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的表達,例如save energy;brush our teeth;put it into different bins;take action;make a big difference。高分亮點:短語:save energy;brush our teeth;put it into different bins;take action;make a big difference。提示詞語: pollution, protect, save, recycle, take action提示問題:● What are the main environmental problems we have?● What can we do in our daily life? ● What’s your wish?Now there are many environmental 【答案】例文Now there are many environmental problems. Such as air pollution, water pollution and so on.I believe that there are many things we can do in our daily life, we can save energy by go to school by bike or on foot. We can use less water by turning off the tap while we brush our teeth, and taking shorter showers. When we see litter on the ground, we must pick it up and put it into different bins. I hope everyone can take action. Although each one of us may only do a little, together we can make a big difference. Let’s work together to make a better place to live.【解析】【詳解】題干解讀:該題目屬于說明文寫作,寫作時要把我們面臨的主要環(huán)境問題是什么,為改善環(huán)境我們能做什么,以及你的期望全部包括。某英文網(wǎng)站正在開展以“Going Green”為主題的征文活動。寫作亮點:本文語言精煉,像第二自然段的Football has a very long history. It is liked by people all over the world. The World Cup takes place every four years. it helps develop team spirit. What’s more, playing football is good for our health. 等等句子,簡潔,但是句意表達清楚;同時,本文用了被動語態(tài)、動名詞作主語、不定式作表語等等語法形式,使表達生動;用了first, second等使得短文層次清楚。要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語,按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫。參考詞匯:梅西 MessiDear classmates,I’m very excited to hear that China will build 20,000 footballthemed schools by 2020. Thank you for your attention.【答案】Dear classmates,I’m very excited to hear that China will build 20,000 footballthemed schools by 2020.Football has a very long history.It is liked by people all over the world.The World Cup takes place every four years.Playing football has lots of advantages.First,both boys and girls can take part in it.Second,it helps develop team spirit.What’s more,playing football is good for our health.I’m a football fan.Messi is my hero.He has a gift for playing football.My dream is to bee a famous football player like Messi.I hope China will hold the World Cup some day.Thank you for your attention.【解析】【詳解】試題分析:本題要求按提綱的提示,介紹足球運動并談?wù)勛约旱膲粝搿3?識歷史悠久,深受喜愛世界杯4年舉行一次好 處男生女生皆可參加利于培養(yǎng)團隊精神考生自擬(至少1點)偶 像梅西,有足球天賦夢 想考生自擬(至少1點)注意:1. 詞數(shù)90左右。5.書面表達為了配合“足球進校園”活動,你們班開展了一次主題班會。t grab the red packets, people may feel sad or illtempered ,even break their cell 。短文中使用了較豐富的句型,如About 75% of them think it is a popular form of entertainment, bring them more fun.、Grabbing red packets has been part of people’s lives、About 25% of them say some people spend too much time grabbing red packets、Personally, there39。其次短文中語言得體,句式準(zhǔn)確,符合英語的表達習(xí)慣。文章分為三段,第一段是題目中已經(jīng)給出的,因此了文章的話題。點睛:這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。為提升文章檔次,還應(yīng)注意使用高級句型和較復(fù)雜的句式。因此文章的內(nèi)容應(yīng)主要包括三部分:支持的人們的理由;反對者們的理由;自己的看法,可以分成兩段或者三段來敘述,這樣可以使文章結(jié)構(gòu)清楚,有層次。題目中給出了一個表格,里面包括了支持搶紅包這個游戲的人們的觀點以及反對這個游戲的人們的觀點和理由,只給了一些短語,我們需要組織語言,將這些要點用正確的英語表達出來,并使文章內(nèi)容更加豐富、完整。t grab the red packets, people may feel sad or illtempered ,even break their cell phones. What39。s no doubt that not only does it bring people happiness, but also send blessings to people in a special form. Also, it39。Grabbing red packets on lineAgreement(75%) popular form of entertainment, bring more fun people closer, make more friendsDisagreement(25%)spend too much time.not have enough munication with family members, feel lonelyYour opinion1.2.提示詞:We chat 微信Grabbing red packets on line搶紅包注意:(1)詞數(shù)80左右,開頭已給出,不計入總詞數(shù);(2)文章應(yīng)包括題中所提的所有要點,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,以使行文連貫;(3)文中請勿提及你的真實姓名、校名和其他真實信息。4.書面表達(原創(chuàng))今年春節(jié),很多人加入了搶紅包的游戲,但也有人表示擔(dān)憂。寫作亮點:本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,要點齊全,語言簡練。根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示可知本文會用一般過去時態(tài)和一般將來時態(tài),注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用。、校名等相關(guān)信息。,并補充相關(guān)信息,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。