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de spilt out. One is smiling, feeling glad that he still has the rest half of the wine while the other is sighing in great desperation saying that “everything screwed up!” The cartoon tells us that being optimistic and being pessimistic are two different attitudes towards life. Faced with a challenge, a pessimistic person may feel gloomy and distressed. He considers himself powerless, and plains about it all day long, refusing even to have a try before giving it up in the end. An optimistic person, however, may adopt an entirely different approach. He may not regard the challenge as something that bad。同時讓步狀語從句運(yùn)用得恰到好處,很出彩,再則結(jié)構(gòu)完整,從開頭的問候語到結(jié)尾都很完備。Dear Bob,How are you these days?I’m so glad to know that you’ll e to our city to learn Chinese. You asked me to find a place for you. Now I’ve found one which I think is pretty good. The place is on Fang Cao Street which is near the bus stop. It’s just one stop away from Jianxin Chinese School.There are three rooms, a kitchen, a bathroom and a bedroom. Though it is not very big, only 25 square metres, I think it is suitable. By the way, the rent is 500 yuan per month. I hope you’ll like it. If not, I’ll try to find another place for you.Yours,Li Hua滿分理由本文內(nèi)在邏輯性很強(qiáng),由遠(yuǎn)及近。Dear Bob,Wele to China! You wrote to me to find a place for you.I have found an apartment on Fangcao Street near Jianxin Chinese School. It is on the third floor and there’re three rooms in it: a bedroom, a kitchen, and a bathroom. There is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair in the bedroom. The house is 25 square metres and the rent is 500 yuan per month.Also from this house you can get to your school easily. Just take the bus at the busstop in front of the building. It is only one stop. At last, will you please tell me the time you arrive? Then I’U be able to meet you at the airport, see you.Best wishes !Yours, Li Hua滿分理由本文格式正確,內(nèi)容完整,表述清楚,銜接緊密流暢,時態(tài)語態(tài)使用準(zhǔn)確,特別是結(jié)尾末段適度的發(fā)揮,既充實了內(nèi)容,又符合邏輯,成為本文與眾不同的39。作者在寫作過程中注意長短句并用,還使用了以39。請根據(jù)圖畫提供的信息,寫信介紹住房的情況,并告知住房面積為25平方米,月租500元。 Come to think of it, it is not the foodbutmy attitude towards life that affordsmepleasure and empowersme in facing up tovarious challenges.(219words)一、語法解構(gòu)現(xiàn)在分詞作定語 the bell indicating theend of the last class rang倒裝句(1)out of the classroom pouredall students but one(2)Greasy as some dishesmight be不定式 Iwas in no hurry to make arun for the school canteen狀語從句 I arrived at the canteenwhenamassive queue had formed.在分詞作狀語 Waiting formy turnpatiently。范文:The instant the bell indicating the endof the last class rang, out of theclassroompoured all students but one。在創(chuàng)作范文中,筆者另辟蹊徑,通過大多數(shù)同齡人用餐時的匆忙來襯托“我”的悠然自得,凸顯出在緊張的高中學(xué)生生涯中,作者能夠留有一片心靈凈土,通過飲食來調(diào)節(jié)情緒,更好地面對挑戰(zhàn),表現(xiàn)出樂觀的人生態(tài)度。學(xué)生拿到這樣的題目需要仔細(xì)考慮用餐背后的`東西。而第四段中用一系列的祈使句議論應(yīng)如何傾聽,則更進(jìn)一步地增強(qiáng)了這篇演說稿的說服力。 be openminded to different opinions even though you don’t like them. In a word, good listening can really enable us to get closer to each other.Thank you for your listening!【名師點評】這是一篇感情真摯、熱情洋溢的演講稿,文中大量運(yùn)用排比句型,不但準(zhǔn)確流暢地表達(dá)出題目中所提供的信息,而且體現(xiàn)出作者熟練運(yùn)用英語的能力以及不俗的文采。 