【正文】 and EOP(Economic Opportunity Program), in which I took charge of protocoling the framework of their cooperation with primary from my practice experience in SIFE, I had another internship in summer vacation in Beijing’s Intermediate People’s Court, where I had learned basic criminal litigation procedures, connecting processes with public security organ and procuratorial organ and the criminal litigation defending other internship I had was in Bangbangjun Moving Company from 2009~ that pany I helped the staff with my professional advice in checking agreement and pliance。gave inspiring speeches, recruited volunteers to teach them social etiquette and hygiene knowledge。and 90% for , I know that a consistent praise is far away to make my dream I submerged myself in the sea of reference books in the law field, such as The Concept of Law by ，An Introduction To The Principles of Morals and Legislation by Jeremy Bentham，Justice in Robes by Ronald Dworkin, Taking Rights Seriously by Ronald Dworkin, Constitution Law of United States, The laws by Plato, many cases concerns economic disputes and my second major is economics, I also read some books in this field such as The Economics of Money, Banking and Financial Markets by , Economics by ，The Problem of Social Cost by Ronald Harry Coase, from that, after a half year’s training, now I am very confident to pass the Judicial Vocational Qualification Test in the near had been the programme manager of SIFE(Student In Free Enterprise)programmes at my university, which is an international nonprofit organization that works with leaders in business and higher education to mobilize university students to make a difference in their munities while developing the skills to bee socially responsible business I had leaded my team taking a series of social cases among which I would like to share the most unforgettable first programme was the Bangbangjun Program.“Bangbangjun” is a typical Chongqing way to call the luggage porters, who are the migrant from frequent discrimination, they live their lives at the foot of the social are some panies to manage their onsite inspection we found that the situation was worse than our imagination in those and shortages existed everywhere such as in legal security, internal systems, labor rights, and the financial the help of the supervisoras well as lawyers and business consultant we tried to find universal business modes to benefit as more porters as we 3 years’ endeavor we succeeded in bringing the pany with advanced business modes and legal aids, setting up websites and establishing brands, perfecting taxing structure and internal regulations。85% for Corporate and Business Law。 Mathematical Statistics and in the last course I’ve mainly studied central limit theorem, the principal distributions, testing of statistical hypotheses, parameter estimation, linearity regression and equal analysis, and stochastic differential my great efforts, I got for current overall average and for the average of ECommerce major specializations and ranked of 5/53 and 4/53 respectively in my addition, I was awarded Bclass scholarship and won the title of ‘Excellent Student’ as well in focusing on professional study, I also pay a great attention to improving after I entered into the college, I joined in the Literature amp。s University in early center, directed by distinguished Professor Song Xinning, Deputy Head of the Department of International Politics, is manned by several professors with European research background from social sciences divisions of the People39。s 8,000 students, to receive the Excellent Academic Achievement Scholarship(First Class)in the 199495 school the 19951996 school year, I was one of university39。 Automation more than three years I worked very hard and pleted some projects of my firm skills in hardware and software and strong background of theory, in 1995 I was appointed as the leader to manage and design the puter control system“Distributed Control System(DCS)”.In the period less than a year, under the cooperation and support of others, my colleagues and I pleted the design of system structure, modules39。s successful design solved the problem that the SUN SPARC station could not be used to the speech processing and the multimedia these designs I accumulated the experience of hardware development and mastered the knowledge of munications theory and puter technology such as the hardware structure of the RISC puter, UNIX operating system and the five years of study in Tsinghua University I have not only mastered rich professional theory but also accumulated strong experience on hardware design and software of these laid a solid foundation for my further work and of my hard study, as reward, I was remended to enter the graduate program at Tsinghua directly, waived of the admission is Tsinghua39。）During my academic years, I worked hardly（work hardly 與 work hard 的區(qū)別相信大家都知道，這樣的錯誤是不可原諒的。很難想象，繁忙的教授在連著數(shù)次看到簡單的語法或拼寫錯誤后，還會相信你是文中所說的一個認(rèn)真的精益求精的人。務(wù)必做到文章中不存在任何文法，語法或拼寫上的錯誤。最后需要提醒讀者注意的是，寫自述絕對不能一蹴而就，寫好后需反復(fù)修改，清除多余的部分，增加與針對申請學(xué)校和專業(yè)相對應(yīng)的內(nèi)容，密切注意句與句之間，段落之間，及整篇文章意思的邏輯聯(lián)系。許多杰出的人物都曾經(jīng)歷過困屯。我們建議你撰寫自述時沒有必要對自己的事業(yè)和生活道路上的挫折諱莫如深。最好不提的還有政治觀點、宗教信仰和其他一切容易引起爭議的不同尋常的話題。當(dāng)然，少兒時期的成就，若是對隨后的學(xué)術(shù)道路產(chǎn)生了重大的影響，也可以提。比如當(dāng)上了三好學(xué)生、少先隊長之類的。還應(yīng)該說明通過發(fā)表這篇(或幾篇)論文，申請者在這一領(lǐng)域做出了什么貢獻(xiàn)，獲得了哪些思想方法、認(rèn)識和科研手段上的提高。這不光是寫篇文章，而是反復(fù)的科學(xué)論證和無數(shù)次實驗的結(jié)晶。其實，如果內(nèi)容充實，為什么不能寫到二至三頁呢？比如說到發(fā)表的論文，往往只提到一個題目。所以申請者不用擔(dān)心內(nèi)容上的重復(fù)。它是對個人經(jīng)歷的一種簡潔而全面的介紹，使讀者對申請者能夠很快有一個大致的了解。許多申請者錯誤地認(rèn)為自己發(fā)表的文章已經(jīng)列在履歷里面了，在自述中就不應(yīng)該再提。首先，千萬不要遺漏掉那些有用的和中肯的成就、經(jīng)驗等等事實。至此我們談到了全面和深刻地審視自己、尋找獨特的角度以及注重運用細(xì)節(jié)等問題。作者用朋友們的疑問來襯托出自己決定重返學(xué)校、出國深造所飲食的智慧和膽識。比方說有人在談到家庭的不幸時具體地講述了因交不起房租被趕到街上過夜的慘痛經(jīng)歷。許許多多的人可以有類似的經(jīng)歷和背景，但他們生命中的具體經(jīng)歷一定具有獨特的場景。所謂“故事”并不是要為自己的經(jīng)歷編故事，而是要有一點(不要太多)生動的情節(jié)。同樣，寫不好家庭的背景時，也不要太多著墨于那些問題，重要的是突出自己不隨遇而安、屈從命運安排的精神和志向。：這種情況下可以是好的家庭背景對申請者產(chǎn)生了正面的影響，也可以是艱難或不好的家庭環(huán)境作用于申請者，使之反思而發(fā)奮圖強(qiáng)。：這種 申請人在生活、學(xué)業(yè)和工作上雖不可避免地會遇到挫折，但相對來說，他們的生活進(jìn)行得比較一帆風(fēng)順。他所陳述的經(jīng)歷、思想和感受與其人生奮斗的目標(biāo)達(dá)到了高度的統(tǒng)一。這樣的信讀起來感人至深，作者當(dāng)然也被錄取了。這位作者申請的學(xué)校是法學(xué)院，難度較大，但作者有力地陳述了他的理由：他的父母像許多亞裔移民一樣