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yone should keep it. Yours,Tony【解析】【分析】本文為一篇稿件,需要學(xué)生通過大明和玲玲之間,大明沒有信守承諾的事情,談自己的看法。請(qǐng)你就此事給校報(bào)投稿,以“The Importance of Promise”為題,內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下:簡述事件;談?wù)勛约旱目捶?,并給Daming一些建議。上周末,他本來和Lingling相約一起去電影院看電影,但是他卻因?yàn)樵诩覐?fù)習(xí)考試,把這件事忘了,直到第二天才想起來。3. 誠信是中華民族的傳統(tǒng)美德,也是社會(huì)主義核心價(jià)值觀內(nèi)容之一。開頭介紹了我最大的個(gè)人變化是喜歡上讀書,接下來介紹我小時(shí)候不喜歡讀書,最后指出現(xiàn)在書籍是我的朋友。寫作中注意敘述順序,符合邏輯關(guān)系?!驹斀狻拷Y(jié)合所給材料,可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過去時(shí),人稱為第一,三人稱,注意主謂一致問題,句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu),注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用,比如:When I was……,my mother always read……,Gradually I began to……,Books are……等句式的應(yīng)用。2.每一次變化都伴隨著我們的成長,作為初中生的你,你感覺自已比起小時(shí)候有了哪些變化?請(qǐng)寫一篇文章描述一下你認(rèn)為最明顯的變化?!军c(diǎn)睛】本文要求以“Bikesharing”為題,根據(jù)表格的內(nèi)容提示,寫一篇短文,表達(dá)自己對(duì)共享單車的看法和建議。s known that it has many advantages.,F(xiàn)irst of all, it39。s health.(優(yōu)勢(shì)) However, it also brings some problems. For example, some people throw them away after using bikes. Even some people damage them, and some bikes are stolen.(難題) In my opinion, everyone should try to be civilized and follow the rules of using bikes. As long as we take good care of bikes, it will make our life better and better,and our environment will be more beautiful.【高分句型二】(建議)【解析】【詳解】這篇短文內(nèi)容豐富,表達(dá)了所有要點(diǎn),語言表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確,意思連貫,符合邏輯。s very convenient for people to go somewhere.【高分句型一】Also, it helps to reduce the traffic pressure. There will be less pollution because of bikesharing. Besides, bikesharing helps people take more this way, it39。s known that it has many advantages. So it39。要點(diǎn)提示:AdvantagesBe convenient, less pollution, reduce the traffic pressure(減緩交通壓力)Take exercise…Problems Throw away, damage(毀損), be stolen…Advice Civilized(文明的), follow the rules, take good care of…注意:1. 短文應(yīng)包括以上要點(diǎn),可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,以使行文連貫;2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名及地名;3. 詞數(shù):80100(文章開頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))。最新中考英語書面表達(dá)選擇題(難)一、中考英語書面表達(dá)(含答案詳細(xì)解析)1. 如今,很多城市出現(xiàn)了一種綠色出行方式――共享單車(bikesharing),它因環(huán)保、便捷而備受青睞,但同時(shí)也引發(fā)了一些問題。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)提示以"Bikesharing"為題寫一篇英語短文,表達(dá)自己的看法和建議。Bikesharing Today, as a greener means of transportation, bikesharing is being more and more popular in many cities. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Today,as a greener means of transportation, bikesharing is being more and more popular in many cities. It39。s enjoyed by lots of people.First of all, it39。s helpful to people39。在短文中使用了大量的復(fù)合句、固定句式、連詞及固定短語,為文章增色不少,.如: It39。s very convenient for people to go somewhere.,Also, Besides, In this way, However, it also brings some problems. For example, In my opinion,等。寫作時(shí),考生要緊密貼合表格中的三個(gè)要點(diǎn):首先,闡述共享單車的優(yōu)點(diǎn);其次,列舉共享單車帶來的問題;最后,根據(jù)問題給出個(gè)人建議。要點(diǎn)包括: 1. 變化是什么?2. 變化是如何發(fā)生的?3. 變化后有什么感受?________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________