you can be happy and healthy Xiaoming點(diǎn)評：這篇修改后的作文無論在語言表達(dá)以及文章內(nèi)涵方面都是相當(dāng)優(yōu)秀的。結(jié)尾處，對于老師的感謝和祝福也就水到渠成，感情真摯、自然。 want to say thanks/thank owe my progress/success to your owe you a lot for your help/what you’ve done for ’ll never forget your help and I will remember all the happy times we shared hope you can be happy/healthy, wish you good luck/health!【普通作文】Dear Miss Wang:I’m glad to write to are such a kind and easygoing teacher that we all like remember that at first I hated learning new English words very much and I even wanted to give you noticed this, you had a talk with told me some good ways to remember those words and encouraged me never to give ’ve made great progress in English and now I’m a top student in want to say will work harder in the hope you can be happy and healthy ,Linda點(diǎn)評：本文信息點(diǎn)齊全，層次比較清楚，語言比較通順，句式也有一定的變化。：書信：You, I：因?yàn)槭腔貞洠砸砸话氵^去時為主。在情真意切的同時，我們還要格外注意文章的詳略和條理。信的開頭和落款已給出，不計(jì)詞數(shù)。 gratitude to the hard working teachers is are a success, is qualified, sincere and persistent, your enthusiasm to the education of children, forever in our hearts, your morality, art division is one hundred, your words and deeds with its own charm, positive energy, education infected children, and education the parents, moved us!Our parents and children really feel a good teacher!I hope our country will have to your thousands on thousands of such a good teacher can cultivate numerous useful a riot of colour for our children are going to go to primary school and leave their beloved teachers, beloved kindergartens, and they are particularly reluctant to leave will continue to grow up healthy, they are carefully based on your education will continue to climb new heights when they in the future, all scientific knowledge, in various positions on the construction of national excellent achievements, they must not forget them in the starting line of life once you are such a good teacher for their dedication!Thousands of words do not convey the gratitude of parents in class two to Bihua, Wei, , their teacher, , and our excellent Guangxia you good health!Wish you the prosperity of your business!Tomorrow is better!All parents in class IIJune 201X尊敬的黃碧華老師、張薇老師：時光荏苒，您們所帶的大二班全體小朋友就要畢業(yè)了，在這臨近畢業(yè)的前夕，我們大二班全體孩子的家長無比的激動和感動！在這過去的三年、一千多個日日夜夜，就像一千零一夜的故事，每天都充滿新奇和歡樂；孩子們從進(jìn)園只知哭啼的小童，到現(xiàn)在成長為能歌善舞、聰慧、守紀(jì)律，具有想象力和充滿愛心的大班小朋友，他們成長的每一點(diǎn)一滴都傾注了您們的真情和心血！您們用美麗的心靈、用青春、用自己全部的聰明才智撫育了我們的孩子，是孩子們最佳的啟蒙老師，給孩子們留下了最美好的童年記憶！看著這群健康、聰慧有愛心有才智的孩子們，我們家長對辛勤的老師的感激之心無以言表！您們是成功的，是合格的，你們對教育事業(yè)的執(zhí)著、對孩子們的真心與熱情，永遠(yuǎn)銘記在我們的心中，您們的師德、師藝都是一百分，您們言傳身教用自身的魅力、正能量感染了、教育了孩子，也同時教育了、感動了我們家長！我們家長和孩子們真心感到碰到了好老師！但愿我們國家會有千千萬萬個向您們這樣的好老師能為我們的國家培育出無數(shù)的萬紫千紅的有用之材。