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【正文】 后一段是解決措施。這兩個表達照顧到了結(jié)構(gòu)上的對稱，使句子讀起來工整有致。中文的動詞，如本文中的“暴露”在英文中變成了名詞，且在句中充當(dāng)了名詞。緊接著在第二段一開始，作者用appalling一詞呼應(yīng)了“重要”這個重點。【范文】Information has already bee a vital element in contemporary society. Therefore, the importance of information security has also drawn great attention in the society.As I can see, accidents of information security will bring about appalling consequences. First, the exposure of key information of some big enterprises can be quite a heavy blow not only to the pany but also to its main business partners. Second, the intrusion of personal information is also terrifying because it can ruin one’s fame, reputation and that of other people’s. Furthermore, the accidents of information security will give away critical intelligence of a nation, the result of which is definitely devastating. Thus, in order to guarantee the information security, both the government and individuals should join hands and make a difference. It is expected that the government make strict and sound legal system to bat violation of information security. For individuals, they are supposed to be more cautious and alert so as not to be intruded of their privacy. 【點評】第一段言簡意賅，突出信息安全的重要性。2. 信息安全事故可能導(dǎo)致的危害。最后一段表達了作者對政府官員的希望，提出要樹立一個正直和令人敬重的形象（an upright and respectable image），并將“雷人”話語的負面影響降低到最低（minimize）。在重復(fù)“誤讀”這個信息時，用了exaggerate（夸大）、uglify（丑化）和defame（使名譽掃地）來替代，不僅避免了一詞多用，還挖掘了誤讀的真正涵義。表達“it is universally acknowledged that”語出英國小說家簡【范文】It is reported that floods of stunning words have burst into our society out of the mouths of some government officials. Some of those words are really astonishing and audacious, which arouse significant concern among the public.As for me, I think that there are two major reasons accounting for this controversial issue. One is the misinterpretation of the mass media. It is universally acknowledged that lots of media exaggerate or uglify the facts in order to gain more attention from the public and achieve more profit. So they may have defamed some of the remarks made by the government officials so as to win the mass attention. Another reason is the government officials themselves. It is true that increasing numbers of officials fail to behave appropriately in public due to their lack of social etiquettes and poor education, which result in their improper remarks.In general, I do hope our government officials can build up an upright and respectable image for the public and minimize the negative influence of those stunning words.【點評】第一段使用了被動語態(tài)來描述一個社會現(xiàn)象，使文章客觀。預(yù)測作文（四）Government Officials and Their Words1． 最近不斷有官員爆出“雷人”話語，令人咋舌。副詞如dramatically, greatly, financially,
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