【正文】 五、練習(xí)：將下列記敘的要素重新組合，并加上標(biāo)點(diǎn)，使其更加合理：（一）、由于天氣比較冷，我騎車騎得飛快突然“咔嚓”一聲我從城里看望朋友回學(xué)校那是前年冬天的一個(gè)晚上像在參加比賽原來是車鏈子斷了我猛地一捏閘，結(jié)果稀里糊涂就被重重地摔在了地上 正確的順序：（二）、我決定自己做一次飯我一個(gè)人在家里看家爸爸媽媽都去地里干活了我的肚子已經(jīng)餓得“咕咕”叫了一個(gè)星期天的上午爸爸夸我長大了都11點(diǎn)多了，爸爸媽媽還沒有回來正確的順序：六、備選題目：我真慚愧我和哥哥偷苞米他幫助了我這件事真糟糕我學(xué)會了寬容誠實(shí)真好我真想——。爸沒說什么，打開了手中的包袱，拿出來的是我的花夾襖。我看看老師，征求他的同意，老師也微笑地點(diǎn)點(diǎn)頭，表示答應(yīng)我出去。正在靜默的當(dāng)中，我的肩頭被拍了一下，急忙地睜開了眼，原來是老師站在我的位子邊。坐直身子，手背在身后，閉上眼睛，靜靜地想五分鐘。是啊，如果我們在生活中能將心比心，就會對老人生出一份尊重，對孩子增加一份關(guān)愛，就會使人與人之間多一些寬容和理解。我真希望她第一次扎針的時(shí)候，也能得到患者的寬容和鼓勵(lì)。要不是您的鼓勵(lì)，我真不敢給您扎了。那位護(hù)士終于長出了一口氣，她連聲說：“阿姨，真對不起。我正要抱怨幾句，一抬頭看見了母親平靜的眼神——她正在注視著護(hù)士額頭上密密的汗珠，我不禁收住了涌到嘴邊的話。成果展示，師生共評。教師出示幾例題目，學(xué)生小組為單位任選一例，列寫作提綱。小組合作將六要素有效組合成完整的一段話。教師出示題目：老師批評了我。教師出示記敘要素，學(xué)生將要素重新組合，加上標(biāo)點(diǎn)，使其更加合理。讓豐厚的感情和豐富的思想體現(xiàn)在看似平平淡淡的往事之中，情真才能意切（以林海音的《爸爸的花兒落了》為例說明這一問題）。② 出示課文《將心比心》片段，學(xué)生提煉出記敘文片段的六要素。記敘要素要清楚。動筆之前，要把文章的中心意思確定下來，并圍繞中心意思來選取材料。二、寫作引入。三、11月8號話題雨11月9號話題朋友11月10號話題錢（昨天今天明天）11月11號話題我喜歡的一本書第五篇：寫作訓(xùn)練之一寫作訓(xùn)練之一如何交代清楚記敘文的六要素一、訓(xùn)練目標(biāo) ：1．把生活中感觸最深的一件事記下來，交代清楚記敘的六要素。語句通順，會用一點(diǎn)修辭手法。did he knowD did he get。he knewB did he get。so you have 7 Maybe you have been to many countries,but nowhere else____such a beautiful place.（2004年遼寧卷）A can you find B you could find C you can find D could you find 8 ______,Carolina couldn39。so have youC So has he。in which 47 In an hour,we can travel to places____would have taken our ancestors days to whereB whenC whichD what 48 I saw a woman running toward me in the I could recognise who she was,she had run back in the direction____she had of whichB by whichC in whichD from which 49 We will be shown around the city,schools,museums,and some other places,____other visitors seldom whatB whichC whereD when 50 When people talk about the historic spots in Bejing,the first____es into mind is the Fobbidden whichB thatC oneD place倒裝句專項(xiàng)訓(xùn)練試題 ______can you expect to get a pay rise.（2001北京春季卷）A With hard workB Although work hardC Only with hard workD Now that he works hard I failed in the final examination last term and only then______the importance of studies.（2004重慶卷）A I realized B I had realizedC had I realized D did I realizeI would never e to this restaurant food is .(2004全國卷)A Nor am IB Neither would IC same with meD So do I 4 ______snacks and drinks, but they also brought cards for entertainment when they had a piic in the forest.（2004上海卷）A Not only they broughtB Not only did they bringC Not only brought theyD Not only they did bring 5 ______about wild plants that they decided to make a trip to Madagascar for further research.(2005江蘇卷)A So curious the couple wasB So curious were the coupleC How curious the couple wereD The couple was such curious 6David has made great progress recently.—_____,and _____.(2005上海卷)A So he has。whichC at which。不填 Look out!Do not get too close to the house____roof is under whoseB which C of whichD that 3 We are just trying to reach a point____both sides will sit down together and whereB thatC whenD which 4Do you have anything to say for youselves?Yes,there is one point____we must insist whyB whereC howD 不填 The manager discussed the plan that they would like to see____the next carry outB carrying outC carried outD to carry out We saw several natives advancing towards our party,and one of them came up to us,____we gave some warm to whichB to whomC with whomD with which 7 ____has been announced,we shall have our final exams next ThatB AsC It D What 8 The Beatles,____many of you are old enough to remember,came from whatB thatC howD as 9 They were interested____you told in which B in that C all thatD in everthing 10 He is the only one of the students who____a winner of scholarship for three isB areC have beenD has been 11 What surprised me most was not what he said but____he said the wayB in the way th