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【正文】 y. Sometimes I don’t do exercise, because I have so much homework that I have no time to do it. I do well in playing balls.Doing exercise can help me keep a strong body, and it is good for my health. Besides, I think it can make me relaxed by doing exercise. So I advise you to spend more time doing exercise every week.Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】這是一篇給材料作文，給Billy回封電子郵件，介紹自己平時(shí)的鍛煉情況，并建議他每周都要花些時(shí)間鍛煉身體。寫(xiě)作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用?！军c(diǎn)睛】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。此處be busy doing sth, prepare for, do well in, be good for, advise sb to do sth等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)一篇短文，談?wù)勀銓?duì)現(xiàn)代通訊工具的使用及看法。開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)?！驹斀狻拷Y(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用，比如：there are……，I prefer to……，Mobile phones bring……，we can……，we should……，So let’s……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫(xiě)作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。開(kāi)頭介紹了我喜歡使用的通訊方式有哪些；接下來(lái)介紹它們的優(yōu)點(diǎn)和缺點(diǎn)是什么，以及使用現(xiàn)代通訊工具要注意什么；最后呼吁號(hào)召大家合理使用現(xiàn)代通訊工具。3．書(shū)面表達(dá)社會(huì)需要愛(ài)，時(shí)代呼喚愛(ài)。但很多人缺乏的不是感動(dòng)，而是一種顯示感動(dòng)的勇氣。你從他/她身上可以學(xué)到什么？讓我們一起分享吧！請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示要點(diǎn)，寫(xiě)一篇文章。Make a list of the persons that you should give a “l(fā)ike” buttonTell us one of the experiences that you clicked a “l(fā)ike” buttonWhat could you learn from him/her? 【答案】I should give my uncle a “l(fā)ike” button. He is very tall and very strong. He punishes the bad people and protect the good people. He always helps others. He is my hero. He works I grow up, I want to be a policeman like my uncle. I want to help people and protect them, so they can live a safe life.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，講述一件我點(diǎn)贊的事情，我從他/她身上可以學(xué)到什么。寫(xiě)作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。點(diǎn)睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。此處give sb sth, work hard, grow up, want to do sth, live a …life等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。就此問(wèn)題，老師要求你在英語(yǔ)課上做一個(gè)以“Less Pressure Makes Life Better”為題的報(bào)告，談?wù)勀愕淖龇ǎc同學(xué)分享經(jīng)驗(yàn)。Less Pressure Makes Better LifeHello, everyone!Pressure is a serious problem in today’s world. Most students in our class are under too much pressure. _________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Hello, my classmates! Pressure is a serious problem in today39。t get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams too much.I was always under pressure, too. My parents wanted me to be the top student in my class. They always sent me to all kinds of afterclasses on weekends.Less pressure makes better life. Thank you.【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們針對(duì)現(xiàn)在同學(xué)們普遍感到壓力大這種現(xiàn)象，以Less Pressure Makes Life Better為題，談?wù)勛约旱目捶?，和同學(xué)們分享一下自己的經(jīng)驗(yàn)。題目中只給出了大概的提綱，其中具體的內(nèi)容應(yīng)由學(xué)生們自己發(fā)揮想象力來(lái)補(bǔ)充，并用正確的英語(yǔ)表達(dá)出來(lái)。文章應(yīng)使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過(guò)去時(shí)，注意根據(jù)表達(dá)的需要使用正確的時(shí)態(tài)，并變化謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的正確形式。但為提升作文檔次，應(yīng)穿插使用并列句和復(fù)合句，或使用一些復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)，如非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞、被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)等。【點(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求，談了自己對(duì)同學(xué)們普遍感到壓力大這種現(xiàn)象的看法，并分享了自己的經(jīng)歷。其次短文中使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱，文章主要使用了一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過(guò)去時(shí)，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞形式準(zhǔn)確。也使用了并列句和復(fù)合句的結(jié)構(gòu)，如賓語(yǔ)從句、狀語(yǔ)從句等。t get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams too much.、My parents wanted
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