【正文】 賀卡屋、花店、糖果店、面包房、電話公司，還有許多其他商店在節(jié)日里會大做生意。這些親手**的禮物比那些花錢買來的更有價值。另一傳統(tǒng)習(xí)俗是贈送卡片和禮物。人們也常在父親節(jié)那天舉辦露天燒烤聚會。許多人參加宗教儀式以向父母致意，或去公墓緬懷逝去的父母。在母親節(jié)那天，人們佩戴康乃馨。父母們把孩子們帶大，教育他們成為有責(zé)任感的公民，并給予他們愛心和關(guān)懷。史密斯于1972年幫助把父親節(jié)推廣成為全國性節(jié)日。參議員瑪格麗特她母親去世后，是父親擔(dān)起了養(yǎng)活五子一女的責(zé)任。她想向自己的父親威廉姆是她選擇了五月的第二個星期日，也是她開始了佩戴康乃馨的習(xí)俗。西弗吉尼亞州格拉弗頓區(qū)的安母親節(jié)作為一個全國性節(jié)日是伍德羅s Day and Father39。NOTE 注釋： , 康乃馨 , 公墓 。禮物的貴賤并不重要，“重要的是對父母的拳拳之心”。孩子們在學(xué)校親手制作，許多成年人也自制禮物。這是充滿歡歌笑語、美好情感和無限深情的日子。在這兩天，家家都會聚在餐館或家中。佩戴紅色康乃馨表示母親依然健在，佩戴白色康乃馨則表示母親已經(jīng)去世。人們用各種形式來慶賀這兩個特殊的日子。這兩天是兒女向父母表示一片愛心和敬重之情的日子。１９１０年，第一個父親節(jié)在斯波肯區(qū)誕生。她想向自己的父親威廉姆?斯馬特表示感激之情。是她選擇了五月的第二個星期日，也是她開始了佩戴康乃馨的習(xí)俗。母親節(jié)作為一個全國性節(jié)日是伍德羅?威爾遜總統(tǒng)于１９１５年宣布的。繼父、伯父、祖父，所有成年男性都將在父親節(jié)受到尊敬。一些賀卡也會送上一些衷心的感激之辭，感謝父親在需要之時一如既往的守護(hù)。通常，父親會更喜歡不太感傷的賀卡。在“父親節(jié)”這一天，孩子們會為父親做特別的甜點(diǎn)，如果和父親不住在一起則會邀請父親到家中來。其后，其他的州及組織開始游說國會將“父親節(jié)”作為每年的例行節(jié)日。不管“父親節(jié)”到底是什么時候出現(xiàn)的，這個節(jié)日最強(qiáng)大的推動者都是多德太太。在六月的第三個星期天，全美國的父親都將收到禮物、被邀請就餐或以其他一些方式有一種特別的感受。s Day)The United States is one of the few countries in the world that has an official day on which fathers are honored by their the third Sunday in June, fathers all across the United States are given presents, treated to dinner or otherwise made to feel origin of Father’s Day is not say that it began with a church service in West Virginia in say the first Father’s Day ceremony was held in Vancouver, president of the Chicago branch of the Lions’ Club, Harry Meek, is said to have celebrated the first Father’s Day with his organization in 1915。s Day has bee a day to not only honor your father，but all men who act as a father ，uncles，grandfathers，and adult male friends are all honored on Father39。s in 1966 President Lyndon Johnson signed a presidential proclamation declaring the 3rd Sunday of June as Father39。s Day was observed on June 19，1910 in Spokane about the same time in various towns and cities across American other people were beginning to celebrate a “father39。s day” in wanted a special day to honor her father，William Smart，a Civil War veteran，was widowed when his wife（39。s day” was first proposed there were no Father39。s Day）Father39。本文語言樸實(shí)，通篇未見十分復(fù)雜的語句，但措辭準(zhǔn)確，各類短語、句式運(yùn)用到位；行文流暢，用詞精練。全文布局合理，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，層次分明。m always your attentive listener.” Hearing these words，mother stops talking with her anger gone at funny scenes often appear between father and mother which makes our family life happy and is also very kind to often invites those poor temporary workers who are far away from home to have dinner with always helps our neighbors repair bikes，fill the flat，fix locks，and so any one is in trouble，he never hesitates to offer his warm this earns him lots of friends and their respect as is filled with enterprise in his lost many chances of studying before he has never given up learning all the has read many books on architecture in order to work much better as a has gone through lots of difficulties because of his inadequate he hasn39。s humor，kindness，enterprise，strong will ever since I was a little is wellknown for his always makes use of his wit and humor to relax tense situation at is m humorous that his colleagues and friends all enjoy staying with also uses humor to create a very happy family mother tends to chatter over little she talks angrily without any this happens，father just listens to her without a word.“Why don39。作者沒有運(yùn)用太多復(fù)雜的句式，但能適當(dāng)運(yùn)用介詞短語、分詞結(jié)構(gòu)、強(qiáng)調(diào)及重復(fù)的手法，恰到好處 地突出了行文句式的變化，使文章更耐讀。作者用詞簡潔精確，并能很好地嘗試一些新學(xué)的詞匯及表達(dá)，使簡潔的行。m pursuing further studies at college far away from miss him very I often see him in my great image is deeply carved in my 評語：本文作者以樸實(shí)的語言充滿感情地刻畫了父親的不平凡的形象，分別從四個不同的角度描述了父親的勤勞、奉獻(xiàn)、關(guān)愛和樂觀。re living a better life is his full devotion that both my brother and I are able to study at shows much care to us children and my mother as there is any delicious food on the table, he just leaves it to us while he takes the simple one my brother and I fall ill, he will not hesitate a moment to get some medicine for us or take us to see the mother suffers a bad looks after h