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短文分三段,第一段先介紹了這個人是誰,第二段描寫了這個人身上的品質以及對自己的應選;最后一段結尾。同時語句之間使用恰當的連接成分使文意連貫、自然??梢院唵尉浣Y構為主,輔以并列句、復合句。其次應注意英語表達習慣和漢語的不同,不要按照漢語思維逐詞翻譯。短文應以一般現在時和一般過去時為主來敘述,人稱是第三人稱和第一人稱,注意謂語動詞形式的變化。題目中用問題的形式給予了提示,審題可知,短文應包括兩個部分的內容:首先介紹這個激勵過你的人是誰,他是怎樣的一個人;然后介紹他是如何激勵你的。t talk too much, but always keeps a smile on his face. He is warmhearted and ready to help others. If I need any help for my math exercises, he is always the one that can help me out. As a good student, he studies very hard. In the early morning, you can see him stand near a tree and read English intensively. Few students can arrive at school as early as he is. He also does well in many sports, such as badminton and pingpang. He got the first prize in last year39。2. 語言流暢,字跡清楚。請以 “The person who inspired me”為題寫一篇不少于 80 詞的短文,向校報的英語園地投稿。所以,考生不能遺漏要點,要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式,盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復雜的句式結構以便得到較高的分數?!军c睛】書面表達題既不是漢譯英,也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。而非謂語動詞結構The students have their own plans about how to spend a meaningful summer vacation./ Reading books can make people smart and develop believe that reading can increase ,豐富了短文內容,使表達多樣化,是本文的亮點。m writing to tell you something about our discussion today.The students have their own plans about how to spend a meaningful summer vacation. Half of the students plan to travel at home and abroad. They want to relax and enjoy the beautiful scenery. Thirty percent of students plan to read more books. They believe that reading can increase knowledge. Reading books can make people smart and develop interests. 20% of them plan to take part in social practice activities. They want to exercise themselves and make new friends. I39。你的計劃? (至少一個)?(請你補充)注意:(1)郵件應包含所有要點(2)詞數80個左右(開頭和結尾已給出,不計入詞數);(3)不得透露學校、姓名等任何個人信息,否則不予評分注:社會實踐 social practice activitiesDear DavidI39。比例計劃原因50% 去國內外旅游。你們班的外教David對此很感興趣。在寫作中注意運用恰當的連詞,使文章更加順暢,自然。人稱為第一,三人稱,注意主謂一致關系,構思文章框架,列舉出可能會用到的好詞好句,記住千萬不能漏寫信息要點。 Boys and girls,I’m very happy to speak here and I’d like to talk about my grandma._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________That’s all. Thank you!【答案】Boys and girls,I’m very happy to speak here and I’d like to talk about my grandma.A few months ago, my grandma went to do square dancing after supper. Since then, she has been in love with square dancing. Now, she is much healthier than before. What’smore, she has a lot of friends. However, some neighbors have a plaint against the people who do square dancing. They think that the music is so loud that they can’t fall asleep at night.In my opinion, people can do square dancing because it is a good way to keep healthy. But they should think about the feelings of others and they shouldn’t make a lot of noise.That’s all. Thank you!【解析】這是一篇給材料作文,根據要點提示寫一篇學校英語興趣小組的活動中的發(fā)言稿。你認為人們可以跳廣場舞,但……要求:(1)開頭和結尾已給出,不計入總詞數。有些鄰居有意見,認為音樂很吵,無法入睡?,F在,奶奶比以前健康了,有了很多朋友。(2)從那時起,奶