【正文】 It is therefore, necessary that some effective measures are taken to cultivate confidence and to pursue the ing goals. 建議措施的總起句子 , 引起下文，被動句子很有風采 . On the one hand, we should be sensible to encourage ourselves to imagine about the colorful future. On the other hand, it is demanding for us to punish ourselves in certain ways if we fail to hold on to our dream. 結(jié)構(gòu)很清晰 ,sensible 表明建議很理性 , 從反方面再談很辨證 . However, it is easier said than done. Practice is the most important factor. Only when you pay attention to it can you make it better sooner or later. 這個閃光的萬能句多達 25 個單詞，強調(diào)實踐的重要性 .而且還有諺語 ,表明建議用于實踐。此句很萬能，表明只有該積極事物讓我們永遠成功； 三： 5— 6 句話，承上啟下總結(jié)上文，兩點建議，展望美好未來 From what have been discussed above, It admits of no doubt that in doing things whether great or small there are more or less difficulties, it is much better for one to persevere than to despair. From 。想成功 但失敗因為他們不能堅持特別是遇到困難的時候， Only by being perseverant can they guarantee a success and have a strong will to always challenge 倒裝并列句在段落末尾寫，增加氣勢，第二段結(jié)尾很重要，不要晚節(jié)不保。 just because。 Many capable people who have the burning desire to win fail to achieve their goals just because they don’ t persist (是堅持的同意改寫 )especially when they face the music. 4 Many people who。此萬能句子是任何積極事物都可以幫助我們克服困難 ,征服挑戰(zhàn) ,走向成功 . Unless we stick to our dream,(適當把主題詞進行同義替換 )we will live a dull and depressing life and feel frustrated and humiliated, only to be eliminated. 雙重否定句子從反面論證宏觀說明危害性，如果缺乏該積極事物就生活郁悶挫折被競爭所淘汰。該段首句設(shè)置爆發(fā)力句型，增加氣勢，讓老師給出很高的第一印象分，借此開頭很有特色。從正面列舉該積極事物的好處 ,克服困難 , 征服挑戰(zhàn) , 完善自我 ,走向成功 ,創(chuàng)造輝煌從反面列舉沒有這個積極事物時的不好 , 郁悶迷茫 , 無成就感和前進動力 , 失敗挫折感，而且要舉例證明使觀點具體化，并以倒裝并列句結(jié)尾，畫龍點睛。 第二句表明的圖畫的最大特色是什么。 第一段 (1)As is vividly depicted in the picture, ， which seems to be humorous and ridiculous but thoughtprovoking on second thoughts.(2)The most striking feature that impresses me deeply is that unbelievably, ， (3)Recent few years has witnessed a phenomenon of 主題 which seems to be disastrous to individual survival and prosperity. (4)This phenomenon of 主題 should be condemned severely or made illegal. (5)There is no doubt that its symbolic meaning subtly conveyed should be given deep consideration. 中間段落從兩方面論證問題的危害，并舉例論證，預測危害的趨勢 (1) To account for the abovementioned phenomenon, several serious effects have been put forward. (2)To begin with,主題 not only results does harm to our physical and mental health but also results in a frustrating and humiliating life. (3)In addition, nothing is more harmful than 主題 to contradict with a harmonious society. (4)Last but not the least, no issue is as harmful as 主題 to increase family burdens, which is a threatening situation we are unwilling to see. (5)No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the example mentioned below . (6)According to a survey made by China Daily, % of young people who have ever experienced 主題 will live a dull life or even feel loss of hope about the future. (7)If we cannot take useful means, we may not control this trend, and some undesirable results may e out unexpectedly, we will see the gloomy future of something. 最后一段要強調(diào)解決問題，談的兩點建議通常是提高人們的意識，加強執(zhí)法 (1)From what have been discussed above, it is therefore, necessary that some effective measures are taken to prevent 主題 . (2)On the one hand, we should be sensible to strengthen the 2 enforcement of the laws to protect someth