【正文】 。江蘇中考模擬）書面表達(dá)緊張而又忙碌的初中生活即將結(jié)束，在裝載你收獲的行囊——成長記錄袋時還應(yīng)增添一份你自己滿意的答卷。所以，考生不能遺漏要點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)?！军c睛】書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。特別是I learn from your letter that you want to know something about the Chinese traditional festivalthe Dragon Boat Festival./ we all love the festival because it’s a good reminder to look back on history and a wonderful time to get together with family./ I hope that you can e to celebrate it with us in the near ，是本文的最大亮點。請你根據(jù)以下提示用英文給她寫一封電子郵件。10．（【高分句型二】I think these rules are good for us. 我認(rèn)為這些規(guī)則對我們有好處?！靖叻志湫鸵弧縎econd, we shouldn’t go with strangers and we shouldn’t accept things from strangers. 第二，我們不應(yīng)該和陌生人一起去，也不應(yīng)該接受陌生人的東西。語法要正確，表達(dá)要符合英語習(xí)慣，注意時態(tài)、時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。注意作文中必須包含材料上的所有信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱為第一人稱。主要從1. 遵守校規(guī)，按時到校、離校；2. 不接受陌生人的物品；3. 結(jié)伴同行，天黑前到家；4. 遇到麻煩及時告知家長和老師。School safety_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】School safetyMore and more people pay special attention to the school safety nowadays. Here are some rules to keep us safe.First, as students, we should follow the school rules, such as not being late for school and leaving school early. Second, we shouldn’t go with strangers and we shouldn’t accept things from strangers. Third, it’s better for us to have partners on the way home and to school and we must get home before dark. Fourth, if we are in trouble, don’t forget to tell our parents or teachers as soon as possible.I think these rules are good for us. We must obey them.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇話題作文，根據(jù)材料中的相關(guān)信息介紹一下校園安全。請根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，以“School safety”為題寫一篇100詞左右的英語短文。9．（修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。同時還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。通常書面表達(dá)給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀觥⒚鞔_的關(guān)鍵。構(gòu)思提綱。審好題是寫好書面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。增強邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。s my duty to live a lowcarbon even the simplest activities can make a real difference to the I suggest we should reuse books as long as we39。內(nèi)容包括：你的具體做法、你的感受以及建議。山東中考模擬）寫作現(xiàn)在全世界都在倡導(dǎo)“低碳生活（lowcarbon life）”，即：降低二氧化碳的排放，采取低能量、低消耗、低開支的生活方式。 （5）注意檢查：單詞拼寫、語法、動詞時態(tài)、語序、主謂一致等。注意表達(dá)的順序。（2）列好提綱和要點及需要的重要短語或句型。要學(xué)以致用?！军c睛】書面表達(dá)題要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運用所學(xué)英語知識準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。最后我原諒了他。他給我打了好幾次電話，向我道歉。我生邁克的氣是因為他傷害了我的感情。他把音樂會的一切都忘了。我等了很長時間，但邁克最終沒有出現(xiàn)。兩個月前，邁克邀請我七點鐘去聽音樂會。寫完以后，注意再讀一遍，看看有無單詞拼寫、標(biāo)點、語法錯誤（時態(tài)、主謂一致等）。要運用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有連貫性。短文必須包含提示問題和提示詞。本文人稱主要第一人稱，時態(tài)主要是一般過去時。t show up in the end. I called him and asked him what happened. He forgot all about the concert. He was playing puter games at home at that time.I got angry with Mike because he hurt my feelings. Mike also realized his mistake. He called me several times and said sorry to me. He even sent me a present to make me happy. Finally I forgave him. After forgiving him, I felt relaxed and happy.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇話題作文，請用英語寫一篇短文談?wù)勆钪心阍徦说囊淮谓?jīng)歷，主要內(nèi)容包括: 你們之間發(fā)生了什么，你為什么原諒了對方，以及原諒對方之后的感受。提示詞語：forgive原諒提示問題：What happened between you and him/her?Why did you decide to forgive him/her?How did you feel after forgiving him/her?I still remember what happened between ...【答案】I still remember what happened between my friend Mike and me. Two months ago, Mike invited me to go to a concert at seven o39。字?jǐn)?shù)80字左右。福建中考模擬）寬容是一種美德，人與人之間難免會有磕磕絆絆，面對矛盾，多一份包容和諒解，生活 就會多一縷陽光。該句話運用了not only…but also…。句子What you see at the seaside做主語。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系，表達(dá)具有條理性。寫作時，避免使用漢語式的英語，盡量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語。在陳述個人觀點或給出建議時用一般現(xiàn)在時來寫。主要是要完整敘述圖片內(nèi)容、結(jié)合自己的實際情況陳述個人觀點或給出建議。t pay attention to hygiene. There39。要求：1. 完整敘述圖片內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2. 結(jié)合自己的實際情況陳述個人觀點或給出建議。山東中考模擬）書面表達(dá)下圖描述了李明和家人去年五一假期（May Day Holiday）外出旅游的經(jīng)歷。做到：要點要全，表達(dá)要清晰明確，使用短語，句型要準(zhǔn)確，注意避免拼寫和語法錯誤。用的短語、句型：both kinds of、If we choose a boarding school、At the same time、As for me, I prefer a boarding school、pay attention to、來增加了文章的亮點。寫完后反復(fù)閱讀修改推敲潤色，人稱、時態(tài)、單復(fù)數(shù)一致等。、短語、句型。第三段要表述作者自己的選擇和理由。第一段要寫總體交代你即將升入高中，面臨寄宿（a boarding school）和走讀（a day school）兩類學(xué)校的選擇。A hoarding school or a day schoolWe are going to graduate from our middle school, __________________________________【答案】We are going to graduate from our middle schools, and we will make a choice to enter a boarding school or a day school. Both kinds of school have their advantages and disadvantages.If we choose a boarding school, we will save time to study. However, we may have less time to stay with our family. If we choose a day school, parents can know more about our studies. At the same time puter games and TV plays may make a bad influence on us. As for me, I prefer a boarding school. We should pay attention to our studies to get good grades in the high school.【解析】【分析】整體分析：這是一篇給材料作文。注意：1. 詞數(shù)。請你以“A boarding school or a day school”為題。5．（亮點說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好地完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)，主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點詞句，如get together，enjoy the full moon， share our stories等。m glad to hear from you. Now let me introduce the MidAutumn Festival to you. The MidAutumn Festival falls on the 15th of the 8th lunar month. It’s a big day for us Chinese people. All the family members get together to celebrate the festival. In the evening, we usually have a big dinner. And then we go outside and enjoy the full moon. The moon that night looks the brightest. With the beautiful moon up in the sky, we sit together to eat mooncakes, and share our stories.For me, the best part is to enjoy the moon and eat mooncakes. Mooncakes taste very delicious. They look like the moon, big and round.Yours,Li Hua【解析】【詳解】