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去位于市中心的王府井大街品嘗北京烤鴨。(2)早上7:30我們乘京津城際鐵路出發(fā),車程大約半小時。請你根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容提示,以 “A Trip to Beijing”為題,寫一篇短文,向你的同學(xué)們講述一下你的北京之旅。此處go by, e to an end, tell sb about sth, all kinds of, behave oneself, encourage sb to do sth, get on with, learn from, make progress等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少?!军c睛】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,語言簡練。寫作中注意運用代詞,注意多種句式交替運用?!敬鸢浮縈y junior high school lifeMy name is Tony. I am studying in Grade time goes by, my colorful junior middle school life is ing to an end. I’m glad to tell you something about my school life. Our campus is clean and beautiful, and there are all kinds of activities. Our teachers teach us rich knowledge and how to behave ourselves. They also encourage us to work hard. We all get on well with our classmates. Besides, we learn from each other and make progress together. I thanks for my school, my teachers and my classmates. Wish them better.【解析】【分析】這是一篇給材料作文,介紹我的初中生活。要求:1. 文章包含以上提示內(nèi)容,適當發(fā)揮。提示:(校園干凈而美麗,活動非富多彩);老師(傳授知識,教會做人,經(jīng)常鼓勵);同學(xué)(和睦相處,互相學(xué)習(xí),共同進步)。5.親愛的同學(xué)們,初中生活即將結(jié)束,,名城中學(xué)九(1)班的學(xué)生。本篇文章內(nèi)容完整,符合材料要求,Elephants are the largest mammals …,及First, we should plant more trees 也使用到了比較級和最高級;Firstly,…. Secondly,…等詞的使用使文章具有層次性,條理清晰。提出倡議時可以使用We can/ We should/ Let’s/We’d better的表示建議的句子。文章共分為三個方面的內(nèi)容,首先描述大象想在所處的現(xiàn)狀,然后說明出現(xiàn)這種狀況的原因,最后為了保護的大象我們應(yīng)該如何去做。s contribution (貢獻) can make a big difference. Yours,Lihua【答案】Dear classmates,Elephants are the largest mammals on the land and they can live up to be eighty years. But now the number of the elephants is decreasing because of the following reasons. Firstly, people cut down trees in the forest, so elephants are losing their homes. Secondly, people also kill elephants for their ivory.As a result, we need to do something to help them. First, we should plant more trees to build the homes for elephants. Second, we can put up post on the street to tell people that it is against the law to kill elephants. Or we can also hold some activities in some public places to spread the idea of protecting the elephants. I believe everyone39。參考詞匯:哺乳動物mammal。要求:1)恰當運用比較級和最高級;2)80詞左右。目前數(shù)量在減少,因為:1)人們砍伐森林,大象漸漸失去家園;2)人們捕殺大象,獲取象牙。 4.假如你是李華,請你根據(jù)以下提示用英語寫一封保護大象的倡議書。短文注意到了長短句的結(jié)合,并恰當?shù)氖褂昧艘恍┻B詞,使文章表達的連貫。表達準確,注意了被動形式的使用,如He was rewarded by our school this year.。【亮點說明】這是一篇比較優(yōu)秀的范文。在最后要給Tommy提一些建議,這一部分應(yīng)該用第一人稱。表格中涉及的內(nèi)容較多,寫作時要注意表達的條理性。點建議)…要求:表達清楚、語法正確、上下文連貫;要點必須包括所有相關(guān)信息,并作適當發(fā)揮;詞數(shù):100 詞左右;不得使用真實姓名、校名和地名等Tommy is a member of my team called Moonlight.【答案】Tommy is a member of my team called Moonlight. He is clever and he is good at all his lessons. He is so generous that he shares everything with his likes reading because he thinks he can get much knowledge and learn more about the world by reading. And reading has a good effect on children’s growth. At home, he can help his parents do some housework. At school, he gets on well with his classmates. On the way to school, he obeys the traffic rules. He crosses the road when the light is green. Our school presented him with Award for Best Student this year. However, Tommy is stressed when the exam es. And he doesn’t have enough sleep. I think he should go over what he has learned before exams. It’s better for him to manage his time wisely so that he can have enough time to rest.【解析】這篇作文要求我們按照表格里的內(nèi)容介紹一下Tommy的情況,為Tommy寫一篇綜合素質(zhì)的評價報告。今年,學(xué)校授予了他優(yōu)秀學(xué)生獎(Award for Best Student)Problems面臨考試,遭受壓力痛苦,他沒有充足的睡眠.Your suggestions(根據(jù)實際情況提上學(xué)途中遵守交通規(guī)則(舉個好處)Honour他在家?guī)椭黾覄?wù)。3.臨近畢業(yè),學(xué)校在學(xué)習(xí)小組內(nèi)開展了初中階段自評和組評活動,假設(shè)你是 Moonlight 小組 的組長,請根據(jù)下面表格中的信息和提示,為你的組員 Tommy 進行綜合素質(zhì)的評價,寫一 份素質(zhì)報告.NameTommyCharacteristics聰明、大方(各舉一例)Hobbies喜歡看書,認為看書有很多好處(請列舉【點睛】本文要求以“Bikesharing”為題,根據(jù)表格的內(nèi)容提示,寫一篇短文,表達自己對共享單車的看法和建議。s known that it has many advantages.,F(xiàn)irst of all, it39。s health.(優(yōu)勢) However, it also brings some problems. For example, some people throw them away after using bikes. Even some people damage them, and some bikes are stolen.(難題) In my opinion, everyone should try to be civilized and follow the rules of using bikes. As long as we take good care of bikes, it will make our life better and better,and our environment will be more beautiful.【高分句型二】(建議)【解析】【詳解】這篇短文內(nèi)容豐富,表達了所有要點,語言表達準確,意思連貫,符合邏輯。s very convenient for people to go somewhere.【高分句型一】Also, it helps to reduce the traffic pressure. There will be less pollution because of bikesharing. Besides, bikesharing helps people take more this way, it39。s known that it has many advantages. So it39。要點提示:AdvantagesBe convenient, less pollution, reduce the traffic pressure(減緩交通壓力)Take exercise…Problems Throw away, damage(毀損), be stolen…Advice Civilized(文明的), follow the rules, take good care of…注意:1. 短文應(yīng)包括以上要點,可適當發(fā)揮,以使行文連貫;2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名及地名;3. 詞數(shù):80100(文章開頭已給出,不計入總詞數(shù))。 例句:He has been to the supermarket to buy something for 3 times this week.How many times has he been to the supermarket to buy something this week ?小測試:請用以上所學(xué)詞組進行填空1.— ____ did the meeting last ? — About half an hour.A. How soon B. How long C. How far D. How much2.— ____ will that bridge be finished ? — In a few months.A. How soon B. How long C. How far D. How often3.— ____ will it take you to get to the post office ? — About half an hour.A. How old B. How long C. How soon D. How often4.— ____ do you write