【正文】 he full moon， share our stories等。m glad to hear from you. Now let me introduce the MidAutumn Festival to you. The MidAutumn Festival falls on the 15th of the 8th lunar month. It’s a big day for us Chinese people. All the family members get together to celebrate the festival. In the evening, we usually have a big dinner. And then we go outside and enjoy the full moon. The moon that night looks the brightest. With the beautiful moon up in the sky, we sit together to eat mooncakes, and share our stories.For me, the best part is to enjoy the moon and eat mooncakes. Mooncakes taste very delicious. They look like the moon, big and round.Yours,Li Hua【解析】【詳解】本篇寫作是以書信的方式向筆友介紹中國的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日中秋節(jié)，要用一般現(xiàn)在時來寫。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯誤外，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。修改潤色。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。初寫短文。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。審題時要注意試題的要求，抓住要點，詞數(shù)符合要求?！军c睛】寫作時可以從以下幾個方面做起：認真審題。亮點說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達符合英語習慣，準確運用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點詞句，如bought sth for sb, be grateful to, be going to do, share sth with sb, be fond of, as far as I am concerned, on the one hand...on the other hand, from to以及we had a reading party,which was held on Friday in our reading room中which引導非限制性定語從句。Last Friday，we had a reading party, which was held on Friday in our reading room. Then we are going to hold an activity to share the feeling with others at 3:00 on Friday afternoon. All of us are fond of buying books on the Internet. We are going to buy some books on the Internet next month. As far as I am concerned, on the one hand, the books on the Internet are cheaper than those in the bookstore. On the other hand, there are all kinds of books, so we needn’t go from one bookstore to another .Best wishes!Yours,Cathy【解析】【詳解】本文屬于材料作文，向外教介紹俱樂部中讀書交流會的活動，并且告訴外教同學們現(xiàn)在喜歡網(wǎng)購圖書并闡述網(wǎng)購圖書的好處。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯誤外，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。修改潤色。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。初寫短文。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。審題時要注意試題的要求，抓住要點，詞數(shù)符合要求?！军c睛】寫作時可以從以下幾個方面做起：認真審題。亮點說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達符合英語習慣，準確運用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點詞句，如be supposed to, be kind to, keep your words, what’s more, in one’s opinion, develop bad habits, be rude to, be strict with, make a difference to以及it is a good habit to be honest中it作形式主語。5．D解析：Dear Sam,Haven’t written to you for a long time! As you know, family rules are an important part of you Chinese traditional culture. Today I’m writing to tell you something about my family rules.There are many rules that we have to follow. First, you should respect the old and love the young. You are also supposed to be kind to other. Next, it’s a good habit to be honest and keep your words. What’s more, you should keep studying , go to bed and get up on time. You mustn’t stay up too late.In my opinion, every family must keep rules and children shouldn’t develop bad habits, like telling lies and be rude to others. We should be strict with ourselves.The family rules also make a great difference to me. I learn to think about others’ feelings and Chinese traditional culture. What about you? Do you have any family rules? I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon!Yours,Li Hua【解析】【詳解】本文屬于材料作文，向山姆介紹你的家規(guī)并向他展示一個溫情的中國家庭。Because they said it was convenient for them and it could take them less time to go to school. They also said in the morningthe traffic was busy and the students couldn’t ride electric bicycles ，理由也很充分。時態(tài)運用正確，書寫工整規(guī)范。并且要圍繞主題適當發(fā)揮。觀點分明，談及理由按照要求至少要各寫兩點。根據(jù)所給要點可知，本文主要以一般過去時態(tài)書寫。3．A解析：At present only a few students do some reading after class. Here are several reasons. First of all, quite a lot of students are burdened with too much homework. Still others haven’t formed a habit of reading. They would rather spend their spare time on TV or on the Internet. However, reading has many benefits. Through reading we can learn more about the world. Besides, it can help us think better. Last but not least, reading can make our life more colourful. Here are my suggestions. For one thing, teachers are supposed to limit the amount of our homework so that we can have more time to read. For another, it’s a good idea to form reading clubs and learn from each other.【解析】 略4．B解析：Last week， our class had a discussion about whether junior students could ride electric bicycles to go to students of our class agreed with it， because they said it was convenient for them and it could takethem less time to go to school. But the other 35 students didn’t agree with them. They said it was not safe forthe junior students to get to school by electric bicycles， for they were too young. They also said in the morningthe traffic was busy and the students couldn’t ride electric bicycles quickly.【解析】試題分析：本題要求以初中生能否騎電動自行車上學進行了一次討論。：高分短語：feel satisfied；feel upset；e true；set a practical goal；both…and…；keep patient。：例文用第一人稱來敘述主要內(nèi)容；時態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時為主，主要講述如何實現(xiàn)自己的目標（Firstly,…More importantly,…Besides,…Finally,…）。2．A解析：As we know, life is not always smooth. Sometimes we may feel satisfied and sometimes we may feel upset. In order to make our dream e true, firstly we should set a practical goal. But just having a goal is not enough. More importantly, we need to study hard to make ourselves stronger. Besides, as teenagers, it is necessary for us to take part in more social activities. We can learn a lot from each other by joining in those social activities. However, there will be many difficulties in both our daily life and study, so please keep patient and be brave to face these challenges. Finally, all our efforts are meaningful and one day our dream will be achieved.【解析】【詳解】：這是一篇材料作文。其次短文中使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱，語法規(guī)范，語言準確，語句通順，符合英語的表達習慣。首先短文的內(nèi)容完整，文章根據(jù)題目中列出的圖表，補充了具體的寫作內(nèi)容，從應(yīng)該做的和不應(yīng)該做的兩個方面，對中學生的日常行為提出了要求。語句之間使用恰當?shù)倪B接成分，使文意連貫、流暢。整篇短文應(yīng)使用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，第一人稱we來敘述。通過審題可知，這篇短文我們應(yīng)從兩個方面來敘述：即應(yīng)該做什么；不應(yīng)該做什么。這篇作文要求我們用英語寫一篇短文，號召中學生們都參加到“雙創(chuàng)”活動中來。內(nèi)容包括：應(yīng)該讀什么樣的書，以及讀書的意義。t make good use of time and it had a bad influence on my 20．4月23日是“世界讀書日”，你校英語俱樂部正在開展主題為“多讀書，讀好書”的活動。（開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）。作文要求：，可適當發(fā)揮。Dear Billy,I