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相關(guān)的課程,那么不僅畢業(yè)生在職場上將更有競爭力,大學(xué)本身也能跟上技術(shù)發(fā)展并向前邁進(jìn)。Explanation:如果感覺上面的句子單詞太難,我們可以簡化為:For example, 3D technology has bee a hot topic after the movie “Avatar” made the whole world crazy.例子越具體,越國際化,越時尚流行,越好。第2句該段第2句就是舉例。Moreover, focusing on the jobrelated skills can benefit the university itself.另外,關(guān)注工作相關(guān)的技能能使大學(xué)本身受益。其實是對第一段最后一句話,也就是你的寫作觀點進(jìn)行改寫表達(dá)。C. If …not… (反正中心句)If universities do not pay enough attention to such skills, most graduates will not be able to find satisfactory positions in the workplace, leading to a higher unemployment rate.如果大學(xué)不重視這種技能的培養(yǎng),大部分學(xué)生將會很難再職場上找到工作,導(dǎo)致社會失業(yè)率增高。A. This is because…這是因為(想上一句話的原因)This is because most of them, after graduation, will enter the workplace, earn a living, and support their own families.這是因為大部分學(xué)生畢業(yè)之后會進(jìn)入職場,掙錢謀生,建立家庭。Firstly, it is obvious that for most students, the purpose of receiving university education is to obtain practical knowledge and skills which will enable them to bee qualified employees in the job market in the future.首先,很顯然對大部分學(xué)生來說上大學(xué)的目的是學(xué)習(xí)實用的知識技能,這些技能能讓他們在將來的職場中成為合格的雇員。第3句:交代你自己的寫作觀點In my view, ,…My view is that…(表語從句)My view is that jobrelated knowledge and skills should be the main focus of universities.第二段第1句:本段中心句這一段的寫作目的是以理服人。B. “是這樣……還是應(yīng)該那樣……”However, whether universities should mainl