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如下: 2分 條理不清,思路紊亂,語言支離破碎或大部分句子均有錯誤,且多數(shù)為嚴(yán)重 錯誤。 5分 基本切題。有較多的嚴(yán)重語言錯誤。表達(dá)思想比較清楚,文字尚連貫;但語言錯誤較多,其中有少量的嚴(yán)重錯誤。表達(dá)思想清楚,文字連貫,但有少量語言錯誤。表達(dá)思想清楚,文字通順,連貫性較好。 ? 除了以上五個主要標(biāo)準(zhǔn)之外,評分時還考慮以下三個因素: l.白卷,作文與題目毫不相關(guān),或只有幾個孤立的詞而無法表達(dá)思想,則給零分。所計字?jǐn)?shù)不包括卷面上已給主題句。 句子的寫作 ? 詞匯問題:盡量規(guī)避拿不準(zhǔn)拼寫容易出錯詞匯 ? 表達(dá)嚴(yán)重漢化 1) Some one consider that fresh water will not touch it39。s society.(97年 12月, 6分 ) man can live happiness, Man is iron, and food is steel., " Women are half side sky." 幾種常見的句子結(jié)構(gòu) ? 一、 there be 結(jié)構(gòu) ? 二、比較結(jié)構(gòu) ? 三、表達(dá)原因的結(jié)構(gòu) ? 四、否定結(jié)構(gòu) ? 五、含有 it 的結(jié)構(gòu) 一、 There be結(jié)構(gòu) 考生病句: 1. There are many people like to go to the movies. 2. There are different kinds of vegetables can be bought on the market by people. 正確表達(dá): 1. There are many people who like to go to the movies. 2. There are different kinds of vegetables that people can buy on the market. There be 結(jié)構(gòu) ? There is not a moment to be ,時不我待 ? There are many people rushing into the cities every year. ? There are many things we can do to prevent traffic accidents. ? There is no use holding back the wheel of history. 二、 比較結(jié)構(gòu) ? 考生病句: 1. Comparing with the bike, the car runs much faster. 2. The climate in Walton is colder than other cities. ? 正確表達(dá): 1. Compared with the bike, the c