【正文】 示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞，使文章過渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢；最后，要仔細(xì)檢查有無單詞拼寫錯(cuò)誤、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)誤用等，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。同時(shí)要注意語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫太長(zhǎng)的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡(jiǎn)單的易拼寫的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。文章時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱主要為第一人稱和第三人稱。re the persons who will make the final decision.【解析】【詳解】本文是一篇給材料作文。s good or bad to have a brother or sister. But we should respect our parents39。re afraid that the new baby will be so noisy that it may bother their study.In my opinion,it39。t get used to the change. They also worry that their parents won39。s more,they think they39。s good to have a brother or a sister. They can help each other and share happiness and sadness together. And they won39。文章開頭已給出,不計(jì)入總數(shù)。,書寫工整,句式規(guī)范。,分享快樂,分擔(dān)憂愁。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)此結(jié)果寫一份調(diào)查報(bào)告,并適當(dāng)闡述你的觀點(diǎn)。內(nèi)蒙古中考模擬） 書面表達(dá)國家提出一對(duì)夫婦可生育兩個(gè)孩子的政策后,全社會(huì)展開了熱議。短文中較好的句型和短語有：I will never forget how proud I felt when I succeeded in making delicious dishes for my mother.、To show my love for my mother, I decided to cook some dishes for her on her birthday、Especially when making fried eggs, I couldn’t control the temperature of oil and got several eggs burned、Watching the delicious food on the table, my mother was moved to tears等。其次短文里使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱，文章以一般過去時(shí)、第一人稱敘述，注意了謂語動(dòng)詞過去式的變化，尤其是不規(guī)則動(dòng)詞的過去式。文章分三段，第一段用一句話引出話題；第二段詳細(xì)描寫了事情的過程；最后一段寫了自己的感受?！军c(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求描述了自己做過的一件引以為豪的事情?；蚴褂闷硎咕?、非謂語動(dòng)詞、感嘆句等特殊句式結(jié)構(gòu)。寫作時(shí)應(yīng)注意英語表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語是不同的，不能按照漢語思維逐詞翻譯，寫漢語式的英語，應(yīng)從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)出發(fā)，使用較常見、易于把握的簡(jiǎn)單句結(jié)構(gòu)，如主謂賓或主系表結(jié)構(gòu)。審題可知，體裁是記敘文，記敘一件自己做過的事情，且是能讓自己感到自豪的，故文章應(yīng)使用一般過去時(shí)，人稱以第一人稱為主。 【答案】One thing I felt very proud ofI will never forget how proud I felt when I succeeded in making delicious dishes for my mother.To show my love for my mother, I decided to cook some dishes for her on her birthday. I tried many times but failed before she came back. Especially when making fried eggs, I couldn’t control the temperature of oil and got several eggs burned. However, I didn’t give up, and finally I succeeded. Watching the delicious food on the table, my mother was moved to tears. I felt proud of cooking on my own.【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以O(shè)ne thing I felt very proud of為題，介紹自己曾經(jīng)做過的一件令自己感到自豪的事情。請(qǐng)以O(shè)ne thing I felt very proud of 為題用英語寫以寫一篇短文,描述你曾經(jīng)做過得引以自豪一件事情。河南中考模擬）“苔花如米小,也學(xué)牡丹開。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無誤。在寫作時(shí)，注意連句成篇，保持文章的連貫性，要層次清楚，要點(diǎn)分明，中心突出。主體時(shí)態(tài)是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。s more,we also do after?class activities so that we will have a rich and colourful life.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇議論文。（3）要點(diǎn)齊全，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。觀點(diǎn)理由一部分同學(xué)喜歡網(wǎng)絡(luò)和電視1. 放松,信息量大…………另一部分同學(xué)喜歡親近家人、自然和讀書1. 與家人相處更加和睦2. 增長(zhǎng)見識(shí)，開闊視野你的思考……（不少于一點(diǎn)）參考詞匯：增長(zhǎng)見識(shí) increase one’s knowledge 開闊視野 open one’s mind要求：（1）詞數(shù)：80～100個(gè)。8．