【正文】 them think it is a popular form of entertainment, bring them more fun.、Grabbing red packets has been part of people’s lives、About 25% of them say some people spend too much time grabbing red packets、Personally, there39。其次短文中語言得體，句式準(zhǔn)確，符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。文章分為三段，第一段是題目中已經(jīng)給出的，因此了文章的話題。點睛：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。為提升文章檔次，還應(yīng)注意使用高級句型和較復(fù)雜的句式。因此文章的內(nèi)容應(yīng)主要包括三部分：支持的人們的理由；反對者們的理由；自己的看法，可以分成兩段或者三段來敘述，這樣可以使文章結(jié)構(gòu)清楚，有層次。題目中給出了一個表格，里面包括了支持搶紅包這個游戲的人們的觀點以及反對這個游戲的人們的觀點和理由，只給了一些短語，我們需要組織語言，將這些要點用正確的英語表達(dá)出來，并使文章內(nèi)容更加豐富、完整。t grab the red packets, people may feel sad or illtempered ,even break their cell phones. What39。s no doubt that not only does it bring people happiness, but also send blessings to people in a special form. Also, it39。Grabbing red packets on lineAgreement（75%） popular form of entertainment, bring more fun people closer, make more friendsDisagreement（25%）spend too much time.not have enough munication with family members, feel lonelyYour opinion1.2.提示詞：We chat 微信Grabbing red packets on line搶紅包注意：（1）詞數(shù)80左右，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；（2）文章應(yīng)包括題中所提的所有要點，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，以使行文連貫；（3）文中請勿提及你的真實姓名、校名和其他真實信息。5．書面表達(dá)（原創(chuàng)）今年春節(jié)，很多人加入了搶紅包的游戲，但也有人表示擔(dān)憂。開頭表示很高興收到Billy的來信，接下來介紹我平時的鍛煉情況，最后指出鍛煉給我?guī)淼暮锰幰约拔医ㄗhBilly要多鍛煉。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。【詳解】結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，人稱為單數(shù)第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：I am busy……，because I have……，Doing exercise can help……，So I advise you to……等句式的應(yīng)用。4. 至少80詞。2. 可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實，行文連貫。3. 談?wù)勫憻捊o你帶來了哪些好處。（2）偶爾不鍛煉的原因：作業(yè)多，沒時間。寫作要點：1. 你最近正忙于為即將到來的體育測試（physical test）做準(zhǔn)備。4．書面表達(dá)假如你是九年級學(xué)生李華，你的美國筆友Billy發(fā)來郵件詢問你平時鍛煉的情況。開頭為你想要成為一名志愿者而感到高興，接下來介紹我們可以從事的志愿者工作以及志愿者工作帶來的一些問題，最后我希望你喜歡志愿者工作。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。m glad……，we can……，It’s OK to……，If your parents don’t allow you to…….，you should……，I hope……等句式的應(yīng)用。m glad you would like to be a volunteer. Now let me answer yourquestions.I volunteer because I enjoy helping others and can learn a lot from others. As students, we can take part in some interesting activities, such as looking after animals and working for sports matches. Also, we can join charity organizations to help protect the environment and so on.It’s OK to have problems, because volunteering takes much time and energy. Sometimes I can’t balance my study and work. If your parents don’t allow you to volunteer, you should have a good talk with them. Try to let them understand you.I hope you love volunteering and do well in it. Looking forward to your good news.Best wishesDavid【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，給好友Li Ming回信，介紹暑假做志愿者的情況。Dear Li Ming,Thanks for your letter. I39?；貜?fù)信的開頭和結(jié)尾己經(jīng)寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。請認(rèn)真閱讀下面的郵件，并根據(jù)信中的內(nèi)容和實際用英語回復(fù)，可以有適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮。所以，考生不能遺漏要點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)?！军c睛】書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。而感嘆句How time flies!，倒裝句only when we develop interest in studying English can we learn it spoken English when municating with ，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的亮點。2．書面表達(dá)我的英語學(xué)習(xí)初中即將畢業(yè)，你在英語學(xué)習(xí)方面積累了較多的經(jīng)驗與方法，請你向你的表弟介紹你的做法，根據(jù)下面表格中的內(nèi)容，按要求用英語寫一篇短文，多聽聽收音機，聽音樂等，可以放松......多說運用英語，增強能力與信心......多讀書開闊視野，了解英語文化......語法規(guī)則更好地理解與運用......寫作寫寫日常生活......其他......要求：1．語句通順，意思連貫，語法正確，書寫規(guī)范；2．必須包含表格中所有內(nèi)容，并作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮3．行文中不得出現(xiàn)真實人名、校名或地名；4．詞數(shù)80－100?！军c睛】本文要求以“Bikesharing”為題，根據(jù)表格的內(nèi)容提示，寫一篇短文，表達(dá)自己對共享單車的看法和建議。s known that it has many advantages.，F(xiàn)irst of all, it39。s health.（優(yōu)勢） However, it also brings some problems. For example, some people throw them away after using bikes. Even some people damage them, and some bikes are stolen.（難題） In my opinion, everyone should try to be civilized and follow the rules of using bikes. As long as we take good care of bikes, it will make our life better and better,and our environment will be more beautiful.【高分句型二】（建議）【解析】【詳解】這篇短文內(nèi)容豐富，表達(dá)了所有要點，語言表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，意思連貫，符合邏輯。s very convenient for people to go somewhere.【高分句型一】Also, it helps to reduce the traffic pressure. There will be less pollution because of bikesharing. Besides, bikesharing helps people take more this way, it39。s known that it has many advantages. So it39。要點提示：AdvantagesBe convenient, less pollution, reduce the traffic p