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Chinese Summer Camp will be held in our school from July 10th to July 30th this summer. The activities of this Chinese Summer Camp are as follows:First, you will attend Chinese classes, learning the meaning of Chinese characters. Second, you will take part in different parties, knowing the history of China and Chinese culture, especially Chinese holidays, which will impress you deeply.What’s more, you will have chances to visit some museums and the Great Wall. What you should prepare is a pair of shoes for the visit. If you have any questions, please tell me. I am looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua【解析】【詳解】:這是一篇提綱類書面表達,只給了一些要點提示,但都不很明確。用了because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句,增加了文章的亮點。寫作亮點:短文用了一些短語和句式,如:e to an end結(jié)束;on the way在途中;get close to nature親近大自然;volunteer to do something自愿做某事;help sb to do sth幫助某人做某事;take part in sth參加活動。文章主要內(nèi)容為計劃的書寫,主要使用一般將來時態(tài)。m sure I39。【點睛】點睛:首先認真審題,看清題目中的要求和要點;然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容,列出寫作要點及每個要點中可能要用到的表達;然后緊扣要點,動筆寫作,在寫作過程中,要注意句與句、段與段之間的過渡,必要時可適當(dāng)運用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞,使文章過渡平穩(wěn),自然流暢;最后,要仔細檢查有無單詞拼寫錯誤、標點符號誤用等,還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理,有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言,大小寫是否正確,詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。同時要注意語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu),造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達習(xí)慣;盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式,最好不要寫太長的復(fù)合句;盡量選取簡單的易拼寫的單詞,確保正確率;詞匯、句式要豐富多樣,可以為文章增色添彩。動筆前要認真閱讀材料,不可遺漏要點,并可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。文章時態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時,人稱主要為第一人稱。6.D解析:Dear Editorial Office,I am writing to remend as The Most Popular Teacher.She is Miss Zhang.She is my English teacher. She is in her forties. Her small round glasses make her look smart. She often works to high standards and is willing to work extra hours. She is kind and helpful, too. She always helps us with our study. She loves jogging, so she looks healthy. To my surprise, she has donated blood many times since 2001. She has also decided to donate her body for medical research after her death. I really love her and I want to be a teacher like her in the future. I think Miss Zhang is the most suitable person to be the Most Popular Teacher.I hope that you agree with me. Yours sincerely,Beth,【解析】【詳解】本文是一篇給材料作文。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。同時還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞,使句子銜接自然。一切都準備就緒,就可以動筆寫作了,在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。通常書面表達給出的話題是開放的,而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮,因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。構(gòu)思提綱。審好題是寫好書面表達的關(guān)鍵。增強邏輯關(guān)系,增加上下文意思連貫,用詞準確,句子通順,行文連貫。根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定并準確運用時態(tài),上下文意思連貫,符合邏輯,可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。5.D解析:Dear Angel,How are you doing? I’m writing to tell you that we received the books that you bought for us. We are grateful to you and all of us are very happy。同時要注意語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu),造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達習(xí)慣;盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式,最好不要寫太長的復(fù)合句;盡量選取簡單的易拼寫的單詞,確保正確率;詞匯、句式要豐富多樣,可以為文章增色添彩。首先認真審題,看清題目中的要求和要點;然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容,列出寫作要點及每個要點中可能要用到的表達;然后緊扣要點,動筆寫作。4.E解析:例文:The smartphone is being more and more popular nowadays .I also have a smartphone .I usually use it to send text messages, play games,watch videos, listen to music and learn English .It is very useful and convenient. In fact,the smartphone makes my life colorful. However ,every coin has two I spend too much time playing games on the smartphone and get bad results in exams. So I think we students should use our smartphones properly and don’t use them too much .We should pay more attention to our studies.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇給材料作文,要求根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示,寫一篇英語短文,談一談你對智能手機的看法。(2)To do voluntary labor is a good chance for them to learn how to do difficult work. 做義務(wù)勞動是他們學(xué)習(xí)如何做困難工作的好機會。亮點句型:(1)A strong argument has taken place among students since our school made students do voluntary labor. 自從我們學(xué)校讓學(xué)生做自愿勞動以來,在學(xué)生中發(fā)生了一場激烈的爭論。3.A解析:A strong argument has taken place among students since our school made students do voluntary labor.Some students think it is a good way of education. Now most families have only one child. They never do hard work. To do voluntary labor is a good chance for them to learn how to do difficult work. It can also help them understand and respect the cleaners.But others have different points. They think it is easy for them to get sick. They don’t think it is students'jobs. Cleaning the classroom every day is enough.【解析】【詳解】閱讀題干要求,這是一篇看法類的作文,那么首先得點明討論的話題,然后分別寫出不同人群對此事的看法,時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主。根據(jù)材料可知本文主要是應(yīng)用第一,三人稱,一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)和過去時態(tài),注意標點符號及大小寫等問題,不要犯語法錯誤。s writer is called Charlotte Bronte, who was born in England in had two sisters and one brother, but unfortunately their mother died when they were very young. Actually Jane Eyre is a book whose theme is of love. In the story. Jane Eyre lived a hard life, but she was selfconfident and perseverant. In her heart, there is always a mind that if you hold a belief and stick to it, you will eventually achieve your dream.【解析】這是一篇圖表,要求介紹自己讀過的一本書。文中用到了一些好的句型:The air is badly polluted because there are more cars on the road these days.;We can plant more trees and more trees in order to live better and more 。表述靈活。2.內(nèi)容上應(yīng)注意描述的全面性;語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu),造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達習(xí)慣。要求中已經(jīng)給出了部分提示,動筆先應(yīng)先認真閱讀提示,確定寫作內(nèi)容。請用英語寫一篇約100詞的短文。...注意:(1)短文必須包括表格中所有要點,并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;(2)文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名和校名;(3)詞數(shù):80100;(4)短文開頭僅供參考,不計入總詞數(shù)。do what we want, such as listening to music...at 4:45Time to leave schoolActivities to do after school大部分同學(xué)認為初中生應(yīng)該在5點左右放學(xué),下表所列里大家的發(fā)言記錄。3. 提出至少2條建議。 I’m the mother of a fourteenyear –old . I have a rule for my daughter :be among the top of 5 students or get punished in one way or another . She has been doing very well in school ,but some of my friends keep telling me that I put too much pressure on her .Am I wrong ? 寫作要點:1. 表明自己的看法。要點包括: 1. 變化是什么?2. 變化是如何發(fā)生的?3. 變化后有什么感受?___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________18. 寫作假定你是李華,在一位名叫Tiger Mom的學(xué)生家長的博客上,你看到以下內(nèi)容。;;;;(自主發(fā)揮,至少兩點)參考詞匯: civilized 文明的 make joint efforts 共同努力 obey 遵守16.(題文) 書面表達在中學(xué)生機器人大賽上,出現(xiàn)了一種專門照顧老人的新型家用智能機器人,它的主要功能有:1. 定時做飯、洗衣服; 2. 陪老人聊天、下棋、做運動;3. 處理緊急情況(如:撥打120)假如你是該機器人的發(fā)明者,請你介紹這個產(chǎn)品,并談?wù)勀愕奈磥碓O(shè)想