【正文】 ure given in the chart, we can e to a conclusion that the total tobacco consumption will decrease. There are reasons for the dropping consumption. First, more and more people believe smoking do 中國(guó)最大的管 理 資料下載中心 (收集 \整理 . 大量免費(fèi)資源共享 ) 第 7 頁(yè) 共 50 頁(yè) harm to health, waste money. So a lot of people begin to give up smoking. Second, forbidding smoking in public areas cause people conscious that smoking is a bad habit. Therefor, I believe more and more will give up smoking with the advancement of society. 樣題 6 From the pictures, we can draw a conclusion that the tobacco consumption in the world is rather high. In 1994, the total product of tobacco is billion pounds and in 1995, is billion pounds. There are a great number of smokers in the world— the number of billion. That is to say, of the billion people, 20 percent have the habit of smoking. For the sake of high tobacco consumption, 2020 billion dollars are lost and 3000 thousand people lose their lives every year. In my opinion, the consumption of tobacco will decrease as more and more people have e to know the damage of the tobacco. This can be found in the pictures. Smoking leads to many problems such as lung cancer, economic loss and pollution of the air. For aboveconsumption of tobacco will decrease and all the problem it causes will be solved. 中國(guó)最大的管 理 資料下載中心 (收集 \整理 . 大量免費(fèi)資源共享 ) 第 8 頁(yè) 共 50 頁(yè) 評(píng)語(yǔ) :樣題 5 和樣題 6 這兩篇作文內(nèi)容符合要求 ,包括對(duì)各圖的說(shuō)明 ,對(duì)趨勢(shì)的預(yù)測(cè)及理由 ,表達(dá)基本清楚 ,但結(jié)構(gòu)與用詞錯(cuò)誤較多 ,數(shù)字表達(dá)有誤 ,長(zhǎng)度符合要求 .得 8 分 樣題 7 Today, many countries product all kinds of tobacco. Almost every shop has tobacco. In 1994, the tobacco consumption has get to billion pounds. So much tobacco can be sell out every year. The population of the world is 58 million. But, smokers in the world have 11 million. It is about 20% of world population. We all know, smoking has a great harm to people. Every year about 300 million people died desease that deprive from smoking. Smoking use much money every year. About 2020 million dollars. We can see, smoking is so much harmness. So, we advocate all of people have‘t smoke. In 1995, the tobacco consumption has 142 million pounds, much less that in 1994. Because many people of smoking already think the smoking has no advantage, only bring illness. We hope all of the world, it is no people smoke in the future. 樣題 8 On Smoking In the whole world the tobacco consumption has being decrease. According to the figure given in the data, we can see tobacco consumption was about 中國(guó)最大的管 理 資料下載中心 (收集 \整理 . 大量免費(fèi)資源共享 ) 第 9 頁(yè) 共 50 頁(yè) billion pounds in 1994, and about 142 billion pounds in 1995. Why are there on the decrease? I think there are two reasons. In the first place, smoking is do harm to people health. For example, it is may be responsible for lung cancer. There are about 300 thousand people died of smoking every year. Secondly, smoking cost a great deal. Every year money spend on smoking is about 2020begin to give up smoking. But I must point out that smoker all over the world still account for 20%, about 11we must educate people give up smoking. 評(píng)語(yǔ) :樣題 7和樣題 8內(nèi)容基本符合要求 ,語(yǔ)句尚可理解 ,但結(jié)構(gòu)與用詞錯(cuò)誤多 ,有些是嚴(yán)重錯(cuò)誤 ,數(shù)字表達(dá)錯(cuò)誤 ,長(zhǎng)度符合要求 .得 5 分 樣題 9 In wave of economic reform, more and more people have realize the damage of smoking. It is obvious. Smoking has not any benefit to man‘s health, but as is know to all, everything has two sides. The taxs of tobacco are main resource of nation finasal. So the government of all country have to permit the product of tobacco. According to the figure, we can see the sum production of tobacco very great, billion pounds 中國(guó)最大的管 理 資料下載中心 (收集 \整理 . 大量免費(fèi)資源共享 ) 第 10 頁(yè) 共 50 頁(yè) in 1994, 142 billion pounds in 1995. The number of smoking man is 20% during world population. Smoking damages not only human‘s body but also waste lot of money. For example, there are 2020 billion dollar spending in tobacco and 300 million people die in smoking. I think the tendency of tobacco consumprion have be taken down. I should try my best to depress the damage of smoking. 樣題 10 It is said that smoking do harm. I realy agree with it. Everyone in world know that smoking is not good habit, at the same time, so many warns with the wordsNo Smokingeverywhere. But on the other hand, there is lots of people are fond of smoking. as a result, every year about 200 billion dollars are to smoking, as well as 30 million people dies from it. How can these more than one billion people about one fifth ration give up smoking? It is always problem. In word, smoking is harmful, we should give up. 評(píng)語(yǔ) :樣題 9和樣題 10這兩篇作文內(nèi)容與本題要求部分有關(guān) ,除事先備好但與要求不符的語(yǔ)句外 ,結(jié)構(gòu)與用詞錯(cuò)誤多且嚴(yán)重 ,詞不達(dá)意 ,條理不清 ,不成篇章 ,數(shù)字表達(dá)混亂 .得 2 分 . 中國(guó)最大的管 理 資料下載中心 (收集 \整理 . 大量免費(fèi)資源共享 ) 第 11 頁(yè) 共 50 頁(yè) 樣題 11 The Tobacco Is Harmful To Us Some of us are favour of smoking and consider that is enjoyable. In actually, it isn‘t. The are fifty ut the smoker is twenty percent, about eleven thousand million people. Because of this, the circle around of us is pollusion, the health of human is very had. There are three hundred million people die for smoking every year. Moreover 2020 thousand million lost every year. 評(píng)語(yǔ) :語(yǔ)句幾乎無(wú)一正確 ,數(shù)字表達(dá)混亂 ,長(zhǎng)度不合要求 .得 0分 . 樣題 12 From t