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_________________________________________________________【答案】Today,as a greener means of transportation, bikesharing is being more and more popular in many cities. It39。s enjoyed by lots of people.First of all, it39。s helpful to people39。在短文中使用了大量的復(fù)合句、固定句式、連詞及固定短語(yǔ),為文章增色不少,.如: It39。s very convenient for people to go somewhere.,Also, Besides, In this way, However, it also brings some problems. For example, In my opinion,等。寫(xiě)作時(shí),考生要緊密貼合表格中的三個(gè)要點(diǎn):首先,闡述共享單車(chē)的優(yōu)點(diǎn);其次,列舉共享單車(chē)帶來(lái)的問(wèn)題;最后,根據(jù)問(wèn)題給出個(gè)人建議。你們班計(jì)劃舉行“告別初中生活”的主題班會(huì)。要點(diǎn)如下:1. 時(shí)間:6月26日下午3:00.2. 地點(diǎn):六樓會(huì)議室3. 活動(dòng)內(nèi)容:1) 對(duì)老師用話語(yǔ)表達(dá)謝意;2)與同學(xué)交流自己的將來(lái)的夢(mèng)想;3)師生合影,互贈(zèng)留言等等。Boys and girls,The wonderful middle school life will go to the 【答案】Boys and girls,The wonderful middle school life will go to the end. In the past three years, we have studied and stayed together. Looking back at the days we spend together, how sweet we feel. In order to keep the happy times in our hearts for ever, we are going to have a class meeting on the afternoon of June 26 next week. The theme of the class meeting is saying goodbye to our middle school life. It will be held in Conference Room on the Sixth Floor.We are going to have some meaningful activities. To express thanks to our teachers, we each should say a thankful word to our dear teachers. We can chat freely with our classmates and teachers about our plans of the summer vacation. We can even talk about the dreams of our future. Then, we are going to take some photos with our teachers and classmates. In the end, we may give our wishes to each other.Don39。s all. Thank you!【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ),為文章增色不少,如In order to,look back at,be going to,have a class meeting,say goodbye to,talk about,the dreams of,take some photos,in the end,each other,be late等。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ),寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性,也更富有條理。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開(kāi)思維,考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。3.馬上要初中畢業(yè)了,大家都是依依不舍的。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示,寫(xiě)一篇發(fā)言稿。不開(kāi)心的事情; 。s unbelievable that I39。題目中利用表格的形式,展示了文章的具體內(nèi)容,學(xué)生們可以此為提綱進(jìn)行寫(xiě)作。內(nèi)容應(yīng)主要包括三部分:首先是初中三年里的美好回憶;然后是不開(kāi)心的事情;最后展望自己未來(lái)的高中生活。寫(xiě)作時(shí)應(yīng)注意:文章中應(yīng)包括表格中的所有信息,不能遺漏要點(diǎn);第三部分的內(nèi)容中還需要自己發(fā)揮想象力進(jìn)行補(bǔ)充,注意應(yīng)合情合理,與上文很好地銜接。句式結(jié)構(gòu)可以簡(jiǎn)單句為基礎(chǔ),穿插并列句、復(fù)合句以及其他復(fù)雜句式的使用,提升作文檔次?!军c(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文,短文作者根據(jù)題目要求,回憶了自己的初中生活,并展望了未來(lái)。短文分三段,第一段基本是題目中給出的開(kāi)頭,作者使用一句話引出下文;第二段是主體,介紹了過(guò)去美好的回憶以及不開(kāi)心的事情;最后一段對(duì)未來(lái)進(jìn)行了展望。其次短文中使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱,語(yǔ)法規(guī)范,用詞準(zhǔn)確,注意了動(dòng)詞正確形式的變化。語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)確、得體,表達(dá)自然、流暢。4.臨近畢業(yè),學(xué)校在學(xué)習(xí)小組內(nèi)開(kāi)展了初中階段自評(píng)和組評(píng)活動(dòng),假設(shè)你是 Moonlight 小組 的組長(zhǎng),請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面表格中的信息和提示,為你的組員 Tommy 進(jìn)行綜合素質(zhì)的評(píng)價(jià),寫(xiě)一 份素質(zhì)報(bào)告.NameTommyCharacteristics聰明、大方(各舉一例)Hobbies喜歡看書(shū),認(rèn)為看書(shū)有很多好處(請(qǐng)列舉個(gè)好處)Honour他在家?guī)椭黾覄?wù)。上學(xué)途中遵守交通規(guī)則(舉今年,學(xué)校授予了他優(yōu)秀學(xué)生獎(jiǎng)(Award for Best Student)Problems面臨考試,遭受壓力痛苦,他沒(méi)有充足的睡眠.Your suggestions(根據(jù)實(shí)際情況提點(diǎn)建議)…要求:表達(dá)清楚、語(yǔ)法正確、上下文連貫;要點(diǎn)必須包括所有相關(guān)信息,并作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;詞數(shù):100 詞左右;不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名和地名等Tommy is a member of my team called Moonlight.【答案】Tommy is a member of my team called Moonlight. He is clever and he is good at all his lessons. He is so generous that he shares everything with his likes reading because he thinks he can get much knowledge and learn more about the world by reading. And reading has a good effect on children’s growth. At home, he can help his parents do some housework. At school, he gets on well with his classmates. On the way to school, he obeys the traffic rules. He crosses the road when the light is green. Our school presented him with Award for Best Student this year. However, Tommy is stressed when the exam es. And he doesn’t have enough sleep. I think he should go over what he has learned before exams. It’s better for him to manage his time wisely so that he can have enough time to rest.【解析】這篇作文要求我們按照表格里的內(nèi)容介紹一下Tommy的情況,為T(mén)ommy寫(xiě)一篇綜合素質(zhì)的評(píng)價(jià)報(bào)告。表格中涉及的內(nèi)容較多,寫(xiě)作時(shí)要注意表達(dá)的條理性。在最后要給Tommy提一些建議,這一部分應(yīng)該用第一人稱。【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這是一篇比較優(yōu)秀的范文。表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確,注意了被動(dòng)形式的使用,如He was rewarded by our school this year.。短文注意到了長(zhǎng)短句的結(jié)合,并恰當(dāng)?shù)氖褂昧艘恍┻B詞,使文章表達(dá)的連貫。 5.書(shū)面表達(dá)假如你是李明,你的英國(guó)筆友Jack來(lái)信詢問(wèn)你的家鄉(xiāng)是否有霧霾天氣,情況如何。內(nèi)容如下:1. 由于大氣污染程度十分嚴(yán)重,去年已發(fā)生數(shù)次霧霾天氣;2. 人們已經(jīng)意識(shí)到霧霾天氣的危害,正在采取各種措施減少其發(fā)生;3. 你在日常生活中打算為此做些什么。Dear Jack,I’m glad to receive your letter, and thank you for your caring for the weather and my health. Now I’d like to tell you something about the haze. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________