students should listen more to their classmates, thus they will help and learn from each other, and a friendship is likely to be formed.What I want to stress is that each of us should listen to others. Show your respect and never stop others till they finish their talk。Good afternoon, everyone.The topic of my speech today is “Being a Good Listener”.Good listening can always show respect, promote understanding, and improve interpersonal relationship.Many people suggest that parents should listen more to their children, so they will understand them better, and find it easy to narrow the generation gap。開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好,不計入總詞數(shù)。注意:對所給要點,逐一陳述,適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,不要簡單翻譯。請你根據(jù)下表中所提供的信息,寫一篇題為 “Being a Good Listener” 的39。在語言方面,要特別注意簡潔明了,開頭要開門見山。行文人稱、時態(tài)運(yùn)用恰當(dāng)、準(zhǔn)確,各個要點間邏輯連貫,行文通順。,以使行文連貫。高考英語滿分作文范文5【全國卷I海南、寧夏】【試題回放】假定你是李華,正在英國接受英語培訓(xùn),住在一戶英國人家里。積累卡片英漢互譯好詞 ,快樂的 birth to ,生育好句I’d like to wish her a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard work, because of which Sulin and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in the US.我祝福它生日快樂并且對你們的辛勤工作表達(dá)我的`感激之情,正是你們的努力工作讓蘇琳和它的父母在美國過著幸福和健康的生活。文章行文活潑,感情真摯,語言表述準(zhǔn)確,洋溢著作者因大熊貓得到精心照顧而對美方人員的感激之情,以及希望自己愿望成真,得到照片的希冀之情。開頭語已為你寫好。注意:詞數(shù)100左右。感謝工作人員。請根據(jù)以下要點給動物園工作人員寫一封信:自我介紹。高考英語滿分作文范文4【全國卷】【試題回放】假定你是李華,從小喜愛大熊貓(panda),一直通過有關(guān)網(wǎng)站(website)關(guān)注三年前在美國圣迭哥動物園出生的大熊貓“蘇琳”和她的母親“白云”。積累卡片英漢互譯好詞1. provide . convenience 好句All these services can bring great convenience to you and arevery ,并且非常的愉快。which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句的使用也很正確。句式,使文章比較出彩。Wele to Baishan Mountain Hotel!Baishan Mountain Hotel is now open for business.500 meters far from the entrance of Baishan Mountain, it provides single person room, of which the price is RMB100 yuan per day and the number is 20, and 15 double person rooms, with a price of RMB 150 yuan per day. It also provides hot water bath service. You can enjoy both Chinese and western food in the restaurant and drink coffee and tea in the cafe. The swimming pool is open for free the whole day. All these services can bring great convenience to you and are very enjoyable. So e to enjoy yourself!Wele to book rooms in Baishan Mountain.【名師點評】本文開門見山,首先點明了主旨。注意:,開頭語已為你寫好。:全天免費(fèi)開放。熱水淋浴。:單人間(共20間),100元/天。請你用英語為其 寫一篇文字介紹。爸爸,請接受我的意見。盡量不要熬夜太晚。選擇了。您的公司沒有遠(yuǎn)離家鄉(xiāng),是嗎?為什么不步行到辦公室嗎?你最好鍛煉,每周至少一次,如在健身房打網(wǎng)球。我想給你一些建議。t ignore that……認(rèn)為……是自然的,但我們不應(yīng)忽視…… is no evidence to suggest that……沒有證據(jù)表明…… has the following is beneficial/harmful to us.==It is of great benefit/harm to has more disadvantages than 英語高考滿分作文5Dear Dad(Mum),You’re so busy every day that you don’t pay much attention to your health. I’m worried about your health all the time. I’d like to give you some suggestions. I hear walking is the best sport. Your pany isn’t far from home, is it? Why not walk to the office? You’d better take exercise at least once a week, such as playing tennis in the gym. Going to swim is also a nice choice, too. What’s more, it’s necessary to have healthy food. Try not to