【正文】 o ..., but there is no evidence whatsoever to show... The example cited,while suggestive of these trends,is insufficient to warrant their truth because there is no reason to belivev that the data drawn form... is representative of... As it stands, this argument suffers from three critical flaws. 結(jié)尾 In my opinion,it is more advisable to do ... than to do Taking into account all these factors,we may reasonably e to the conclusion that... It is time to take the advice of ... and to put special emphasis on the improvement of... We should solve the problems that we are confronted/faced with It is high time that we put an end to... Otherwise,...高分作文標(biāo)志:1：是否長(zhǎng)短句交叉；是否會(huì)使用插入語(yǔ)；用詞是否多樣，準(zhǔn)確，形象，盡量使用能夠吸引閱卷老師眼球的閃光詞； 關(guān)鍵詞是否換用，切勿老用重復(fù)詞；下面給出寫(xiě)好一篇作文的注意事項(xiàng)： 1. 適當(dāng)用被動(dòng)替換主動(dòng)，這樣能更客觀的反映事實(shí), 句子開(kāi)頭不要總是用we / I (比如寫(xiě)結(jié)尾時(shí)不用we should pay attention to而用Attention should be paid to. ) 舉個(gè)經(jīng)典結(jié)尾2004年六月六級(jí)作文的最后一段：It is ,therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that. By doing so，its petitive edge will be sharpened effectively. 2. 善于使用插入語(yǔ)，比如說(shuō)把副詞、連接詞等，作插入語(yǔ)放在中間，一般放在主語(yǔ)、動(dòng)詞或者助動(dòng)詞后，兩邊分別加上逗號(hào)。 比如說(shuō)： Other individuals, however, take the attitude that … 3. 一定要學(xué)會(huì)換詞，換形象，具體的替換太寬泛的。這位同學(xué)把老師上課講的各類寫(xiě)作手法和精彩替換和句型都用上了，作文有了很大的提高。 We can, freely, search 用了插入語(yǔ)的寫(xiě)作手法 our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened. 用了非常精彩的被動(dòng) Additionally 替換 In addition / Besides Deliver 替換 send There is no denying that , however, puters can function in the disservice of human beings, in a way, especially the growing violence ,***, porn pictures, AVfilms emerging on the screen , which leads quiet a few net citizens to copying. There is no denying that , however, puters can function in the disservice of human beings, 這個(gè)句子有三個(gè)精彩之處，首先There is no denying that這個(gè)句型，還有however作為插入語(yǔ)， function in the disservice of 替換 do harm to Emerging 替換 appearing ( fading 替換 disappearing ) Net citizen 網(wǎng)民，屬于精彩用詞 As a classic proverb goes that no garden has no weeds. Computers do play a positive role in the development of people39。 Facet 替換 aspect 　以下是30個(gè)最經(jīng)典的替換詞，各位同學(xué)可以參考一下: ,characters, folks替換(people ,persons) 2: positive, favorable, rosy (美好的)，promising (有希望的)，perfect, pleasurable , excellent, outstanding, superior替換good 3:dreadful, unfavorable, poor, adverse, ill (有害的)替換bad 如果bad做表語(yǔ)，可以有be less impressive替換 army of college students indulge themselves in playing games, enjoying romance with girls/boys or killing time passively in their dorms. When it approaches to graduation ,as a result, they find their academic records are less impressive. 滬江四六級(jí)4.(an army of, an ocean of, a sea of, a multitude of ,a host of, many, if not most)替換many. 注：用many, if not most 一定要小心，many后一定要有詞。所以當(dāng)修飾名詞時(shí)用increasing/，副詞用increasingly. has gained growing popularity. Sth is increasingly popular with the advancement of sth. if anything, 或little or nothing替換hardly13..beneficial, rewarding替換helpful,s attention替換attract one39。 1．表示原因 1）There are three reasons for this． 2）The reasons for this are as follows． 3）The reason for this is obvious． 4）The reason for this is not far to seek． 5）The reason for this is that．．． 6）We have good reason to believe that．．． 例如： There are three reasons for the changes that have taken place in our life．Firstly，people’s living standard has been greatly improved．Secondly，most people are well paid， and they can afford what they need or like．Last but not least，more and more people prefer to enjoy modern life． 注：如寫(xiě)第一個(gè)句子沒(méi)有把握，可將其改寫(xiě)成兩個(gè)句子。 2．表示好處 1）It has the following advantages． 2）It does us a lot of good． 3）It benefits us quite a lot． 4）It is beneficial to us． 5）It is of great benefit to us． 例如： Books are like friends．They can help us know the world better，and they can open our minds and widen our horizons．Therefore，reading extensively is of great benefit to us． 3．表示壞處 1）It has more disadvantages than advantages． 2）It does us much harm． 3）It is harmful to us． 例如： However，everything divides into two．Television can also be harmful to us．It can do harm to our health and make us lazy if we spend too much time watching television． 4．表示重要、必要、困難、方便、可能 1）It is important（necessary，difficult，convenient， possible）for sb．to do sth． 2）We think it necessary to do sth． 3）It plays an important role in our life． 4) It is of great significance to … 例如： Computers are now being used everywhere，whether in the government，in schools or in business．Soon， puters will be found in every home，too．We have good reason to say that puters are playing an increasingly important role in our life and we have stepped into the Computer Age． 5．表示措施 1）We should take some effective measures． 2）We should try our best to overe（conquer）the difficulties． 3）We should do our utmost in doing sth． 4）We should solve the problems that we are confronted（faced）with． 例如： The housing problem that we are confronted with is being more and more serious．Therefore，we must take some effective measures to solve it． 6．表示變化 1）Some changes have taken place in the past five years． 2）A great change will certainly be produced in the world’s munications． 3）The puter has brought about many changes in education． 例如： Some changes have taken place in people’s diet in the past five years．The major reasons for these changes are not far to seek．Nowadays，more and more people are switching from grain to meat for protein，and from fruit and vegetable to milk for vitamins． 7．表示事實(shí)、現(xiàn)狀 1）We cannot ignore the fact t