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如下: 2分 條理不清,思路紊亂,語言支離破碎或大部分句子均有錯誤,且多數(shù)為嚴重 錯誤。 5分 基本切題。有較多的嚴重語言錯誤。表達思想比較清楚,文字尚連貫;但語言錯誤較多,其中有少量的嚴重錯誤。表達思想清楚,文字連貫,但有少量語言錯誤。表達思想清楚,文字通順,連貫性較好。 ? 除了以上五個主要標準之外,評分時還考慮以下三個因素: l.白卷,作文與題目毫不相關,或只有幾個孤立的詞而無法表達思想,則給零分。所計字數(shù)不包括卷面上已給主題句。 句子的寫作 ? 詞匯問題:盡量規(guī)避拿不準拼寫容易出錯詞匯 ? 表達嚴重漢化 1) Some one consider that fresh water will not touch it39。s society.(97年 12月, 6分 ) man can live happiness, Man is iron, and food is steel., " Women are half side sky." 幾種常見的句子結構 ? 一、 there be 結構 ? 二、比較結構 ? 三、表達原因的結構 ? 四、否定結構 ? 五、含有 it 的結構 一、 There be結構 考生病句: 1. There are many people like to go to the movies. 2. There are different kinds of vegetables can be bought on the market by people. 正確表達: 1. There are many people who like to go to the movies. 2. There are different kinds of vegetables that people can buy on the market. There be 結構 ? There is not a moment to be ,時不我待 ? There are many people rushing into the cities every year. ? There are many things we can do to prevent traffic accidents. ? There is no use holding back the wheel of history. 二、 比較結構 ? 考生病句: 1. Comparing with the bike, the car runs much faster. 2. The climate in Walton is colder than other cities. ? 正確表達: 1. Compared with the bike, the c