【正文】 s or on fishing trips and help them to get to know things that boys usually learn from their fathers. Some cities have a number of clubs where boys and girls can go to play games or learn crafts. Some of these clubs show movies or anize short trips to the mountains, the beaches, museums or other places of interest. Most of these clubs use a lot of high school and college students as volunteers because they are young enough to remember the problems of younger boys and girls. Volunteers believe that some of the happiest people in the world are those who help to bring happiness to others. [222 words] 英語 四級作文 范文點評 本文談?wù)摰氖侵驹刚邌栴}。t have any interest in the job, you are sure to be bored by it even if it is a highly paid one. second, you should have knowledge of the job itself. the job you are looking for should neither be beyond your reach nor should it be too easy. instead, it should bring your abilities into full play. going to work that is too difficult may only lead to frustration and failure. going to work that is too easy, however, will be a waste of your knowledge, and you will soon lose interest in it. besides, you should think of the prospect of the job. will you have a promising future if you take the job? do not be misled by the present salary it offers. think of its future development. it is important to weigh the immediate advantages against the long term prospects of the job. at this point, it is always advisable that you turn to your parents, your teachers, and your friends for help if you cannot make the decision. they are the people who know you the best. you can also ask some job advisors for advice. they are usually experienced and can give you some valuable hints. of course, it is you who have to make the final decision. (Beauty) beauty usually refers to what appeals to the eye. a nice and well built girl is regarded as beautiful. a bunch of vigorous flowers are also considered as beautiful. a splendid waterfall ing down from a mountain is as well looked on as also refers to what appeals to the mind. the virtue of the chinese nation industry and bravery are taken as beautiful, because it helped to produce such a magnificent culture in the world. einstein39。 1. 災(zāi)害 (Disasters) in the past hundred years, there have heen frequent natural disasters, such as floods, droughts, mudrock flows, seismic sea waves, earthquakes, windstorms and the stretching of new deserts. the disasters have killed millions upon millions of people, destroyed countless homes, and wiped out numerous pieces of fertile land. now more and more people bee aware that those disasters have much to do with what we have done to the earth. we have cut down too many trees in the forests,we have badly polluted the environment, we have shocked our own homepla time and again with tremendously powerful explosions of nuclear bombs. as a result, climates have bee abnormal, rainwater rushes down hillsides angrily, and the underground energy goes up to revenge itself on us. the earth is our only homepla. it is urgent for us to stop damaging it, and to do our best to protect it and make it a lovely place suitable to live in, for we have nowhere to go and survive except where we are now. (How to Keep Fit) a healthy body is very important to every one of us. when you are sick, you feel painful all over your body, have no energy to work。希望各位同學(xué)能 夠有所幫助。一篇文章寫一遍不做任何的修改是永遠(yuǎn)沒有提高的，如果能寫三遍，甚至寫到五遍，我們相信一遍一定會比前一遍更好一些。 為什么要寫兩遍呢？要知道任何文章只寫一遍沒有任何的效果。所以你得有一個龐大的同義替換庫 ,有些單詞可能改變之后感覺更好。記住， more and more 今后我們盡量變成副詞的形式，叫 increasingly。 又比如說在詞 匯方面，很多人喜歡用 important、 many、 moreand more，這都是比較老的梗了，尤其是 “ 越來越重要 ”more and more important，如果這些詞匯不斷的重復(fù)出現(xiàn)，你的作文可能是得不了高分的。你應(yīng)該多考慮一些如：稍微好一些的主語從句： it is widely believed that（人們普遍認(rèn)為）；又比如說 manyhold the idea that（很多人都有這樣的觀點）等等。 首先，要注意一些常見詞匯的替換形式。 相同道理，聯(lián)系實際并且給出建議，在當(dāng)下我們應(yīng)該怎么做才可以滿足這個名言它所倡導(dǎo)的觀念和理念。給出三條支持性論據(jù)，三條當(dāng)中可以適當(dāng)給出一些案例進(jìn)行一些解釋和深度的支持。也就是說大部分的情況之下，只要你發(fā)現(xiàn)這句話是一個無公害的語言，是一個更多人都支持的語言，那么你就做一個順民就好了。 當(dāng)你發(fā)現(xiàn)單詞或個別短語不了解時，沒有關(guān)系，只需要用更加平實的語言將你認(rèn)為整體這句話的含義進(jìn)行一個簡單的解釋就可以了。這樣的文章寫作時同樣要分成三段寫。首先你要確 保這句話你能否看懂，在沒有看懂之前你千萬不要落筆，因為很有可能你將走上一條不歸路，所以新東方在線建昆老師建議大家一定是仔細(xì)看題。 文言文型文章 對于六級考生來說，名言警句類的文章是這幾年的一個重點和熱點。 第三段，重復(fù)觀點并聯(lián)系實際，在當(dāng)下的社會給出和問題相關(guān)性的建議 比如說作為大學(xué)生，我們應(yīng)該如何做才可以達(dá)到第二段觀點的要求，這就是圖畫類作文比較基本的一個構(gòu)架。 在第二段當(dāng)中很 明顯是我們的 bodyparagraph，主題段落。比如說曾經(jīng)考過一道題目叫做《一屋不掃何以掃天下》，你需要討論的就是要做大事情還是做小事情，你只需要談出小男孩對于打掃房間這樣一件事情有困惑，圖片當(dāng)中的很多內(nèi)容實際上就非常的清楚了。 第一段， a briefdescription of the picture，簡單描述一下圖畫當(dāng)中的內(nèi)容。 圖畫型或名言警句型文章，要非常注意結(jié)構(gòu) 圖畫型文章 在今年的四級考試中，圖畫類作文很有可能被考到。 雙重否定： not fail to、 not illegal、 not unmon、 not unavailable 雙重否定是英文中經(jīng)常運用的表達(dá)方式，由于在平時中文對話中用的很少，隨意對雙重否定的把握就顯得特別的 重要。 從這句話中可以看出，否定加比較表示的是一種最高級關(guān)系。 B 轉(zhuǎn)折： but、 although、 nevertheless、 however 轉(zhuǎn)折是英語四級閱讀的一個經(jīng)典考點之一，掌握這些轉(zhuǎn)折詞對考試非常有幫助。 2. 對比轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系 A 對比： while、 whereas、 on the other hand 在解釋句子題、插入句子題中，一旦出現(xiàn)對比關(guān)系，學(xué)生在掌握的基礎(chǔ)上就能非?？焖俚呐卸ň溟g和句內(nèi)的關(guān)系。 F 條件關(guān)系： when、 once、 as soon as、 As long as As soon as he got the money, he would leave the country at once。 C 反映，體現(xiàn) (果 因 )： reflect、 present、 demonstrate、 suggest、imply D 考慮到： given、 considering、 in view of、 thanks to、according to He succeeded thanks to(in view of) his effort。 B 由 ? 而來 (果 因 )： result from、 derive from、 originate from、 initiate from、 stem