【正文】 滿分作文鑒賞[1] 。由外及內(nèi)，層次分明，錯(cuò)落有致。ll like not，I39。ve found one which I think is pretty place is on Fang Cao Street which is near the bus 39。m so glad to know that you39。U be able to meet you at the airport，see wishes！Yours，Li Hua滿分理由本文格式正確，內(nèi)容完整，表述清楚，銜接緊密流暢，時(shí)態(tài)語(yǔ)態(tài)使用準(zhǔn)確，特別是結(jié)尾末段適度的發(fā)揮，既充實(shí)了內(nèi)容，又符合邏輯，成為本文與眾不同的亮點(diǎn)。m so glad to know that you39。U be able to meet you at the airport，see wishes！Yours，Li Hua滿分理由本文格式正確，內(nèi)容完整，表述清楚，銜接緊密流暢，時(shí)態(tài)語(yǔ)態(tài)使用準(zhǔn)確，特別是結(jié)尾末段適度的發(fā)揮，既充實(shí)了內(nèi)容，又符合邏輯，成為本文與眾不同的亮點(diǎn)。Dear Bob，Wele to China！You wrote to me to find a place for have found an apartment on Fangcao Street near Jianxin Chinese is on the third floor and there39。which，39。ll try my best to meet your it is not suitable enough，write to me and I will look for another better you will e here soon！All the best！Yours，Li Hua滿分理由本文格式正確，意思表述完整，行文流暢自然。m very happy to receive your letter，and I39。注意：：100左右：：房租Tent（n.）。第四篇：高考英語(yǔ)滿分作文高考英語(yǔ)滿分作文假設(shè)你是李華，你的英國(guó)筆友Bob將于九月到你所在城市的建新華文學(xué)校學(xué)中文，來(lái)信請(qǐng)你在學(xué)校附近為他找一套住房。d, but when it es to the campus security, we have to take it every day, there are reports to the security office on campus that valuable things are stolen surrounding with stealing, mugging can’t be worse for such cases, what measures should be taken to improve the campus security?On the one hand, we students should strengthen our security we smell out something unusual, we should report it to the campus guard the other hand, more equipment such as monitors should be installed on campus so as to detect crimes as soon as , a proper amount of security guards should be arranged to patrol the campus。根據(jù)所給提綱，本文應(yīng)包含以下內(nèi)容：闡述“目前校園意外事件不斷出現(xiàn)”這一問(wèn)題，校園安全問(wèn)題備受關(guān)注的現(xiàn)狀；我們應(yīng)當(dāng)采取哪些措施來(lái)應(yīng)對(duì)；總結(jié)全文。many migrant workers do not enjoy the same profits and rights as the permanent unban residents and this will make their living without and insurance we don’t need to be so pessimistic of the situation at is evident that the advantages of urbanization outweigh the we should do is to remain the positive side , meanwhile to conquer the negative government will also introduce many effective policies to narrow this we have enough reasons to believe the situation will bee better and better so that we can reach our aim ”better city, better life ”!Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic Campus should write at least 120 words, and base your position on the outline(given in Chinese)1)近年來(lái)發(fā)生在校園的意外事件不斷增加，校園安全問(wèn)題備受關(guān)注2)對(duì)此我們應(yīng)該采取哪些措施本題屬于提綱式文字命題。a increasing number of automobiles crowding into the streets。Come to think of it, it is not the foodbutmy attitude towards life that affordsmepleasure and empowersme in facing up tovarious challenges.(219words第三篇：高考英語(yǔ)滿分作文關(guān)于選秀節(jié)目Over the past couple of years, a variety of talent shows have emerged on TV channels across the nation, from Super Girls to Happy Boys and so type of entertainment program is intensely popular, especially among young adults and has produced profound impacts on their studies and are a couple of reasons behind the start with, young folks need role models to learn many of them are crazy for contestants participating in these gives rise to the increasing emergence of these shows because TV networks naturally need to cater to young , thanks to economic and political reforms carried out by the government, this crop of young generation have more freedom and desire to express and showcase , a growing number of young people desire to get involved in these is a divisive my personal level, the talent show is a superb means of relaxing and amusing and can hugely relieve our senior high school students, however, we could not afford to indulge in them and should be aware of the utmost importance of On the Food SecurityOver the past couple of years, several cases of the food scandal have been disclosed on various problem of food security has bee a hot button across prevalence of food insecurity has greatly impacted public health, which the government could not afford to ignore, according to the online edition of the People are a couple of driving forces, I would argue, behind this undesirable , in the course of the rapid economic evolution, we ignore moral education, giving rise to the rising rate of the importantly, the lack of adequate regulation and punishment on those illegal producers enforces the Confucius instructed, it is better late than and strict measures should be taken to turn back this evil government should launch a massive moral campaign to educate all citizens and draw up tougher laws to crack down on those irresponsible corporations and prohibit them from entering the food industry am firmly convinced that through our bined efforts we are bound to enjoy more riskfree foods in the days On Uncivilized BehaviorsWe cannot fail to notice that countless uncivilized behaviors exist in our daily lives, such as spitting, talking loudly, littering, saying nasty words in public places and so these are bad manners that we should not lose sight an ancient land enjoying a splendid civilization spanning over 5,000 years, China is witnessing a surge in improper acts that every Chinese citizen should feel ashamed behaviors by a host of Chinese both at home and abroad have seriously affected China’s image, according to an editorial posted on People Daily’s official Chinese, we should not get offended when others point out our weaknesses but should focus more attention on improving should strive to identify the causes of those improper behaviors and find ways to eliminate are a host of causes, I would argue, behind this name only one: the lack of moral government should wage a massive moral campaign to fight against this trend and we ourselves should endeavor to behave decently in our daily college students of the new age, we should take the leading On Cultivating the Sense of GratitudeOn college campuses across the nation, there is a noticeable phenomenon that we cannot afford to ignore: far too many young college stu