【正文】 。占據(jù)了某人大部分時(shí)間，使得某人沒空想東想西（充實(shí)了某人生活）4）What39。3）。能讓我們的生活更美好，也就是說。例句：An ensemble that performs B in which the other performs A is excused from the rehearsal after that （樂曲）時(shí)，那麼演奏B（樂曲）的樂團(tuán)就有充分的理由不去彩排了。（漢語可以說是它鄰國(guó)的三倍，但英語一定要說是它鄰國(guó)的人口的三倍，這也是英語較為漢語更為嚴(yán)密的一種表現(xiàn)）。Either Sally must be responsible for the matter or we’ll be(responsible for the matter).或者賽麗對(duì)此事負(fù)責(zé)，或者由我們來承擔(dān)責(zé)任。另外，如果表示比較結(jié)構(gòu)的句子前后有相同成分，而且此成分有短語修飾，后面的相同成分要由代詞來置換，而不能直接將其省略。這也就是省略結(jié)構(gòu)所表達(dá)出的英文的緊湊性。不妨改寫如下：According to my recollection, one thing in particular that made me feel grateful toward my mother was the day I went and asked her for my own garden, and she did let me have my own little love it and take care of it well, especially the growing of them on the table made me would pull out the grass in my garden by hand when the first little blades came up and would patrol the rows on my hands and knees for any worms and bugs, killing them and burying “I”，一看就出自成人手筆。試讀下面這段文章：One thing in particular I remember made me feel grateful toward my mother was that one day I went and asked her for my own garden, and she let me have my own little love it and take care of it loved especially to grow was proud when we had them on our would pull out the grass in my garden by hand when the first little blades came would patrol the rows on my hands and knees for any worms and bugs, and I would kill and bury “I”。事實(shí)上，在英語寫作中除名詞可放在句子的開頭外，許多其它詞類及詞組均可放在句子開頭的位置。由于拘泥于傳統(tǒng)語法框架，許多初學(xué)寫作的人都喜歡用名詞開頭寫句子。：Meanwhile, I’ll spare no effort to work hard both in the study and my future career in order to pay back the ：全國(guó)人民都不遺余力地支持北京舉辦奧運(yùn)會(huì)?！炯丫渑R摩】：To make matters worse, my mother has suddenly fallen ill and is expecting a major ：令人更迷惑不解的是，很多飛機(jī)都從大海上離奇消失了。[6]“我保證…”，that引導(dǎo)同位語從句。[4]過渡銜接詞語，使文章條理清晰、銜接緊密。[2]“超出…的能力范圍”。保證合理利用貸款并表明還款決心，最后表示感謝。根據(jù)所給提綱，本文應(yīng)包含如下內(nèi)容：簡(jiǎn)單介紹自己的情況，表明寫信目的：申請(qǐng)助學(xué)貸款。___________________________________________________________________________：Therefore, college students should attach more importance to cultivating a good character rather than pursuing famous ：很多同學(xué)經(jīng)常玩電腦游戲，這是浪費(fèi)時(shí)間，而不是一種有益的放松方式?！炯丫渑R摹】：It is irrational for college students to pursue famous ：對(duì)大學(xué)生來說，了解校園以外的世界是非常必要的。not…but連接并列成分。beyond表示“超出…范圍”。[6] it為形式主語，不定式為真正主語。[3] follow表示“跟隨，追求(趨勢(shì)或時(shí)尚)”[4]用于引出原因。Students’ Pursuit for Famous BrandsNowadays many college students like to pursue famous clothes to mobile phones, even study articles like electronic dictionaries and pens, they [1]are inclined to buy famous brands.[2]Moreover, many students from poor families begin to [3]follow this consumption trend as phenomenon has aroused wide attention.[4]The following reasons can account for college students’ preference for famous brands.[2]Above all, in many college students’ eyes, a famous brand is a symbol of sophistication and expect others to admire their high class and good taste.[2]What’s more, in modern society, famous brands to some extent are equal to fashion, [5]which has a great attraction to young college students.[2]Besides, parents’ spoiling their children helps form their bad consumption habit.[2]As far as I am concerned, [6]it is irrational for college students to pursue famous brands.[3]After all, most of famous brands are [7]far beyond their consumption ability.[3]Besides, [8]it is not famous brands but a person’s noble character that really makes him high class.[3]Therefore, college students should attach more importance to cultivating a good character [9]rather than pursuing famous brands.【亮點(diǎn)點(diǎn)評(píng)】[1]“有…傾向”。分析大學(xué)生熱衷名牌的原因。提綱第1點(diǎn)指出一種現(xiàn)象，提綱第2點(diǎn)要求分析產(chǎn)生這種現(xiàn)象的原因，提綱第3點(diǎn)要求談?wù)劇拔摇睂?duì)該現(xiàn)象的看法，由此可判斷本文應(yīng)為現(xiàn)象解釋型作文。：From my point of view, we should be more rational when it es to ：我認(rèn)為，對(duì)于我們來說，更重要的是盡可能提高自己的能力而不是獲得更多的證書。【佳句臨摩】：You may get the answer that he or she is preparing for a certificate of some ：離婚率上升盡管令人難過，但卻是不爭(zhēng)的事實(shí)。[10]“只是，僅僅”。[8]“當(dāng)談到或提及…時(shí)”。[6]which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句，充當(dāng)介詞賓語。[4]設(shè)問句引出原因，容易引起注意。[2]限定詞使用恰當(dāng)，使文章表達(dá)更嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)，增強(qiáng)了說服力。Certificate Craze on CampusIn recent years, getting a certificate has bee a new craze among college students.[1]Just randomly ask a student on campus what he or she is busy doing, [2]quite possibly, you may get the answer [3]that he or she is preparing for a certificate [2]of some kind.[4]Why does this craze appear?[4]There are mainly two reasons behind this , [5]it is the employment pressure that forces college students to get more the admission expansion of colleges, a lot more graduates have to face the fierce petition in the job can one make himself more petitive? More certificates at hand, , diploma and certificates are still important standards [6]by which many employers measure a person’s order to increase the qualifications for a job, the students pel themselves to run from one exam to another.[7]From my point of view, we should be more rational [8]when it es to certificates,