【正文】 典型的改寫(xiě)，當(dāng)然還可以將題目的名詞性短語(yǔ)改寫(xiě)成句子，如開(kāi)頭也可以寫(xiě)成These data shows how the developingand industrialized countries participated in science and In terms of the number of years of schooling received, we see that the length of time people spent at school in industrialize countries was much greater at years in 1980, pared to years in developing countries.? 說(shuō)明了1980年developing and industrialized countries的情形 ? 用pared to表示比較，（ years were）pared to years, pared to為過(guò)去分詞短語(yǔ)作補(bǔ)充說(shuō)明，需要注意的是注意其邏輯主語(yǔ)? in terms of/in respect of 就某個(gè)方面而言，這個(gè)表達(dá)在范文系列中出現(xiàn)很多次了 ? 注意同義表達(dá) the number of years of schooling received改寫(xiě)為the length of time people spent at schoolThe gap was increased further in 1980 when the figures rose to years and years respectively.? 說(shuō)明了兩點(diǎn)：第一是與1980對(duì)比，差距增大；第二是1990年兩者的數(shù)據(jù)主體二段We can see a similar pattern in the second graph, which shows that number of people working as scientists and technicians in industrialized countries increased from 55 to 1,000 people between 1980 and 1980, while the number in developing countries went from 12 to 20.? We can see a similar pattern in the second graph說(shuō)明圖一與圖二的關(guān)系? which shows接的從句說(shuō)明了該圖的特征，while表示對(duì)比，連接了industrialized countries的變化情形和developing ? countries的變化情形? 表示上升的表達(dá) increase from 55 to 1,000。? C2T4 題目The table below shows the figures for imprisonment in five countries between 1930 and a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown table shows that the figures for imprisonment in the five countries mentioned indicate no overall pattern of increase of fact there is considerable fluctuation from country to Great Britain the numbers in prison have increased steadily from 30,000 in 1930 to 80,000 in the other hand in Australia, and particularly in New Zealand, the numbers fell markedly from 1930 to then they have increased gradually, apart from in 1980 when the numbers in prison in New Zealand fell by about 30,000 from the 1970 is the only in which the numbers in prison have decreased over the period 1930 to 1980, although there have been fluctuations in this figures for the United States indicate the greatest number of prisoners pared to the other four countries but population size needs to be taken into account in this prison population in the United States increased rapidly from 1970 to 1980 and this must be worrying ： 題目The table below shows the figures for imprisonment in five countries between 1930 and 1980.?平凡無(wú)奇的題目，眼花繚亂的圖形第一段The table shows that the figures for imprisonment in the five countries mentioned indicate no overall pattern of increase or decrease.? The figures indicate no overall pattern of increase or 。Fourth, the consumption of fish and chips showed three changes in the general trend of 1970 to 1975, it dropped slowly from the original 300 grams per week in 1970 to 280 grams in on, from 1975 to 1985, it dropped a little bit faster when it fell from 280 grams to 200 then on, it began to rise gradually and till 1990, it had climbed back to 240 ，英國(guó)人在上述所提及的三種快餐方面的消費(fèi)在圖表所標(biāo)識(shí)的二十年里都發(fā)生了或增或降的某些變化。Third, the consumption of pizza revealed a similar trend of growth as that of hamburgers and could also be clearly cut into three periods, though the growth rate was not that rose slowly from 40 grams per week in 1970 to 80 grams in 1980 and then grew faster from 80 grams in 1980 to 130 grams in 1985, the growth rate was even faster and we see a big increase from 130 grams to 280 ，魚(yú)煎薯?xiàng)l的消費(fèi)趨勢(shì)在波動(dòng)中呈現(xiàn)了三種狀態(tài)。Second, starting from averagely 85 grams per week in 1970, people’s consumption of hamburgers gradually grew to 100 grams in 1975 and was then followed by a faster growth, reaching more than 200 grams in around then on, the growth gained a stronger momentum, hitting the peak across the board at 550 grams in ，皮薩的消費(fèi)趨勢(shì)與漢堡相仿，也是很明顯的三個(gè)增長(zhǎng)階段，但是增幅沒(méi)有漢堡那么大。First, the weekly average expenses of highine people and middleine people were 42 pence and 33 pence respectively, a lot higher than that of lowine people which was 14 for fish and chips, highine people spent relatively less, only 17 pence, but the expenses of middleine and lowine groups reached 25 pence and 18 pence, much higher than their expenses on pizza which stood at 12 pence and 8 pence is worth mentioning is the amount of money spent on pizza by highine people which showed only 20 pence, 2 pence more than their expense on fish and ，從1970年的每周平均85克開(kāi)始，人們?cè)跐h堡上的消費(fèi)緩步增長(zhǎng)到了1975年的100克，然后，消費(fèi)量加大增速，到1983年左右已經(jīng)達(dá)到了200多克。在魚(yú)煎薯?xiàng)l方面，高收入階層的支出略低，是17便士，但中等及低收入階層的支出都分別達(dá)到了25便士和18便士，相對(duì)于在皮薩方面支出的12便士和8便士高出了很多。The bar chart shows how much money was spent on fast foods per week in the UK over a span of 20 years from 1970 to 1990 while the graph reveals the trend of fast food consumption over the same period of ，各收入階層在漢堡和魚(yú)煎薯?xiàng)l這兩種快餐上的支出相對(duì)高于在皮薩上的消費(fèi)；曲線圖反映出漢堡與皮薩的消費(fèi)呈現(xiàn)上升趨勢(shì)，魚(yú)煎薯?xiàng)l則呈現(xiàn)出波動(dòng)趨勢(shì)。 上升 has risen steadily 252。? 結(jié)合上句，來(lái)看看如何表達(dá)“最喜歡”，Average ine earners favored hamburgers。? fish and chips表示的一組東西“油煎魚(yú)價(jià)炸土豆片”，表示的是個(gè)不可數(shù)的概念 Average ine earners also fa