【正文】 第二句有特殊風格，第三句太過自信，第四句，作者表示謙虛。I feel quite certain that as a result of the course in filing which I pleted at the Crosby School of Business, I can install and operate efficiently a filing system for your ，我能夠替貴公司設置并且操作一套檔案分類系統(tǒng)。I am confident that my experience and references will show you that I can fulfill the particular requirements of your bookkeeping ，我能夠符合貴公司簿記員一職的特定需要。應征函的語氣應征函要發(fā)揮最大的效果，語氣必須肯定、自信、有創(chuàng)意而不過份夸張，如能事先洞察雇主的喜好，或其他人格特性，根據(jù)物以類聚的原理，應征函若能配合雇主的特性，求職的人一定可以比其他人占上風，獲得面談的機會。May I have an interview? My residence telephone is(042) reach me by calling that number until June July 2, my address will be Kent House, Bretton Woods, New ？我住處電話為43981號。您可在每天下午二至四時（星期二例外）打731430號電話通知我。我從上午九時到下午五時都可接通。陳腐的句子： Hoping you will give me an interview, I am……（我希望您惠予面談）Anticipating a favorable decision, I wait your……（等候您的佳音）Trusting your reply will be satisfactory, I remain(靜候滿意的答復)哀求式的句子，不夠完整（漏掉面談時間）： Won‘t you please give me the chance to interview your? I can be reached by calling Kenmore 。(b)改寫后（較佳）： If my application has convinced you of my ability to satisfy you, I should wele the opportunity to talk with you, so that you may judge my personal qualifications 、（a）懷疑，不妥、不安全的： If you‘re interested, let me know immediately, as I‘m sure and interview will convince you I‘m the man for the ，請即告知，敝人深信與您面談可以使您相信，敝人適合擔任此職。我僅想夠糊口即可。提到待遇時不要過分謙虛或表示歉意，下列句子不宜使用。最初余僅想要如何工作得好，使您滿意。Although it is difficult for me to say what pensation I should deserve, I should considera month a fair initial ，我以為起薪每月很合理。（a）句較差，經(jīng)過修改后（b）句顯得較恰當。因為這類句子被人用得大多，顯得陳腐，失去突出的特性。開始就業(yè)的人應知道，與其尋得一份高薪的工作倒不如找待遇尚可而有升遷機會的工作。留意底薪：有的雇主要你提到希望的待遇。不要批評他人：如果你要離開現(xiàn)職，可以說出原因但不要用批評的方式，雇主想要了解你，而非你的工作機會。機智和良好的判斷寫求職信要有機智和良好的判斷，下列幾點可供參考。結(jié)尾：求職信的結(jié)尾在希望并請求未來的雇主允以面談的機會，因此，信中要表明可以面談的時間。個人資料：寫信人應述明自己的年齡或出生年月，教育背景，尤其是和應征的職位有關(guān)的訓練或教育科目、工作經(jīng)驗或特殊的技能；如無實際經(jīng)驗，略述在學類似經(jīng)驗亦可?；旧?，可以包括下列幾項：１、寫這封信的目的或動機：通常求職信都是針對報紙上招聘廣告而寫的。求職函內(nèi)附加郵票或回址信封，強迫對方答覆的作法不足效法，除非對方有此要求。附件：求職信函通常不須附加推薦信，除非招聘廣告有此要求。尤其要注意的是，絕不可把收信人的姓名或公司名號拼錯了。這樣看起來比較具有商業(yè)氣息。書寫：求職者常需用親手寫信，字體要寫得清潔可辯，龍飛鳳舞的字跡無疑是自尋絕路。紙張的選用：最好使用品質(zhì)優(yōu)良，白色的信紙。下列幾個要點便是泄露一個人‘機密‘的地方。一個人做人做事是否謹慎可以從一封求職信中看出端倪來。因此，的目的在于獲得面談的機會。 Limited, 21 Conduit St,Conduit St,London Dear Sir or Madam:I would like to be a candidate for the salesman position that your esteemed pany advertised in the Daily Telegraph on September 15, have finished my degree in English in SouthCentral University for Nationalities last year at the age of an English major, I am excellent in English listening, speaking, translating and interpreting, which I think can do much help for my future job if , I have also read many books about marketing and have a good knowledge of