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審題 人稱 : 第三人稱 時態(tài) : 一般過去時 要點 : 1. 1997年 10%的人 有手機 20%的人有手機 50%的人有手機 80%的人有手機 篇章結(jié)構(gòu) : and reasons own opinion/ suggestions — Conclusion The chart above shows the increasing number of mobile phones ,要體現(xiàn)出數(shù)據(jù)之間的變化 — Facts to the first column, only 10 percent of the population owned mobile phones in 1997. 1999 the number doubled , reaching 20 in 100. (1). It increased by 10% in 1999. (2) It is 10% higher than that of 1997. 3. The people owning mobile phones in 2020 were 5 times as many as those in 1997. (2).The number became larger and larger— 20% in 1999 and 50% in 2020. (1).There was a great rise in 2020— the rate reached up to 50%. 4. Three years later, 80 percent of the citizens had the magic tools. (1).By parison with 2020,it increased from 50% to 80%. (2).In 2oo4, nearly 80% people enjoyed the convenience offered by the mobile p