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therefore, I is not needed. It is not formal language to say I think, plus it is not needed. Examples:I think t hat cats are better than dogs. Change to: Cats are better than dogs. Take out all the I thinks, in my opinion, I will show, I will prove and any other personal phrases. Instead, make them into more general statements. 4. Use of You Your We Us Our Please do not use these words in a formal essay. Not only are they not formal language, but readers may be insulted if the author of the paper insinuates that You/We do something. It brings too personal of an approach to the writing and can make the reader unfortable. Examples: I think/ In my opinion Change to: more general statements I think War is a pointless activity. War is a pointless activity. You/Your Change to:A person/ people/ His/ Her/ One/ One39。etc. You can39。 V....take measures to do sth.例如: 1.We should take measures to control pollution in order to save the world. 2.We39??偨Y(jié)全文時(shí)除常用到in one /a word,generally speaking等外,沒(méi)有固定模式。 本結(jié)構(gòu)先用when it es to ...引出話(huà)題,再用some...others ...這個(gè)對(duì)立的結(jié)構(gòu)引出了兩種相反的觀點(diǎn),然后說(shuō)There is some truth in both...表明嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)公正的態(tài)度,最后用but...很自然地引出了自己的論點(diǎn)。 IV.When it es to...,some people think /believe that...,others argue /claim that opposite /reverse is true.There is probably some truth in both arguments /statements,but...當(dāng)說(shuō)到……,有些人認(rèn)為……,但另一些人則持相反的觀點(diǎn)……。不過(guò)在討論某些有爭(zhēng)議性的問(wèn)題時(shí),就顯得有欠缺,因?yàn)槲覀儽仨氃谖恼碌拈_(kāi)頭引出人們對(duì)要討論的問(wèn)題的不同看法,然后再表明自己的觀點(diǎn)。) 本結(jié)構(gòu)看似固定,實(shí)則富于變化,只要記住with有“隨著”的意思,相信大家可以根據(jù)實(shí)際的需要造出更多的句子。 3.With the deepening of Chinese reform and opening up,an increasing number of Chinese families can afford a car. 隨著中國(guó)改革開(kāi)放的深入,越來(lái)越多的中國(guó)家庭買(mǎi)得起車(chē)了。 2.With more and more women entering society,people39。例如: 1.Computers play an important role in science and technology. 2.Computers play a more and more important role in our life. Computers play an increasingly important role in our studies. 3.Education plays an important part in developing our mind. 4.Addiction to alcohol and drugs play a role in homelessness. 舉一反三: 1.Advertisement plays an informative role in our daily life. 2.In the past,letters played a decisive role in longdistance munication.But now ,telephone,fax have taken their place. III.With the development of...,隨著……的發(fā)展,例如: 1.With the development of our economy,m any Chinese families can afford a car. 2.With the developm