【正文】 3）詞數(shù)：100詞左右（短文的開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；4）不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名和地名等。文中使用了非常好的短語，例如like reading，more than，all kinds of，spend time doing，enjoy doing，the number of，twice a year，be the chief engineer of等?！军c(diǎn)睛】書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。”自創(chuàng)建文明城市文明鄉(xiāng)村以來,淄博人民萬眾一心,眾 志成城,讓人點(diǎn)贊的行為隨處可見。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下所 給要點(diǎn),寫一篇 100 詞左右的英語短文。s more, when on a bus, we actively give our seats to the people in need.Besides, we have formed a good habit of throwing rubbish into a dustbin, never littering anywhere. Furthermore（而且）, we are accustomed to （習(xí)慣于）queuing up （排隊(duì)） for a ticket or something else. All in all, we will try our best to do what we can to make ourselves and Zibo city more civilized【解析】亮點(diǎn)說明：這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。s more，on a bus，in need，be accustomed to，queue up，all in all等。s more, when on a bus, we actively give our seats to the people in need./ All in all, we will try our best to do what we can to make ourselves and Zibo city more ，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使語言表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的最大亮點(diǎn)。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。3．臨近畢業(yè)，學(xué)校在學(xué)習(xí)小組內(nèi)開展了初中階段自評(píng)和組評(píng)活動(dòng)，假設(shè)你是 Moonlight 小組 的組長，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面表格中的信息和提示，為你的組員 Tommy 進(jìn)行綜合素質(zhì)的評(píng)價(jià)，寫一 份素質(zhì)報(bào)告．NameTommyCharacteristics聰明、大方（各舉一例）Hobbies喜歡看書，認(rèn)為看書有很多好處（請(qǐng)列舉個(gè)好處）Honour他在家?guī)椭黾覄?wù)。上學(xué)途中遵守交通規(guī)則（舉今年，學(xué)校授予了他優(yōu)秀學(xué)生獎(jiǎng)（Award for Best Student）Problems面臨考試，遭受壓力痛苦，他沒有充足的睡眠．Your suggestions（根據(jù)實(shí)際情況提點(diǎn)建議）…要求：表達(dá)清楚、語法正確、上下文連貫；要點(diǎn)必須包括所有相關(guān)信息，并作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；詞數(shù)：100 詞左右；不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名和地名等Tommy is a member of my team called Moonlight.【答案】Tommy is a member of my team called Moonlight. He is clever and he is good at all his lessons. He is so generous that he shares everything with his likes reading because he thinks he can get much knowledge and learn more about the world by reading. And reading has a good effect on children’s growth. At home, he can help his parents do some housework. At school, he gets on well with his classmates. On the way to school, he obeys the traffic rules. He crosses the road when the light is green. Our school presented him with Award for Best Student this year. However, Tommy is stressed when the exam es. And he doesn’t have enough sleep. I think he should go over what he has learned before exams. It’s better for him to manage his time wisely so that he can have enough time to rest.【解析】這篇作文要求我們按照表格里的內(nèi)容介紹一下Tommy的情況，為Tommy寫一篇綜合素質(zhì)的評(píng)價(jià)報(bào)告。表格中涉及的內(nèi)容較多，寫作時(shí)要注意表達(dá)的條理性。在最后要給Tommy提一些建議，這一部分應(yīng)該用第一人稱?！玖咙c(diǎn)說明】這是一篇比較優(yōu)秀的范文。表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，注意了被動(dòng)形式的使用，如He was rewarded by our school this year.。短文注意到了長短句的結(jié)合，并恰當(dāng)?shù)氖褂昧艘恍┻B詞，使文章表達(dá)的連貫。 4．假設(shè)你是來自中國的中學(xué)生李華,打算參加當(dāng)?shù)亟M織的國外冬令營,看完了這個(gè)網(wǎng)頁后,你打算給Liz Payne留言,表達(dá)你在冬令營期間想去London Canal Museum參觀的愿望。作文要求：；不得在作文中出現(xiàn)學(xué)校真實(shí)的名稱和學(xué)生的真實(shí)姓名；,詞數(shù)80個(gè)左右。Dear Liz Payne,I’m Li Hua,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Liz Payne,I’m Li Hua, a middle school student learning in Grade 3 in China. I’m writing to tell you that our city will have a Winter Camp during this winter vacation. I hope to have a chance to visit London Canal Museum. From , I know you will have a report “An Update on the Cotswold Canals”February 6th, which will happen during the same period of our Winter Camp. And I also hope to listen to your talk so that I can know more about the Stroudwater Canal, the Thames and Severn Canal. What’s more, I hope to learn more about London Canal Museum and even more about the UK.I’m looking forward to your reply!Yours,Li Hua【解析】這篇作文要求我們以中學(xué)生李華的身份，給Liz Payne寫一個(gè)留言。寫作時(shí)，應(yīng)根據(jù)題目的這些要求，組織語言，串聯(lián)成一篇短文。注意英語句子的表達(dá)和漢語習(xí)慣是不同的，不能逐詞翻譯，而應(yīng)從句子的整體考慮，使用正確的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以及適當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯、短語和句型，保證句子的準(zhǔn)確性和語言的地道。穿插一些高級(jí)詞匯和復(fù)雜句式，提升文章檔次和水平，使表達(dá)更加流暢。首先短文內(nèi)容完整，包含了題目要求的所有信息，沒有遺漏要點(diǎn)。如果分段敘述效果則會(huì)更好，那樣會(huì)使文章的層次更加清晰。短文以簡單句結(jié)構(gòu)為主，也使用了一些復(fù)合句和較高級(jí)的句型，如I’m writing to tell you that our city will have a Winter Camp during this winter ；From , I know you will have a report “An Update on the Cotswold Canals” Februa