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? 最后,保持 語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)單明了 。 ? 其次,如果縮寫中出現(xiàn)了 不必要的細(xì)節(jié)、詞匯、短語(yǔ)或長(zhǎng)句子 , 刪除或概括 它們。 Writing skill ? 第一人稱 說(shuō)的話通常在縮寫中轉(zhuǎn)換成 第三人稱 ,從而把大段的 對(duì)白簡(jiǎn)化 ,比如: Writing skill ? Kate looked at Paul disapprovingly: You use much too much salt on your food, Paul — it’s not good for you!” Paul put down his knife and frowned: ”Why on earth not! If you didn’t have salt on your food it would taste awful… like eating cardboard硬紙板 or sand… just imagine bread without salt in it, or potatoes or pasta面團(tuán) cooked without salt!” Kate was patient. She didn’t want to quarrel with Paul. She wanted to persuade him. She said firmly: ”But too much salt is bad for you. It cause high blood pressure and latter on, heartattacks. It also disguises掩蓋 the taste of food, the real tastes which are much more subtle微妙的 than salt, and which we have lost the sensitivity to appreciate any more.” (136words) ? 可以用第三人稱概括為: ? Kate quarreled/disagreed with Paul over how much salt they should eat. She wanted less, but he wanted more. ? (18wo