【正文】 re, I bought my good friends many lovely presents which is related to the theme of the Palace Museum..等這些句子運用也讓文章增色不少。注意所使用的語法規(guī)則的準(zhǔn)確性和合理性。【點睛】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。注意所使用的語法規(guī)則的準(zhǔn)確性和合理性。用合適的連詞把各句連接成一個有機的整體，同時要用相對高級的詞匯提升文章的層次和文采。s more, I bought my good friends many lovely presents which is related to the theme of the Palace Museum.On early morning of the second day, we went to walk up the Great Wall. It was one of the most famous wonders in the world. Millions of tourists from all over the world visit it every year. After that, we took the underground to the city center, Wangfujing Street .At that moment, we all felt very hungry, so we decided to try Peking Roast Duck. In my opinion, Beijing food was very delicious.During this trip, I not only tried the delicious Beijing food, but also learned more about the Chinese traditional culture as well as the long history of China. Though I felt tired after the trip, it was a meaningful experience and I will never forget it.【解析】【詳解】以 “A Trip to Beijing”為題，寫一篇短文，向你的同學(xué)們講述一下你的北京之旅。（3）要點齊全，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。（5）我的旅游感受……參考詞匯:京津城際鐵路 BeijingTianjin Intercity Railway王府井大街 Wangfujing Street故宮 the Palace Museum北京烤鴨 Peking Roast Duck要求：（1）詞數(shù):80～100個。（3）上午我們參觀了故宮博物院，學(xué)到了許多歷史知識，并為朋友們購買了禮物。（1）5月1日天氣晴朗，我和家人開始了兩天的旅程。天津中考模擬）假如你是天津的一名中學(xué)生李明，剛剛結(jié)東五一小長假的旅游回到學(xué)校。t get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams too much.、My parents wanted me to be the top student in my class、In this way, I feel less stressed out so that I can concentrate more on my studies等等。也使用了并列句和復(fù)合句的結(jié)構(gòu)，如賓語從句、狀語從句等。其次短文中使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱，文章主要使用了一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時，謂語動詞形式準(zhǔn)確。【點睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求，談了自己對同學(xué)們普遍感到壓力大這種現(xiàn)象的看法，并分享了自己的經(jīng)歷。但為提升作文檔次，應(yīng)穿插使用并列句和復(fù)合句，或使用一些復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)，如非謂語動詞、被動語態(tài)等。文章應(yīng)使用一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時，注意根據(jù)表達(dá)的需要使用正確的時態(tài)，并變化謂語動詞的正確形式。題目中只給出了大概的提綱，其中具體的內(nèi)容應(yīng)由學(xué)生們自己發(fā)揮想象力來補充，并用正確的英語表達(dá)出來。Less pressure makes better life. Thank you.【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們針對現(xiàn)在同學(xué)們普遍感到壓力大這種現(xiàn)象，以Less Pressure Makes Life Better為題，談?wù)勛约旱目捶?，和同學(xué)們分享一下自己的經(jīng)驗。t get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams too much.I was always under pressure, too. My parents wanted me to be the top student in my class. They always sent me to all kinds of afterclasses on weekends.Less Pressure Makes Better LifeHello, everyone!Pressure is a serious problem in today’s world. Most students in our class are under too much pressure. _________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Hello, my classmates! Pressure is a serious problem in today39。就此問題，老師要求你在英語課上做一個以“Less Pressure Makes Life Better”為題的報告，談?wù)勀愕淖龇ǎc同學(xué)分享經(jīng)驗。【英語】中考英語英語書面表達(dá)匯編模擬試題含解析一、中考英語書面表達(dá)匯編1．（廣東蛇口育才二中中考模擬）書面表達(dá)初中即將畢業(yè)，同學(xué)們都感到壓力很大。請根據(jù)以下要求寫一份發(fā)言稿，內(nèi)容包括：1. 普遍存在的壓力：同學(xué)關(guān)系；考試2. 我過去的壓力：父母的期望；學(xué)習(xí)3. 我成功緩解壓力的辦法及效果；……要求：1. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的姓名和校名；2. 詞數(shù)80左右，短文的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。s world. Most students in our class are under too much pressure. Some students can39。 I had a talk with my parents and told them I had done my best. Finally, they understood me. In this way, I feel less stressed out so that I can concentrate more on my studies.審題可知，文章中應(yīng)主要包括以下幾個內(nèi)容：首先介紹同學(xué)們普遍感到壓力這種現(xiàn)象；然后講述自己過去曾面對的壓力；最后介紹自己如何成功緩解壓力。學(xué)生們可以從自身的經(jīng)歷和體會出發(fā)，選取生活中常見的場景進(jìn)行介紹。句式結(jié)構(gòu)可以簡單句結(jié)構(gòu)為主，這樣的句式表達(dá)簡潔、明了，易于掌握。語句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文意連貫。短文有如下幾個優(yōu)點：首先短文內(nèi)容完整，包含了題目中要求的所有信息，且層次清晰，文章分成了四段，每一段的中心話題也很明確。句式結(jié)構(gòu)以簡單句為主，敘述清晰、簡潔。短文中使用了豐富的句式，如Some students can39。2．（請你根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容提示，以 “A Trip to Beijing”為題，寫一篇短文，向你的同學(xué)們講述一下你的北京之旅。（2）早上7：30我們乘京津城際鐵路出發(fā)，車程大約半小時。（4）第二天清晨，我們登上了長城，雄偉的長城是世界著名奇觀之一；下午去位于市中心的王府井大街品嘗北京烤鴨。（2）短文的題目和開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。A Trip to BeijingDuring the May Day Holiday，I______________________________________________________________【答案】During the May Day Holiday, I went to Beijing for a visit with my parents. We left Tianjin at 7:30 on the morning of May 1st, and we took the BeijingTianjin Intercity Railway to get there. It was a fast and fortable journey and it took us about half an hour to arrive there. To our joy, the weather was pleasant. And we began our twodaytrip in Beijing.First of all, we went to see the Palace Museum as soon as we got to Beijing. We were very excited when we saw the Palace Museum and took a lot of photos there. We listened to the tour guide, and knew more knowledge about our Chinese history and traditional culture. What39。記敘自己的一次旅行，審題時注意本文使用一般過去時，敘述事實的時候以時間為順序。在發(fā)表你的看法的時候，寫作的時候要注意要點的全覆蓋，不能有遺漏或省略，同時要注意使用合適的連接詞和較高級的詞匯。變化使用多種句式讓文章更有亮點。同時要注意使用合適的連接詞和較高級的詞匯。變化使用多種句式讓文章更有亮點。We listened to the tour guide, and knew more knowledge about our Chinese history and traditional culture. What39。3．（請以 My junior high school life為題,寫一篇80詞左右的短文。、老師、同學(xué)表達(dá)感謝和祝福。 。【詳解】結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：My name is……，I’m glad to……，Our campus is……，Our teachers teach us……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。開頭介紹了我的個人情況，接下來介紹我們的校園，老師和同學(xué)，最后對學(xué)校、老師、同學(xué)表達(dá)感謝和祝福。4．（班級新聞演講比賽1. 這些天我的同學(xué)李佳堅持在老師的幫助下刻苦訓(xùn)練口語；2. 星期三下午的英語演講比賽中，李佳獲得第一名。參考詞匯：捐贈 donate 希望工程 the Project HopeHello, Everyone! 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