【正文】 great concerns.Personally ,I think study tours play a critical role in developing students’ study of the time,studennts acquire knowledge and skills from walking out of the campus,they can learn through their own experiences and can understand better about what they have learned from textbooks. Besides,study tours contribute a lot to shaping a student’s life values and bee more confident in getting along with also helps students develop the sense of social responsibility, creative spirit and practical ability.Of course,we must put safety in the first place in the course of study tour,which is also the major concern of our parents and schools.【解析】1. 本題為話題作文，給定的話題為My Opinions on Study Tour. 研學(xué)旅行之我見(jiàn)?？蓞⒖家韵略~匯the sense of social responsibility社會(huì)責(zé)任感。要求,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,以使行文連貫。你校也計(jì)劃開(kāi)展此項(xiàng)活動(dòng),但是有些學(xué)生表示歡迎,也有些表示反對(duì)。山東中考模擬）寫(xiě)作讀萬(wàn)卷書(shū),行萬(wàn)里路。此處begin with, make one’s bed, help with, look after, on time, need to do sth, depend on等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少?！军c(diǎn)睛】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。寫(xiě)作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用?！驹斀狻拷Y(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱為單數(shù)第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用，比如：it39。s very important for us to independent. What should we do to make us independent?First, let39。要求；，意思連貫，語(yǔ)法正確，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范2. 字?jǐn)?shù)70 字左右（短文的開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總字?jǐn)?shù)） As middle school students, it39。西安市鐵一中學(xué)中考模擬）由于父母的溺愛(ài)，現(xiàn)在許多孩子基本不做學(xué)習(xí)以外的事情，導(dǎo)致獨(dú)立生活能力不強(qiáng)。此處set off, get to, pick up, put...into…等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。【點(diǎn)睛】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。寫(xiě)作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。 1 2 34 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】We had a class meeting and decided to go on a trip on the mountain on Sunday. We set off by bus at seven o’clock in the morning, and we got to the mountain at 8:00 . We felt very excited and began to climb the mountain. When we got to the top, we found a lot of rubbish there. So we picked them up with our bags and put them into dustbins. After about two hours, we cleaned there and made the mountain more beautiful. We were all tired but happy.【解析】【分析】這是一篇看圖作文，介紹我們?cè)谝淮闻郎竭^(guò)程中保護(hù)環(huán)境，撿拾垃圾。山東中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá)。表示“越……，就越……”的意思。【高分句型二】The more I practised, the more confident I became. 我練習(xí)得越多，就越自信?！靖叻志湫鸵弧縄t was quite a big challenge for me because I was not that confident about my oral English and I was shy to speak in public. 這對(duì)我來(lái)說(shuō)是一個(gè)很大的挑戰(zhàn)，因?yàn)槲覍?duì)自己的英語(yǔ)口語(yǔ)沒(méi)有那么自信，在公共場(chǎng)合說(shuō)話也很害羞。語(yǔ)法要正確，表達(dá)要符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，注意時(shí)態(tài)、時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的搭配及主謂一致問(wèn)題。注意作文中必須包含材料和提示詞的所有信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。主要從：你努力工作取得了什么成績(jī)？?你是怎么做到的？?你覺(jué)得怎么樣？這幾個(gè)方面去介紹。北京中考模擬）“書(shū)山有路勤為徑, 學(xué)海無(wú)涯苦作舟”, 成功不會(huì)從天而降, 美好的未來(lái)需要靠不斷努力來(lái)創(chuàng)造?某英文網(wǎng)站正在開(kāi)展以“天道酬勤” 為主題的征文活動(dòng)?假如你是李華, 請(qǐng)用英文寫(xiě)一篇短文投稿, 講述你通過(guò)勤奮, 取得進(jìn)步甚至成功的經(jīng)歷, 并談?wù)勀愕母惺?提示詞語(yǔ): diligence （勤奮）, make progress, effort, proud提示問(wèn)題: ? What did you achieve by working hard?? What did you do to make it?? How did you feel about it?【答案】Diligence is a must for us to reach our goals. I never realized it until I tried every effort to win the English speech petition last year. It was quite a big challenge for me because I was not that confident about my oral English and I was shy to speak in public. To give a better performance, I made full use of my spare time to prepare for it. I recorded my lines and asked my foreign teacher to correct my pronunciation. Then I kept practising day and night. Besides, I seized every chance to speak in front of my family or friends. The more I practised, the more confident I became. In the end, I won the petition and got a prize. It was so great that all my efforts paid off. I felt so proud of myself.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇話題作文，根據(jù)材料中的相關(guān)信息介紹一下你通過(guò)勤奮, 取得進(jìn)步甚至成功的經(jīng)歷。另外，寫(xiě)作時(shí)，還需注意語(yǔ)句間的銜接，使文意連貫，表達(dá)流暢。需要自由發(fā)揮的地方較多，比如手機(jī)的正面作用可以寫(xiě)有利于我們的溝通與交流，通過(guò)上網(wǎng)了解世界上所發(fā)生的事情，手機(jī)的負(fù)面作用可以寫(xiě)手機(jī)對(duì)健康的危害，對(duì)學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)的影響等等?？忌紫纫喿x前面的提示去認(rèn)真審題，確定出文章的中心，用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)來(lái)表達(dá)。s happening around the world. Today many people, especially young people, are phone freaks. Depending on mobile phones too much is bad for health. Looking at mobile phones too often is bad for our eyes. Playing with mobile phones is a waste of time and harmful to study. I think young people should spend more time doing sports or being with their family and friends. They should also pay more attention to their studies. If they fill their time this way, they won39。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)要求談?wù)剬?duì)自己的看法：1. 手機(jī)的正面作用；2. 手機(jī)給人們帶來(lái)的煩惱；3. 如何防止成為“手機(jī)控”。遼寧中考模擬）現(xiàn)在手機(jī)是人們生活的必需品，在給我們提供便利的同時(shí)，也有很多負(fù)面作用。：高分短語(yǔ)： so much ； all over the world； run along； take action to； keep ……clean .高分句型： enjoy running so much because it makes me keep fit and have an excellent figure. is the act of cleaning up trash while running . Sunday I wear plastic gloves and carry a garbage bag when I run along the river； protect the earth is to protect ourselves.【點(diǎn)睛】本篇材料作文書(shū)寫(xiě)前要認(rèn)真審題，確定人稱（第一人稱）和時(shí)態(tài)（一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)）；關(guān)注題材的格式（記敘文），注意文章的篇章結(jié)構(gòu)；書(shū)寫(xiě)時(shí)要緊扣主題，做到中心突出，內(nèi)容完整、連貫；成文后要檢查人稱、時(shí)態(tài)是否一致、單詞的拼寫(xiě)是否正確、短語(yǔ)和句式的使用是否得當(dāng)。開(kāi)篇緊扣主題，介紹自己最喜歡的運(yùn)動(dòng)是跑步；正文部分順理成章的介紹plogging這種運(yùn)動(dòng)方式以及自己如何身體力行地做到鍛煉、環(huán)保兩不誤；結(jié)尾以. Everyone should be an environmental protection guard and take action to keep our home clean . To protect the earth is to protect ，總結(jié)全文。書(shū)寫(xiě)時(shí)要注意題干所給的提示材料，成文時(shí)要文句通順，內(nèi)容完整。 【答案】Everyone has his or her favorite out