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【正文】 提并論 Zhao’s 11 years’ torturous and freedomlost prison life, thus confirming the saying that, “Money is not everything” .（讓步狀從+非限制性定從+復(fù)合形容詞+現(xiàn)在分詞作結(jié)果狀語+引用諺語） 7. Sunshangxiang stood out as a dazzling pearl from quantities of distinct historical figures, confirming the saying that, ‘Women are no inferior to men’. （現(xiàn)在分詞作結(jié)果狀語與引用名言的完美結(jié)合，推薦） 內(nèi)容技巧二：神出鬼沒的插入語 為嘛要用插入語？短句中用插入語，可以充更多字?jǐn)?shù)，中長句中間用插入語，讓句式更整齊美觀 來看一些典型的插入語 單詞作插入語，如：besides, however, otherwise, therefore, though the other hand, however, puter is not without its defects/disadvantages. ?。╤owever作插入語，作無論如何/但是的意思，是最常用的一個(gè)插入語） 2. We should, therefore, take advantage of the fruits of puters and avoid the opposite facet方面. ?。╰herefore作插入語，使用的頻率也非常之高，同時(shí)，上句中用fruits代替了advantages, 避免了前后重復(fù)并且相當(dāng)之形象） 短語作插入語，如for example, by the way, in other words, so far, as a matter of fact, as a result等等 1. China and India, for example, are neighbours. 2. The United Nations are calling for more environmentfriendly actions, in other words, they are demanding that people all over the world （should）switch to green products and do their bit to protect the earth. 內(nèi)容技巧三：適當(dāng)用被動(dòng)替換主動(dòng) 適當(dāng)用被動(dòng)句，更能反映客觀事實(shí)，如： 1. Attention should be paid to 替換 We should pay attention to 2. Immediate/Instant/Effective measures should/is needed to be taken/carried out to…… 替換 We should take immediate measures to …… 3. Great/Joint effort should be made to …… 替換 We should make great/joint effort to …… 4. It should be pointed out that/It should替換never be neglected/overlooked/ignored that ……I must point out that ……/ We should never neglect/overlook/ignore that …… 5. We are brought up to believe that …… 替換 We firmly believe that …… 內(nèi)容技巧四：關(guān)鍵詞、高頻詞句的表達(dá)多樣性 一遍新、兩遍厭，好曲不能聽三遍，同樣地，再精彩的單詞被你反復(fù)用來用去，語勢就要弱很多。下面就拿某W的Comment中的漂亮長句為例 1. These delicate sentences said by Audrey Hepburn, who is widely recognized as one of the most beautiful women, aim at one topic: it is one’s inner beauty that really counts.（非限制性定從，放在句子中間修飾中心詞sentences, 顯然要比直接+aim at好得多） 2. Backham, who has been a legend in his time, will definitely be an immortal, even though he might no longer be striving on the sparkling pitch.（一個(gè)非限制性定從+ 一個(gè)讓步狀語從句） 3. However, flows of advertisements will not only impact the producer’s image, but also make the potential customers bored and even spoil the advertising program.（not only …… but also也是寫長句時(shí)的主力 軍?。 ?. Wherever they go or whatever they do, they always bear in mind that they are messengers of peace, representing China.（bear……in mind, 一個(gè)賓從amp?！∫趦?nèi)容部分得高分，用到的技巧大約有這幾種：長短句交叉、使用插入語、用詞多樣準(zhǔn)確生動(dòng)又形象、關(guān)鍵詞靈活換用不重復(fù)、句型使用多樣表述地道 內(nèi)容技巧一：華麗麗的長短句 寫長短句的宗旨，一張一弛，文武之道，一長一短，長句在前短句后，通篇長句累死讀者，通篇短句不夠刺激，長句華麗短句簡潔，穿插著用方為王道 這類句子是跟著你行文內(nèi)容走的，沒有什么固定公式可以套，其精髓在于多用從句，順帶著插入一些短語進(jìn)一步修飾?！ 《?、文章內(nèi)容類： 光有個(gè)漂亮的開頭還遠(yuǎn)遠(yuǎn)不夠
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