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row and the living conditions were terrible. People were not rich. They went to work on foot or by bike. But now, there are many tall buildings in our hometown. We can see the clean river and the clear water . Even we can see fish in the water. There are many wide and clean roads. Our life is better and better The environment around us is more and more fortable. People usually go to work by bus or by car.I am glad to see these great changes in my hometown. But I think it’s still important to remember the past. It tells that we should cherish the present life.【解析】【詳解】亮點(diǎn)說明:這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰,內(nèi)容飽滿,表達(dá)流暢。做到:要點(diǎn)要全,表達(dá)要清晰明確,使用短語,句型要準(zhǔn)確,注意避免拼寫和語法錯誤。用的短語、句型:both kinds of、If we choose a boarding school、At the same time、As for me, I prefer a boarding school、pay attention to、來增加了文章的亮點(diǎn)。寫完后反復(fù)閱讀修改推敲潤色,人稱、時態(tài)、單復(fù)數(shù)一致等。、短語、句型。第三段要表述作者自己的選擇和理由。第一段要寫總體交代你即將升入高中,面臨寄宿(a boarding school)和走讀(a day school)兩類學(xué)校的選擇。A hoarding school or a day schoolWe are going to graduate from our middle school, __________________________________【答案】We are going to graduate from our middle schools, and we will make a choice to enter a boarding school or a day school. Both kinds of school have their advantages and disadvantages.If we choose a boarding school, we will save time to study. However, we may have less time to stay with our family. If we choose a day school, parents can know more about our studies. At the same time puter games and TV plays may make a bad influence on us. As for me, I prefer a boarding school. We should pay attention to our studies to get good grades in the high school.【解析】【分析】整體分析:這是一篇給材料作文。注意:1. 詞數(shù)。請你以“A boarding school or a day school”為題。上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容確定主要句子的時態(tài),及句式等重要內(nèi)容。s important to remember these for us all.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文。短文開頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。提示:1. 體育鍛煉2. 上下樓梯3. 交朋結(jié)友4. 食品衛(wèi)生要求: 1. 語句通順,表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確,內(nèi)容連貫;2.短文可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;但要包含以上要點(diǎn)。3.安全對每個人都很重要。開頭介紹了我喜歡使用的通訊方式有哪些;接下來介紹它們的優(yōu)點(diǎn)和缺點(diǎn)是什么,以及使用現(xiàn)代通訊工具要注意什么;最后呼吁號召大家合理使用現(xiàn)代通訊工具。寫作中注意敘述順序,符合邏輯關(guān)系?!驹斀狻拷Y(jié)合所給材料,可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時,人稱為第一,三人稱,注意主謂一致問題,句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu),注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用,比如:there are……,I prefer to……,Mobile phones bring……,we can……,we should……,So let’s……等句式的應(yīng)用。開頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。請你寫一篇短文,談?wù)勀銓ΜF(xiàn)代通訊工具的使用及看法。when you read是由when引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句?!靖叻志湫鸵弧縎o it is important for everyone to keep good eyesight. 所以保持良好的視力對每個人都很重要。語法要正確,表達(dá)要符合英語習(xí)慣,注意時態(tài)、時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。注意作文中必須包含表格上的所有信息,并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。主要從原因和建議兩個方面去介紹。t read in bed or in a moving bus. And when you read you should keep the book away from your eyes for about a foot. And thirdly, do eyeexercises every day. You should eat more carrots and other eyefriendly foods. It will also help you keep good eyesight. I think, you may prevent your eyesight from being nearsighted.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇材料作文,根據(jù)表格中的相關(guān)信息介紹一下如何保護(hù)視力。t read in the sun。t keep your eyes work for a long time. Don39。原因1. 不良的看書習(xí)慣,如在床上或陽光下看書……2. 長時間玩手機(jī)、看電視、玩電腦……3. 學(xué)習(xí)時間長,作業(yè)多……建議1. 認(rèn)真做眼保健操2. 多吃胡蘿卜等對眼睛有益的食物3. ……參考詞匯: 近視 nearsighted 注意: 1. 內(nèi)容須包括所提示的信息,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)自己的真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱;3. 詞數(shù):80100,開頭已經(jīng)給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。以下表格是學(xué)校針對本校學(xué)生近視問題做的調(diào)查表,假如你是校報編輯Jack,請根據(jù)所提供的信息,用英語寫一篇調(diào)查報告,陳述學(xué)校調(diào)查結(jié)果,并表明你自己的觀點(diǎn)和理由。最新 中考英語書面表達(dá)易錯點(diǎn)匯總及練習(xí)測試題一、中考英語書面表達(dá)(含答案詳細(xì)解析)1. 世界衛(wèi)生組織的一項(xiàng)研究報告顯示,我國青少年近視率居世界第一。2019年全國兩會當(dāng)中“小眼鏡”成關(guān)注重點(diǎn),防控青少年近視迫在眉睫。我校學(xué)生的近視問題調(diào)查情況60%的本校學(xué)生戴眼鏡。According