【正文】 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Hello, my classmates! Pressure is a serious problem in today39。就此問題，老師要求你在英語課上做一個(gè)以“Less Pressure Makes Life Better”為題的報(bào)告，談?wù)勀愕淖龇?，與同學(xué)分享經(jīng)驗(yàn)。t talk too much, but always keeps a smile on his face.、If I need any help for my math exercises, he is always the one that can help me out.、He also does well in many sports, such as badminton and pingpang.、He is my idol and I wish I could be a student as good as he 。用詞準(zhǔn)確，語言得體，句式結(jié)構(gòu)完整，符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。各部分內(nèi)容安排合理，主次分明?！军c(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求，介紹了一個(gè)曾經(jīng)激勵過自己的人。為提升文章檔次，應(yīng)使用高級詞匯以及復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)。應(yīng)該從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)入手，寫完整的句子。寫作時(shí)應(yīng)注意：首先要符合題目要求，包括題目中要求的所有信息，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意上下文的銜接。學(xué)生們可以這兩個(gè)問題為提綱，發(fā)揮想象力，充實(shí)細(xì)節(jié)信息，組織語言，連貫成文。s pingpang petition.You can see the good personality and the spirit of persistence in this small body. He is my idol and I wish I could be a student as good as he is.【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以The person who inspired me為題，介紹一個(gè)曾經(jīng)激勵過你的人。【答案】The person who inspired meMany people around gave me deep impressions. They helped me, encouraged me and inspired me. But the person who inspired me most, I think, is my friend Wang Peng. Wang Peng is a small thin boy with two big black eyes. He doesn39。要點(diǎn)： 1. What kind of person is he/ she？2. How did he/ she inspire you？要求： 1. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名和校名。6． “inspire” 一詞的漢語解釋是“激勵；鼓舞；賦予靈感；或啟發(fā)思考”等。s good for us to do some sports.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇給材料作文，本文已經(jīng)給出了主要寫作要點(diǎn)，動筆前要先認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，然后圍繞要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．寫作中，應(yīng)注意描述的全面性，盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上；結(jié)合材料內(nèi)容，可知本文主要是第三人稱，一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)進(jìn)行敘述．語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣．適當(dāng)使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系．【點(diǎn)睛】這篇短文用到了一些好的句型：They also think kids can help do housework to learn some life skills. But the kids disagree. They think it39。s important to take summer courses. They also think kids can help do housework to learn some life skills. But the kids disagree. They think it39。（4）詞數(shù):不少于80。（2）開頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。 opinionsGet ready for high school. Do some housework…Kid39。根據(jù)下表提示,寫一篇英語短文,描述他們的不同看法,同時(shí)發(fā)表你自己對暑假安排的觀點(diǎn)。【點(diǎn)睛】本文首先開篇功能句Thank you for your ，運(yùn)用多種連接詞，比如because，Besides，To realize my dream, 等使文章連貫性強(qiáng)，長短句結(jié)合，讀起來朗朗上口，不失為一篇佳作。為了實(shí)現(xiàn)自己的夢想，正在為此作出努力?！驹斀狻渴紫然卮鹇殬I(yè)是教師。Dear Bill,Thank you for your letter. I am glad to tell you about my dream job. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua【答案】例文Thank you for your letter. I am glad to tell you about my dream job. Teaching is my dream job because I would like to share my knowledge with my students and help them solve problems. I am outgoing and helpful. I get on well with children. Besides, the school39。請認(rèn)真閱讀下面的郵件, 根據(jù)信中的內(nèi)容和你的實(shí)際情況給他寫封回信。除此之外，中間也使用了一些連接詞，例如but，so，because of等，使文章更加通順?！军c(diǎn)睛】文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，符合邏輯，先表明自己觀點(diǎn)，然后闡述事情，提出自己的觀點(diǎn)和建議。然后仔細(xì)闡述了事情發(fā)生的經(jīng)過。信守承諾是中華民族的傳統(tǒng)美德，在寫作過程中，注意文章結(jié)構(gòu)，先寫出大明和玲玲之間的事情，然后再說自己對此的看法。注意：詞數(shù)80—100；行文連貫，邏輯合理；文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名和人名； 文章的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。因此，Lingling很生氣，并且不愿接受Daming的道歉。而你的朋友Daming最近卻被誠信危機(jī)所困擾。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。點(diǎn)睛：書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。d like to choose several good books and read them carefully./ Second, health is the most important./Third, it39。d like to do，help me open my mind，at least，be interested in，during the holiday，plan to do，join in，be kind to someone in need，pay more attention to，be close to nature，search the Internet等。s all. Thank you.【解析】亮點(diǎn)說明：這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。m interested in