【正文】 分相關(guān)的短語（主要是動詞短語中的介詞）不可以省略。三、注意句子的緊湊性，可以將兩句中相同的成分省略，形成并列句，從而使句子更加緊湊。當(dāng)然上文若出自一個幼童筆下，倒不乏天真純樸的趣味。例句：Women leave their homes to take a fuller part in society as time ： time passes, women leave their homes to take a fuller part in take a fuller part in society, women leave their homes as time 、避免一個“I”寫到底初學(xué)英文寫作的人的另一通病是一個“I”寫到底，句首僵硬，缺乏變化。這樣寫倒是無可非議，但若通篇文章都是干巴巴的同樣結(jié)構(gòu)的句子，就顯得呆板生硬，缺乏生氣了。第三篇：大學(xué)英語四六級作文大學(xué)英語語法總結(jié)之四六級作文模板tanhongjun2009大學(xué)英語四六級作文模板Nowadays/recently, the phenomenon/… of …h(huán)as been brought into public `s shocking /…to notice that there are an increasing number of…, and it has exerted a good/great/bad influence on society.[敘述現(xiàn)象]Obviously , It`s more difficult/…for sb to… ,and there are all sorts of reasons for this phenomenon/ and formost ,some students claim that … it`s mainly because…In the next place,some others maintain that…Furthermore ,few people are more cautious about… they hold out that …Mostimportantly , …[分析原因（正面）]Others , however , hold a different point out that …Additionaly …[分析原因（反面）]From my point of view , It`s of great importance for us to do that ,we should pay more attention to it , in order to gain some social `s because of the diffculties in doing sth that we should spare no effort to take measures to achieve this , I`am sure , it will bring about many benefits to us in the future/long run.[自我看法][ About 160 words] 常用句型:A 組：好方/慣促進(jìn)無知（常用長句表達(dá)）① be a good way of doing sth② Make it a good habit of doing sth③ help promote understanding and munication between …and …④ without knowing the meaning behind them , they just do sth for …B組：知道謝序好難同重力（To 的短語）① as is known to all②thanks to③ in order to④ do good to⑤take trouble to / have difficulty in doing sth⑥ agree to/with⑦is of great importance for sb to do sth⑧ spare no effort to do sth2010年6月22日 星期二第四篇：大學(xué)英語四六級作文大學(xué)英語四六級作文：如何寫出高分句式一、句子開頭多樣化英語(論壇)是一種句型結(jié)構(gòu)靈活多變的語言。：Therefore, the college tuition being a much heavier burden on my family, I am pelled to apply a RMB20,000 bank ：由于周圍交通不便利，人們只得步行回家。[7]“不遺余力”。[5]“with+賓語+賓補(bǔ)”的獨立結(jié)構(gòu)。[3]“使事情更糟糕的是”。A Letter Applying for a Bank Loan Sep 12th, 2008To whom it may concern，I am a freshman of Lianhe University, [1]majoring in Applied am writing in the hope that I may obtain a bank loan to support my study in Applied Physics for the following four parents are both laidoff workers, so it’s [2]beyond their power to finance me through the college education.[3]To make matters worse, my mother has suddenly fallen ill and is expecting a major operation.[4]Therefore, [5]with the college tuition being a much heavier burden on my family, I am pelled to apply a RMB20,000 bank loan.[6]I give you my promise that the loan would be used properly.[4]Meanwhile, I’ll [7]spare no effort to work hard both in the study and my future career in order to pay back the would be greatly obliged if my application is I am looking forward to hearing from you yours，Song Xue 【亮點點評】[1]“主修…”，現(xiàn)在分詞作伴隨狀語。說明申請助學(xué)貸款的原因、數(shù)額。五、助學(xué)貸款申請信 1)簡單介紹個人情況2)說明申請助學(xué)貸款的原因、數(shù)額3)保證會合理利用貸款并表明還款的決心【行文思路】本題屬于情景式命題，要求寫一封申請信。___________________________________________________________________________：In modern society, famous brands to some extent are equal to fashion, which have a great attraction to young college ：在世界上或許沒有什么游戲像賭博像賭博的那么有害和危險了，它經(jīng)常會導(dǎo)致一個人破產(chǎn)，還會玷污人的心靈。[9]“而不是”。[8]強(qiáng)調(diào)句型，此處是強(qiáng)調(diào)主語。[7]“遠(yuǎn)遠(yuǎn)超出他們的消費能力”。[5]which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句。[2]過渡銜接詞語，使文章條理清晰、意義連貫。闡述“我”對大學(xué)生追求名牌的看法并提出建議。根據(jù)所給提綱，本文應(yīng)包含如下內(nèi)容：描述目前熱衷于大學(xué)生追求名牌的現(xiàn)象。四、追求名牌1)現(xiàn)在很多大學(xué)生都喜歡追求名牌2)產(chǎn)生這種現(xiàn)象的原因是什么3)你如何看待這一現(xiàn)象【行文思路】本題屬于提綱式文字命題。：Diploma and certificates are still important standards by which many employers measure a person’s ： 在過去的三十年，發(fā)展中國家在許多方面都取得了很大的進(jìn)步，其中包括健康水平的提高?！岸皇恰?。[9]since引導(dǎo)原因狀語從句，表示既定的原因，常譯為“既然”。[7]用于引出“我”的觀點。[5]強(qiáng)調(diào)句型，此處是強(qiáng)調(diào)主語。[3]that引導(dǎo)同位語從句，修飾the idea。randomly意為“隨意地，隨機(jī)地”。闡述“我”對大學(xué)生“考證熱”的看法。根據(jù)所給提綱，本文應(yīng)包含如下內(nèi)容：描述近幾年大學(xué)校園內(nèi)的“考證熱”。So far as I’m concerned, I’d prefer earning the means I must study hard and be a top student, which has always been my all, the task of a student is to in addition to solving my financial problems, getting the scholarship can also prove my ability and is good for my a university student, I am in favor of the freeadmission conduct.第二篇：大學(xué)英語四六級作文一、2010上海世博會The World Expo in 2010 Shanghai will host the 2010 World World Expo has a long history but it has never been held in the 2010 World Expo is an honor for all of the Asians.()ur government has promised that it will be the best Shanghai, as a host city, will have more chances to develop a student in Shanghai, I should learn English well so that I can be a volunteer in the Expo to help foreigners know more about 、如何做一個可愛的上海人How To Be A Lovely Citizen Great changes have taken place in Shanghai and more and more people throughout the world are focusing their attention on Shanghai a citizen of Shanghai,