【正文】 the earth bees uninhabitable. ? 在地球變得不適宜居住的時(shí)候，人類已經(jīng)移民到另外的星球上去了。 ? Pornography has developed alongside technology. ? 色情業(yè)隨著科技發(fā)展而不斷蔓延。 ? The government was putting great efforts to develop the IT industry when Inter bubbles collapsed. ? 在互聯(lián)網(wǎng)泡沫破裂時(shí)，政府正努力發(fā)展信息產(chǎn)業(yè)。 ? Without guns, the suicide rate will go down. ? 沒有槍，自殺率會(huì)下降。 謂語 ? Crimes fall significantly. ? 犯罪大幅度下降。 ? What is needed in this country is stricter control of guns. ? 這個(gè)國家所需要的是更嚴(yán)格地管理槍支。 ? What effects tourism will exert on local culture are welldocumented. ? 旅游業(yè)對當(dāng)?shù)匚幕挠绊懯秋@而易見的。 ? That a nation should protect its cultural heritage is very essential. ? 國家保護(hù)文化遺產(chǎn)是至關(guān)重要的。 ? We consider greed a source of evils. ? 我們認(rèn)為貪婪是罪惡的源頭。 ? Gambling causes crimes and destruction. ? 賭博導(dǎo)致犯罪和毀滅。 ? Parents should encourage their kids to take part in more rewarding activities. ? 父母應(yīng)該鼓勵(lì)孩子參加更多有益的活動(dòng)。 ? Community services offer wrongdoers an opportunity to correct their misconduct. ? 社區(qū)服務(wù)給做壞事的人一個(gè)改過自新的機(jī)會(huì)。 ? Gambling and alcohol abuse cause crimes and destruction. ? 賭博和酗酒導(dǎo)致犯罪和毀滅。 ? The penalties for criminals should be severe. ? 對罪犯的懲罰應(yīng)該嚴(yán)厲。 ? Without guns, both suicide rate and homicide rate will go down. ? 沒有槍，自殺率和他殺率都會(huì)下降。 ? 主語 + 謂語 I work hard. ? 主語 + 系動(dòng)詞 +表語 I am smart. 謂 語 ? 主語 + 謂語 + 賓語 I love you. ? 主語 + 謂語 + 賓語 + 賓語 My parents gave me a gift. ? 主語 + 謂語 + 賓語 + 補(bǔ)語 I consider him a hero. 主語 + 謂語 ? Crimes fall significantly. ? 犯罪大幅度下降。 雅思寫作評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn) ? TR: Task Response ? 回答問題 ? CC: Coherence and Cohesion ? 連貫性及一致性 ? LR: Lexical Resource ? 詞匯量 ? GR: Grammatical Range and Accuracy ? 語法范圍及準(zhǔn)確性 雅思寫作高分句子的要求 句子：語篇的基本組成單位 ? 句子結(jié)構(gòu)： ? 簡單句 ? 復(fù)雜句： 并列句、復(fù)合句、并列復(fù)合句 簡單句： ? 只包含一個(gè)主謂結(jié)構(gòu)的句子。 ? Jane and Gee are good friends. ? The Olympic Games can promote friendship and boost the economy of the host country. ? The role of governments in environmental management is difficult but inescapable. 簡單句 ? 五種基本句型： 無論多么復(fù)雜的英語句子都不能離開的五種基本句型。 ? Recent figures of juvenile crime are increasing. ? 最近青少年犯罪的數(shù)量在上升。 主語 + 系動(dòng)詞 +表語 ? Resisting a criminal with a gun is the safest thing to do. ? 用槍來反抗罪犯是最安全的做法。 主語 + 謂語 +賓語 ? Media violence can affect children’s health. ? 媒體暴力影響小孩的健康。 主語 + 謂語 +間接 賓語 + 直接 賓語 ? My parents bought me a gift on my birthday. ? 我的父母在我生日那天給我買了禮物。 主語 + 謂語 +賓語 + 補(bǔ)語 ? We consider greed a source of evils. ? 我們認(rèn)為貪婪是罪惡的源頭。 句子成分 ? 主語、謂語、賓語、表語、定語、狀語、補(bǔ)語、同位語 主語 ? Media violence can affect children’s health. ? 媒體暴力影響小孩的健康。 ? To telemute usually means working at home. ? 遠(yuǎn)程上班通常意味著在家工作。 ? Two million were turned away by American officials. ? 有 200萬人被美國官員拒絕入境。 ? It is very essential that a nation should protect its cultural heritage. ? It is generally accepted that the Chinese civilization is one of the oldest in the world. ? 人們普遍認(rèn)為中國文化是世界上最古老的文化之一。 ? How we can carry forward our traditional arts has bee a hot issue. ? 如何弘揚(yáng)傳統(tǒng)藝術(shù)成了個(gè)熱門話題。 ? Who will be responsible for the senior citizens will be discussed tomorrow. ? 誰對老年人負(fù)責(zé)這個(gè)問題明天將被討論。 ? China arrested 69,780 juvenile delinquents in 2021. ? 2021年中國逮捕了 69780青少年罪犯。 ? Recent figures of juvenile crime are increasing. ? 最近青少年犯罪的數(shù)量在上升。 ? If we are incapable of looking after our own pla, what good is it to go elsewhere? We will be duplicating our mistakes. ? 如果我們不能照看自己的星球，去別的地方又有什么好處呢？我們將重復(fù)自己的錯(cuò)誤。 ? TV， radio， newspaper and magazines had served as the mainstream media before the Inter was invented. ? 在互聯(lián)網(wǎng)發(fā)明之前，電視、廣播、報(bào)紙、雜志是主流媒體。 ? The puter industry has been growing rapidly in the world in the last en years. ? 世界計(jì)算機(jī)產(chǎn)業(yè)在過去幾十年發(fā)展迅速。 賓語（動(dòng)詞賓語） ? Media violence can affect children’s health. ? 媒體暴力影響小孩的健康。 ? Most weight losers decide to have a vegetarian diet. ? 許多減肥者決定吃素。 ? Experts predict that half of the world’s language will be extinct in 100 years. ? 專家預(yù)測世界上一半語言 100年后會(huì)消亡。 ? I don’t know what is needed in learning English. ? 我不知道學(xué)習(xí)英語需要做什么。 賓語（介詞賓語） ? The disease spread quickly across the country. ? You are never a loser until you give up trying. ? I am sorry for what I said. 賓語（非謂語動(dòng)詞賓語） ? Taking a job for a long time is usually considered a proof of loyalty. ? 長時(shí)間從事一份工作通常被認(rèn)為是忠誠的表現(xiàn)。 ? It is ridi