【正文】 d Z0 L8 Q) M2 a$ y* r. u c5 d。 d OAnother definition people should figure out is that to achieve the realistic goals does not mean undistinguished work, and dreams is not always beautiful at the same time. Nobody can achieve succeed without careful plan and hard work, the best dream finally will down to the earth. Steven Jobs is not successful when he is young, and obviously millions Jobs have the same dream but finally only one found a pany named Apple. It is hard work step by step make him stand in Silicon Valley’s sharp pyramid. Everyone knows well his success but few care about his daily life: 25years ago when he is fired by the pany once he established, already he is a billionaire, the ambitious dream already realized. The energy support him came back and save Apple from death to the second glory is carefully plan and baldness work to achieve small goals one by one.Additionally, it can be abstracted a ambitious dream is a further plan, and the realistic goal is a shortterm one, the environment to achieve the further plan is changing every time and the shortterm plan is the foundation to step on the stairs to reach the terminal. Focus on realistic goals, even the condition changed, people have groundwork to rely on and adjust the way to go on, this is the right method to achieve ambitious dream.39。 R8 r1 ~。 o: n39。not。 ?3 z9 l39。 x, Z39。t hinder myself by what I thought is important but put my efforts into what is really important. The idea of making the tool a universal one was fantastic, but that was much more plex than just for this particular project. Since the deadline was drawing near, I should focus myself one the project. Her words really shed some light on my problem. Thereafter I quickly managed to implement the tool just for that project and her advice is always in my mind ever after.Although we should always listen to the criticisms from others in the team, it is also critical to have the ability to judge if their judgments are positive or negative. Believe or not, there are always people that don’t want others to win. So whenever others are criticizing you, you must try to figure out if they are for your good or just for themselves, or even want to hurt you. With that principle in mind, you should be able to learn a lot from your colleagues and will find that you are never that close to successful.（范文三修改后）When working in a team environment, it seems unavoidable to get criticisms from your coworkers or supervisors. I believe those who always listen to other’s criticisms wisely are more likely to be successful.It is undeniable that you can learn a lot from the advice and judgments from those who are more experienced than yourself. Take myself as an example: When I was a technical director, there was one time we were working on an important project. My task was to develop a dedicated tool for that project. The assignment was pretty exciting and I already worked out a promising framework. Then I realized that the tool I was creating had the potential to bee a universal tool that could serve for any project. However, after several attempts, I had to admit that I was stuck. Unable to find the right way to implement the code made me feel uneasy and nervous. Then my supervisor came to check on me, she was curious why the progress was so slow since my framework was pretty good. Knowing my concerns, she gave me a valuable advice, that I shouldn39。 success is not far away if you can accept the criticism when you are wrong. Remember that the world does not exist without the shortings of people. The old sayings, that is ” No gold is pure and no man is perfect” , has its significant place in the long history. We should not have the idea of we are always right. Sometime we should just act as the good listener to refine our thoughts.Another important reason is that we are a member of a team. The team’s power is often stronger than individual. You can not ignore the importance of others in the group. There will be a one who will be an expert in the field where you are not good at. So we should take advantage of the utility of others in the team and get suggestions from others. Through this way we can more easily to succeed.Apart from the point I made above there is also a well known fashion all over the world that there is strength in numbers. Many hands make light work. If you accept others’ criticism, it means that you accept others’ perspective and you can do better.In a word, two hands are better than one. You should be more readily to listen to others to achieve your goals.（范文三修改前）When working in cooperation, it seems unavoidable to get criticisms from your coworkers or supervisors. The idea that one should accept others39。 criticisms. Gradually, we will find that this is such a meaningful way to live a wonderful life. （范文二）Depending on personal experience, personality type and emotional concern, we find that some people hold different ideas about whether someone will be succeed if he does not accept criticism in a team. From my perspective, I agree with that someone will be more likely to get to the destination if he readily accepts others’ criticism.