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te its 60th this process, volunteer work did a lot of help and now our country is standing in the world just like a the past years, volunteers have helped a large number of people, the old, the young, the poor and the the volunteers know that the road ahead will be long and cragged, but no matter what obstacles stand in their way they will never they have a creed and they believe everything is the creed of volunteer work, you make volunteers keep on going without the creed of volunteer work, you make volunteers hand in hand and be with together the creed of volunteer work, you make volunteers go to the edge of the world and let them know the true meaning of you know what the creed is? Yes, it is love, volunteer work makes people open their mind and let them find the sky is love, volunteer work makes people look into their hearts and let the sunshine love, volunteer work makes people believe that smilers will never lose and frowners will never know something has changed because of volunteer know it for real because it feels so right and the world looks so much is important to volunteer work and volunteer work is important to the whole infinite sky is motionless and the blue ocean is moment is us bee volunteers and try our best in volunteer can be the start of something new and it39。對(duì)于學(xué)習(xí)英語的中國(guó)學(xué)生來說,背單詞擴(kuò)大詞匯量是有必要的,但遺憾的是,學(xué)生們背的大都是單詞的“外殼”,記的大都是單詞的表意或字典提供的大致意思,而基本上忽視了詞在語境中的作用和詞的“精神”。 but a saying which is an infallibility that a splendid case can not leave a volunteer just as a fish can not live without :作者盡量用到了一些高級(jí)詞語和句型,表明作者有一定的英語功底,但是小的錯(cuò)誤頻發(fā),如單詞拼寫,語法問題,句子邏輯,這在某一方面也表明作者的基本功有待提高,繼續(xù)努力。ll get the best presentsmall at first, contained within its banks, flood passionally then merged into the sea, for the sense of moral now, I quite support to be a can never forget these moving scenes: A group of adolecents from Beijing dashed to the City of Wenchuan who gave up their fortable living situations and picked up the heavy burden to save people buried into the ground, while a middle aged white collar who threw away his puter and salary came here to fetch wictims39。re the side that received the help of the volunteers, of couse your issue will be more easily dealt you39。s interesting and pleasant!It help us develop , for individuals, especially those young, to do volunteer work is an awailuabe wany to goin social doing volunteer work, they can meet vorrious people and they may run across all kinds of however, can bee mature and determined by solving these know, no pains, no , individuals will realize that they do make a difference in someone else39。t tell me you are too old to do this believe you are sure to accept my invitation after reading my following explannation of the importance of the volunteer , volunteer work, which has raised public interest and concern, is beming more and more popular throughout the is known to all, volunteer work is not only meaningful but also my personal wete, what39。如果句子之間的多用些關(guān)聯(lián)詞就更好了。專家點(diǎn)評(píng):文章語言流暢,運(yùn)用了修辭手法,展現(xiàn)出一定的語言功底。m firmly convinced that it will not only be a drean for me, but also a drean for people all over China, all over the world, and for the great Global :整篇文章條理清晰,結(jié)構(gòu)完整,總體感覺很好。ll make contributions to China however slightest it may have a dream that one day I39。s like birds without wings, failing to show its talents of flying, It39。t suit our fast steps at we need is a much cheaper and fast way for daily life.(302)愛心用心專心 2第二篇:全國(guó)創(chuàng)新英語大賽優(yōu)秀作文題目:Directions:Read the following paragraph and write a position as stated at about 300 words in 60 position will be graded according to clarity, accuracy and accordance with CRI news, the spirit of Chinese volunteers, from responding to the May 12 earthquake to the 2008 Beijing Olympic Games, not only touched the Chinese people, but also generated worldwide statistics show that china has accumulated about 8 billion hours of volunteer work from 380 million volunteers since 1993 and is going to have more and more volunteers, especially