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6)排比(排山倒海句) 文學(xué)作品中最吸引人的地方莫過于此,如果非要讓你的文章更加精彩的話,那么我希望 你引用一個個的排比句,一個個得對偶句,一個個的不定式,一個個地詞,一個個的短語,如此表達將會使文章有排山倒海之勢! Whether your tastes are modern or traditional, sophisticated or simple, there is plenty in London for you. Nowadays, energy can be obtained through various sources such as oil, coal, natural gas, solar heat, the wind and ocean tides. We hav。 舉例: This is what I can do. Whether he can go with us or not is not sure. 同樣主語、賓語、表語可以改成如下的復(fù)雜成分: When to go, Why he goes away… 5)附加(多此一舉) 如果有了老婆,總會遇到這樣的情況,當(dāng)你再講某個人的時候,她會插一句說,我昨天見過他;或者說,就是某某某,如果把老婆的話插入到我們的話里面,那就是定語從句和同位語從句或者是插入語。文章中如果出現(xiàn)這樣的句子,就更會讓考官看到你的句子與眾不同。 The car was quite old, yet it was in excellent condition. The coat was thin, but it was warm. 更多的短語: despite that, still, however, nevertheless, in spite of, despite, notwithstanding 3)因果( so, so, so) 昨天在街上我看到了一個女孩,然后我主動搭訕,然后我們?nèi)タХ葟d,然后我們認識了,然后我們成為了朋友 … 可見,講故事的時候我們總要追求先后順序,先什么,后什么,所以然后這個詞就變得很常見了。比如說: I enjor music and he is fond of playing guitar. 如果是二者并列的,我們可以用一個超級句式: Not only the fur coat is soft, but it is also warm. 其它的短語可以用: besides, furthermore, likewise, moreover 2)轉(zhuǎn)折(拐彎抹角) 批評某人缺點的時候,我們總習(xí)慣先拐彎抹角說說他的優(yōu)點,然后轉(zhuǎn)入正題,再說缺點,這種方式雖然陰險了點,可畢竟還比較容易讓人接受。比如我們說一個很好的時候,不應(yīng)該之說 nice 這樣空洞的詞,應(yīng)該使用一些諸如generous, humorous, interesting, smart, gentle, warmhearted, hospital 之類的形象詞。這就要求一定要多用實詞,少用虛詞。其二、關(guān)鍵時刻思維短路,只有湊字數(shù),怎么辦?用短語是一個辦法!比如: I cannot bear it. 可 以用短語表達: I cannot put up with it. I want it. 可以用短語表達: I am looking forward to it. 這樣字數(shù)明顯增加,表達也更準確。 1) first, second, third, last(不推薦,原因:俗) 2) firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally(不推薦,原因:俗) 3) the first, the second, the third, the last(不推薦,原因:俗) 4) in the first place, in the second place, in the third place, lastly(不推薦,原因:俗) 5) to begin with, then, furthermore, finally(強烈推薦) 6) to start with, next, in addition, finally(強烈推薦) 7) first and foremost, besides, last but not least(強烈推薦) 8) most important of all, moreover, finally 9) on the one hand, on the other hand(適用于兩點的情況) 10) for one thing, for another thing(適用于兩點的情況) 建議:不僅僅在寫作中注意,平時說話的時候也應(yīng)該條理清楚! 四、短語優(yōu)先原則 寫作時,尤其是在考試時,如果使用短語,有兩個好處:其一、用短語會使文章增加亮點,如果老師們看到你的文章太簡單,看不到一個自己不認識的短語,必然會看你低一等??脊賯兛次恼乱脖厝灰ㄟ^這些關(guān)鍵性的 “標(biāo)簽 ”來判定你的文章是否結(jié)構(gòu)清楚,條理自然。否則會給人造成 “群龍無首 ”之感!相信各位讀過一些破爛文學(xué),故意把主體隱藏在文章之內(nèi),結(jié)果造成我們稀里糊涂!不知所云!所以奉勸各位一定要寫一個主題句,放在文章的開頭(保險型)或者結(jié)尾,讓讀者一目了然,必會平安無事! 特別提示:隱藏主體句可是要冒險的! To begin with, you must work hard at your lessons and be fully prepared before the exam(主題句) . Without sufficient preparation, you can hardly expect to answer all the questions correctly. 三、一二三原則 領(lǐng)導(dǎo)講話總是第一部分、第一點、第二點、第三點、第二部分、第一點 … 如此羅嗦。 as a man, I read. Although one action is to meet the primary need of my body and the other is to satisfy the intellectual need of mind, they are in a way quite similar. 如此可見,長短句結(jié)合,抑揚頓挫,豈不爽哉?牢記! 強烈建議:在文章第一段(開頭)用一長一短,且先長后短;在文章主體部分,要先用一個短句解釋主要意思 ,然后在闡述幾個要點的時候采用先短后長的句群形式,定會讓主體部分妙筆生輝!