【正文】 【解析】【詳解】這篇短文內(nèi)容豐富，表達了所有要點，語言表達準(zhǔn)確，意思連貫，符合邏輯。s very convenient for people to go somewhere.【高分句型一】Also, it helps to reduce the traffic pressure. There will be less pollution because of bikesharing. Besides, bikesharing helps people take more this way, it39。s known that it has many advantages. So it39。要點提示：AdvantagesBe convenient, less pollution, reduce the traffic pressure（減緩交通壓力）Take exercise…Problems Throw away, damage（毀損）, be stolen…Advice Civilized（文明的）, follow the rules, take good care of…注意：1. 短文應(yīng)包括以上要點，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，以使行文連貫；2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名及地名；3. 詞數(shù)：80100（文章開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）。中考英語書面表達訓(xùn)練題（word）1一、中考英語書面表達（含答案詳細解析）1． 如今，很多城市出現(xiàn)了一種綠色出行方式――共享單車（bikesharing），它因環(huán)保、便捷而備受青睞，但同時也引發(fā)了一些問題。請你根據(jù)提示以＂Bikesharing＂為題寫一篇英語短文，表達自己的看法和建議。Bikesharing Today, as a greener means of transportation, bikesharing is being more and more popular in many cities. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Today,as a greener means of transportation, bikesharing is being more and more popular in many cities. It39。s enjoyed by lots of people.First of all, it39。s helpful to people39。在短文中使用了大量的復(fù)合句、固定句式、連詞及固定短語，為文章增色不少，.如: It39。s very convenient for people to go somewhere.，Also, Besides, In this way, However, it also brings some problems. For example, In my opinion,等。寫作時，考生要緊密貼合表格中的三個要點：首先，闡述共享單車的優(yōu)點；其次，列舉共享單車帶來的問題；最后，根據(jù)問題給出個人建議。大部分同學(xué)認為初中生應(yīng)該在5點左右放學(xué)，下表所列里大家的發(fā)言記錄。Time to leave schoolActivities to do after schoolat 4:45...do what we want, such as listening to music...注意：（1）短文必須包括表格中所有要點，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；（2）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名和校名；（3）詞數(shù)：80100；（4）短文開頭僅供參考，不計入總詞數(shù)。clock. They can exercise to keep healthy and read more interesting books after school.Some think that students should leave school at 4:45, because they can have more time to do what they want to do, such as listening to music.A few think 5 o 39。clock. Besides having time to play tennis, I can also draw some pictures I like.【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如hold a class meeting，talk about，the result of，keep healthy，after school，have more time to do，want to do，such as，listen to music，in favor of，clean the room，play tennis等。clock./ Some think that students should leave school at 4:45, because they can have more time to do what they want to do, such as listening to ，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達多樣化；同時Most students think…/ Some think…/ A few think…使敘述條理，層次分明，是本文的亮點。【點睛】書面表達題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。所以，考生不能遺漏要點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。請以My Unforgettable Middle School Life為題，根據(jù)下面的思維導(dǎo)圖，寫一篇短文介紹自己難忘的校園生活并描述對未來的期盼。短文的開頭已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。語言連貫、通順。How time flies! My colourful middle school life is nearly ending. Here is what I think about myself. 【答案】How time flies! My colourful middle school life is nearly ending. Here is what I think about myself.In the past, I learnt a lot of knowledge not only from books but also from the teachers. So, I am very grateful to them. They helped me a lot! I also got on well with my classmates. We shared happiness and sadness together. We were like a big family. However, I still have a lot to improve. I didn’t do well in Maths because I gave up easily when meeting difficult Maths problems. Besides, I didn’t have a good sense of time. I used to