【正文】 even free of you feel interested in our club, ⑥please don?t hesitate to join just need to fill in the form and we will contact you as soon as telephone number is 7788666, and if you have any problem, please call us.⑦Thanks for your attention and we are looking forward to your joining!精彩點(diǎn)評：①開門見山，支出此社團(tuán)的宗旨。⑦用模板句提出自己的觀點(diǎn)。③④⑤⑥運(yùn)用了Some…Some…Still others…的并列平行結(jié)構(gòu)，列舉不同學(xué)生的做法及目的。加分亮點(diǎn)：be available for 可供…之用…range from…to…從……到……Be addicted to 沉溺于，熱愛Part 7:2007年12月……What Electives to ChooseNowadays, ①there exist a wide range of selective courses in college which are ready for the undergraduates to choose courses make the students? college life more colorful.②However, as for the purpose of choosing electives, different students have different ideas.③Some students choose more electives just to get more knowledge, so that they could be wellprepared in the future job hunting.④Some students just want to extend their interests.⑤ Some students suppose the knowledge in the text book is should choose more courses in order that they could spend four more colorful school years.⑥Still, others have no definite aim and they just want to finish their study.⑦As far as I am concerned, I just want to learn more knowledge for my future life and don?t care about the scores I have just want to be a man having a sharp and imaginative mind with different knowledge which is beyond my major.⑧So I think the possession of muchmore knowledge can make my future life easier and more ：①開門見山，說明大學(xué)里開設(shè)了很多選修課這一事實。⑥用模板句提出自己的觀點(diǎn)。③模板句引出兩種對立觀點(diǎn)。加分亮點(diǎn)：sharp急劇的，大量的give rise to 引起，使發(fā)生 in question 正被討論 Consequently從此，因而Part 6:2008年6月，也可能帶來危害，我認(rèn)為…….Recreational Activities①Abundant recreational activities are available for people to release their strain and stress, ranging from sports to online activities.②There is a hot debate arguing whether they are good for the public or not, especially for college students.③As for such a question, different people hold different views.④ Some believe that recreation is helpful if we want to keep healthy physically and mentally.⑤ While there also sounds an opposite voice, which claims activities bring many problems example, some young people are easily addicted to the virtual world online, which affects their study badly and may lead to worse consequences as well.⑥As for me ,I hold a belief that recreational activities do more good than do give us a good chance to relax and build good personal relationships with others, too.⑦As long as we can arrange our time reasonably, they will definitely provide more benefits for ：①開門見山，擺出事實。⑤利用過渡句銜接文章。③使用非限制性定語從句，豐富句子結(jié)構(gòu)。加分亮點(diǎn)：get access to 接觸in favor of 贊同vivid 生動的 鮮明的Part 5:2008年12月Limiting the Use of Disposable Plastic Bags①Recently, limiting the use of disposable plastic bags has been brought to popular attention in one would deny that it was a real convenience in our daily life.②However ,what would our society be like with the excessive use ?The sharp increase in using plastic bags has given a rise to such problems as environmental takes many years for plastic bags to be absorbed by soil, ③which blocks the drainage system and causes water pollution.④What ?s worse ,some bags are of poorquality, and even harmful to public health.⑤Awareness of the matter in question is one thing ,but more important to us is the step of how to cope with June 1st this year, using of disposable plastic bags in supermarkets is limited , people e to take environmentfriendly cloth bags and the business cost in supermarkets is cut down as well.⑥Only in this way can we protect both the environment and our own ：①開門見山，提出議論點(diǎn)。⑤利用in my opinion 銜接文章，引出自己的觀點(diǎn)。②話題一轉(zhuǎn)，闡明這個舉措的弊端。加分亮點(diǎn)：undoubtedly 毋庸置疑地indispensable必不可少的，必需的significance意義Part4:2009年6月，目的是………Free Admissions to Museums?①Recently ,more and more museums are open to the public free of doing so ,they can attract more visitors ,and offer the visitors more opportunities to explore and get easy access to the world of history ,culture and knowledge.②However, some people view that the practice also brings problems and are right in a sense.③For one thing ,their main concern is that with more visitors ,it is possible that objects exhibited can get damaged more easily.④For another ,it bees a huge economic burden for museums to run as usual without any profits from the visitors.⑤In my opinion, I am absolutely in favor of this reason lies in the fact that the government should provide more opportunities for citizens to explore and get access to the knowledge , kids and teenagers can acquire knowledge in a more vivid way in the museums.⑥I hope all the people can share the same national treasures in more free ：①開門見山，提出論點(diǎn)。⑤和⑥結(jié)構(gòu)連接詞in the first place 和furthermore 的運(yùn)用，使得論述清晰明了。③用not only..but also 句型介紹綠色校園的內(nèi)涵和外延。加分亮點(diǎn)：embarrassing 令人為難的，尷尬的give priorities to 認(rèn)為優(yōu)先Put emphasis on 強(qiáng)調(diào)Part 3：2009年12月……，我們應(yīng)該……Creating a Green CampusDuring recent years ,①the topic of a green campus ,which has aroused widely public attention, is being more and more popular.②Undoubtedly, a green campus, the indispensable part for the development of college students ,has a profound impact on both individuals and society, for its significance cannot be neglectedA green environment ,rather than anything else, plays a decisive role in the growth of college ,③it should also be mentioned that a preen campus includes not only the places where the students live, but also the mental green surrounding ,the soul of students would be not as pure as we that case ,④in no place other than campus should we attempt to make a green to the seriousness of the situation, it is crucial for us to take effective measures to create a green campus.⑤In the first place, it” s essential that law and regulations should be worked out and enforced by the government and authorities.⑥Furthermore, it is high time that we enhanced the awareness of the students themselves.⑦ Only in this way can we get satisfactory these measures