文章結(jié)尾一般用一長一短就可以了。 英語四六級寫作七原則幫你構(gòu)造出彩句 一、長短句原則 工作還得一張一馳呢,老讓讀者讀長句,累死人!寫一個短小精辟的句子,相反,卻可以起到畫龍點睛的作用。盡管遇到的困難很大,中國人無疑會表現(xiàn)出不知疲倦的活力,在兩方面都取得巨大成功。然而,我們不能依靠他們的成績,而必須努力工作,取得更輝 煌的成就。對正誤的深刻認識是判定得體的社會行為所必需的。 What dose the future hold if mankind persists in wasting natural resources ? While no one knows for sure , scientists do exhibit a degree of certainty when predicting that future generations will face a dramatically diffrernt world . 如果人類繼續(xù)浪費自然資源,未來將會有什么貯藏 ?沒有人知道明確的答案,但是,科學(xué)家在預(yù)測后代將面對一個迥然不同的世界時確實有一定的把握。 Immediate solutions for solving problems surrounding poverty remain elusive . However , public recognition of the necessity to provide a better quality of life for millions of people will represent the first step in finding effective solutions . 立即解決貧困問題的辦法仍然是難以捉摸的。即使只獲得部分成功也會使人類受益,有利于創(chuàng)造一個更美好的世界。全世界的人必須立即行動,防止情況進一步惡化。 The time is right for us to take full advantage of ample existing opportunities . 這正是我們充分利用大量現(xiàn)有機會的時候。在決定工人工資和職位的時候,決定因素應(yīng)該是資格,而不是性別。然而,最主要的原因可能是極低效的管理、關(guān)系的普遍運用、任用親信和裙帶關(guān)系、大量過剩的勞動力、社會救濟金的濫用,當(dāng)然還包括 ****。abuses of social benefits 。the rampant practice of guanxi , cronyism and nepotism 。從嬰兒期到青春期的正確的家長教育決定一個成熟的個人的體質(zhì)及智力的狀況。 The raesons for poverty are many , but for the most part center on illiteracy , the lack of opportunities and in some cases pure laziness . 貧困的原因很多,但主要是因為缺少教育、缺少機會 ,有的情況下純粹是由于懶惰。因素之一是徹底放棄保護主義,另一個因素是采用普遍接受的國際會計規(guī)范。 Although we do not know the longterm consequences of separation or deprivation , we do know that they can produce acute immediate distress . 雖然我們不知道分離和喪失親人的長期后果,但我們知道它們能立即引起劇烈的悲痛。 One of the most mon failures of people today is to avoid telling the truth . People must realize that avoidance and lying have never in the past and , in fact , never will right a wrong . 如今人類最常見的一個不足是不說真話。成功的個人不斷尋求進步,而他們比較懶惰的同時代人僅僅滿足于現(xiàn)狀。以前盛行所謂的 “鐵飯碗 ”,但今天的情況有很大的不同。然而,今天,情況改變了,越來越多的中國家長意識到家庭成員越少越好。 . President Harry Truman once remarked : The buck stops here ! His view has been confirmed by numerous world leaders who have assumed full responsibility for their actions . 美國總統(tǒng)杜魯門曾經(jīng)說過: “責(zé)任止于此 !”(意為勿再把責(zé)任往別處推,這是杜魯門辦公室桌上的座右銘 )他的觀點得到了很多對自己的行動承擔(dān)完全責(zé)任的世界領(lǐng)袖的肯定。出現(xiàn)這種變化的原因是什么呢 ? Perhaps it is time to reexamine the idea that college degrees are a guarantee of intelligence . 也許現(xiàn)在是應(yīng)該重新考慮大學(xué)為是智力的保證這種想法的時候了。 Several years ago , Chinese streets were filled with people wearing identical drab clothing . Today , however , things are quite different and the streets are awash with people wearing fashionable bright colored outfits . Why has the change taken place ? 許多年前,中國大街上的人都穿一樣的灰褐色衣服。 A growing number of people are beginning to realize that wealth is not the sole prerequisite for happiness . 越來越多的人開始意識到財富不是幸福的惟一先決條件。 Traditional way of thinking have changed dramatically . The pendulum has swung and people are exhibiting greater openmindedness and a burn