（（3） I saw this accident when I was waiting to across the road. 我在等過馬路的時(shí)候看到了這起事故。（2） He tried to stop his car, but it was too late. 他試圖停車，但為時(shí)已晚。重點(diǎn)句型：（1）While the light were changing to red, a girl who was riding a bike suddenly appeared the street. 當(dāng)紅燈變紅的時(shí)候，一個(gè)騎自行車的女孩突然出現(xiàn)在街上。At seven o’clock on Friday morning there was________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】At seven o’clock on Friday morning there was a traffic accident at the intersection of Zhongshan Road and Happiness Street．I saw this accident when I was waiting to across the road. While the light were changing to red, a girl who was riding a bike suddenly appeared the street. At the same time, a car was ing. It was going very fast and when he noticed the girl. He tried to stop his car, but it was too late. So the car hit the bike and the girl fell down. The driver called 120 and they sent the girl to the hospital. But fortunately, after making an examination, the girl was all right. The girl was still riding while the light is red, so she was responsible for the accident．We should pay attention to safety when crossing the also should obey the traffic rules.【解析】【詳解】首先這是一篇以一般過去時(shí)為主的文章，所以要注意時(shí)態(tài)。你的建議如何做到安全出行（補(bǔ)充兩點(diǎn)具體做法）參考詞匯：檢查make an examination 對(duì)……負(fù)責(zé) be responsible for sth.要求：（1）詞數(shù)：80~100個(gè).（2）短文的開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。，女孩并無大礙。時(shí)間星期五早上七點(diǎn)地點(diǎn)中山路和幸福大街交口事故過程。天津中考模擬）書面表達(dá)，星期五早上在上學(xué)的路上目睹了一起交通事故。本題是一篇圖表作文，信息提示簡(jiǎn)潔明了，但是必要的補(bǔ)充和想象是必不可少的，切忌照信息翻譯句子，必須通過適當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞保證文章通順，就本題而言，介紹三項(xiàng)活動(dòng)時(shí)，要有必要的順序詞．【點(diǎn)睛】文中使用了非常好的短語和句子為文章增色不少,如：After that，one of the students will read a thankyou letter to all the people who have helped us；In the end，some pictures will be shown to share the happy times we have had together．文章層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。m very happy to have the chance to show you my plan for the evening party．It will be held in our school hall at 7 o’clock,on June 22n．I have planned three activities for it．First of a11，we would like to invite our teachers to e．We will give each other gifts and give our best that，one of the students will read a thankyou letter to all the people who have helped us．In the end，some pictures will be shown to share the happy times we have had together． This is what we will do．I hope you will choose my plan．Yours，Li Ming【解析】【詳解】初中就要畢業(yè)了，校報(bào)“英語角”欄目向同學(xué)們征集畢業(yè)晚會(huì)的計(jì)劃。要求：；緊扣主題，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；，意思連貫，書寫工整；3. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和地名；4. 詞數(shù)不少于70詞。陜西師大附中中考模擬）書面表達(dá)初中就要畢業(yè)了，校報(bào)“英語角”欄目向同學(xué)們征集畢業(yè)晚會(huì)的計(jì)劃。另外為了應(yīng)對(duì)考試，可以有選擇的背誦一些范文，這樣應(yīng)考時(shí)就會(huì)有法可依。寫作中注意一些基礎(chǔ)的寫作常識(shí)，不犯低級(jí)錯(cuò)誤。同時(shí)注意時(shí)間狀語與時(shí)態(tài)的搭配及主謂一致問題，適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯(cuò)誤，做到語意連貫。動(dòng)筆前應(yīng)根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容組織語言，列出簡(jiǎn)單提綱，確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)和關(guān)鍵單詞等問題。（1），游客多；（2）上午劃船，下午看了許多動(dòng)物，例如…：（3）碰到幾位外國朋友并與他們交談：（4）看到了亂扔垃圾、插隊(duì)等不良現(xiàn)象：（5）你的感想…參考詞匯：.插隊(duì)cut in line要求：（1）詞數(shù)：80?100個(gè)。天津中考模擬）假如你是李明，5月18日星期六這一天，你與幾位同班同學(xué)一起參觀了水上公園 （Water Park）。文章干凈利落，層次分明。 show your reasons why you remend them。 remend two traditional Chinese things。Dear Sir/Madam, I am glad to share my opinion with ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________