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t is the harvest seldom enjoys leisure with other farmers even if the farm work is not chooses to live a busy life with reluctance to stop for a devotes all himself to our we are poor, he always tries his best to support our family and afford the tuitions for my brother and the whole family, for brother and me, he never stops working laboriously in the fields throughout the he has got a wrinkled face and white hair because of excessive hard work, looking much older and weaker than any other person of his spite of all this, father never plains to is his full devotion that we39。re living a better life is his full devotion that both my brother and I are able to study at shows much care to us children and my mother as there is any delicious food on the table, he just leaves it to us while he takes the simple one my brother and I fall ill, he will not hesitate a moment to get some medicine for us or take us to see the mother suffers a bad looks after her very never lets mother do any heavy work both at home and in the appreciates him m much that she often praises him as a model husband before is a person full of never plains about our poor is never frustrated by often tells us that everything will be all right if we have enough confidence in to his optimism, we are all confident to face our life and all think that father is not in the least an ordinary plays an extraordinary role in my can39。m pursuing further studies at college far away from miss him very I often see him in my great image is deeply carved in my :本文作者以樸實的語言充滿感情地刻畫了父親的不平凡的形象,分別從四個不同的角度描述了父親的勤勞、奉獻、關愛和樂觀。作者用詞簡潔精確,并能很好地嘗試一些新學的詞匯及表達,使簡潔的行。作者沒有運用太多復雜的句式,但能適當運用介詞短語、分詞結構、強調及重復的手法,恰到好處 地突出了行文句式的變化,使文章更耐讀。d done something wrong。d have stayed mother remarried shortly thereafter, and this man was