Honorable teacher Huang Bihua and teacher Zhang Wei:Time flies, you have to take the second class of all children will be graduated, on the eve of this graduation, all the children in our second class parents very excited and moved!In the past three years, the more than 1000 day and night, like one thousand and one nights, every day filled with excitement and joy。第一篇：用英語給老師寫感謝信用英語給老師寫感謝信英語是世界上最流行的語言，也是所有語言中使用最廣泛的語言，學(xué)好英語有利于我們對外交流。下面本人帶來的是用英語給老師寫感謝信，希望對你有幫助。the children crying from the children into the park only know, now grown into singing and dancing, intelligent, disciplined, imaginative and full of love in every child, every little bit of their growth into your love and effort!You have nurtured our children with beautiful mind, youth and all your ingenuity, which is the best teacher for children, leaving the best childhood memories for at this group of healthy, intelligent and intelligent children, our parents39。孩子們馬上就要上小學(xué)了，就要離開他們心愛的老師，心愛的幼兒園，他們特別的舍不得離開你們；他她們還會繼續(xù)健康的長大，他她們在您們精心教育的基礎(chǔ)上還會不斷攀登新的高峰，當(dāng)他她們在今后的各個科學(xué)、知識領(lǐng)域、在國家建設(shè)的各個崗位上取得優(yōu)異成績的時候，他她們一定不會忘記在他們?nèi)松钠鹋芫€上曾經(jīng)有您們這樣的好老師為他們默默奉獻(xiàn)過！千言萬語表達(dá)不盡大二班家長們對黃碧華老師、張薇老師還有照顧過他們的林老師、韓老師還有我們優(yōu)秀的廣廈幼兒園的感激之情！祝愿您們身體健康！祝福您們事業(yè)興旺發(fā)達(dá)！明天更加美好！大二班的全體家長二零一X年六月第二篇：怎么給老師寫感謝信【本期題目】在初中三年的學(xué)習(xí)生活中，你一定遇到過很多老師，現(xiàn)在請你選擇其中對你幫助最大的一位老師，給他(她)寫一封感謝信，談?wù)勀銓λ?她)的印象，回憶一下他(她)是怎么幫助你的，并表達(dá)你對他(她)的祝福。提示詞：kind, help, encourage, thanks, hope【寫作指導(dǎo)】本題要求我們給對自己幫助最大的老師寫一封感謝信，因?yàn)槭亲约河H身經(jīng)歷的，又是寫給自己的老師，同學(xué)們一定有千言萬語要對他(她)說。通過審題，我們可以獲知：：感謝師恩：對老師的感謝之情，對老師的印象，回憶老師的幫助，并表達(dá)祝福。同學(xué)們先把相關(guān)短語和詞匯整理一下：?kind, nice, selfless, patient, easygoing, responsible, be strict with…?help me with my English/ maths, explain…to me patiently, encourage me never to give up, praise me when I make progress, have a talk with me, take me to the hospital when I am ill, tell me some good ways to learn……接下來，我們看看如何表達(dá)對老師的感謝和祝福吧。作者首先用一個so…that 句式將老師隨和、善良的特點(diǎn)勾勒出來，接下來回憶了老師是如何在自己當(dāng)初因討厭背單詞而想放棄學(xué)英語時對自己無私的幫助。當(dāng)然，文章的連貫和語言優(yōu)化方面也還是可以進(jìn)一步改進(jìn)的。首先，開頭At this moment, words can no longer express my 。在描寫自己起初對英語單詞的厭煩時，作者用了一個how 所引導(dǎo)的賓語從句替代原文的普通句式。此外，幾個表達(dá)法也相當(dāng)?shù)氐?、出彩，比如?live up to one’s expectations(不辜負(fù)某人的期望)表示自己的決心，使得整篇文章的感情更加飽滿、真摯，給人留下了深刻的印象。恭喜你們的孩子成為“李陽瘋狂英語遼寧封閉強(qiáng)化集訓(xùn)營”的學(xué)員，這是一個“國際化中國人的俱樂部”，加入這里就是加入成功者和強(qiáng)者的行列！到今天為止，我已經(jīng)教授英語了。在推廣英語口語20年，推廣“熱愛丟臉、把英語說出來”這個理念20年之后，我的努力得到了國家和社會的認(rèn)可，這再次證明了堅(jiān)持的力量！堅(jiān)持創(chuàng)造奇跡！重復(fù)就是力量！中國人在英語學(xué)習(xí)上付出的代價(jià)實(shí)在是太大了！我要聯(lián)合所有的中國人，堅(jiān)決粉碎聾啞英語！堅(jiān)決反對英語上花費(fèi)太多時間！從現(xiàn)在開始，我們將全力以赴支持和幫助孩子的英語和人生獲得偉大的成功！你們的孩子將走上與眾不同的成功之路！從今天開始，我、我的團(tuán)隊(duì)將和你們一起攜手培養(yǎng)你們的孩子，把他（她）真正鍛造成為父母的驕傲、國家的棟梁！教育孩子并不是一件痛苦、艱難的事情。我堅(jiān)信：每個孩子都是英語天才！每個父母也都是教育天才！我更加堅(jiān)信：你們的孩子不僅屬于你們，也是我的孩子，是偉大祖國的孩子，更是地球之子！我們都有責(zé)任幫助他們找到自信、快樂和成功！從今天起，你們的家庭將正式成為“李陽瘋狂英語國際家庭”！全家學(xué)習(xí)的時代到來了，不學(xué)習(xí)就會落后于時代！除了8天的魔鬼訓(xùn)練之外，我們還將為你們的孩