【正文】 。亮點(diǎn)說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好地完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如get together，enjoy the full moon， share our stories等。m glad to hear from you. Now let me introduce the MidAutumn Festival to you. The MidAutumn Festival falls on the 15th of the 8th lunar month. It’s a big day for us Chinese people. All the family members get together to celebrate the festival. In the evening, we usually have a big dinner. And then we go outside and enjoy the full moon. The moon that night looks the brightest. With the beautiful moon up in the sky, we sit together to eat mooncakes, and share our stories.For me, the best part is to enjoy the moon and eat mooncakes. Mooncakes taste very delicious. They look like the moon, big and round.Yours,Li Hua【解析】【詳解】本篇寫作是以書信的方式向筆友介紹中國(guó)的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日中秋節(jié)，要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)來寫。Dear Jessica, I39。內(nèi)容須包含以下所有要點(diǎn)：1. 中秋節(jié)的時(shí)間；2. 中秋節(jié)的傳統(tǒng)習(xí)俗及慶祝方式：全家人一起吃飯, 賞月, 吃月餅等；3, 我最期待的活動(dòng)。10．李華的英國(guó)筆友Jessica來信說, 她想了解中國(guó)的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日中秋節(jié)。修改潤(rùn)色是獲取高分的必要步驟。同時(shí)還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動(dòng)筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡(jiǎn)潔性。通常書面表達(dá)給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。構(gòu)思提綱。審好題是寫好書面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。文章的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。假如你是李華，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下表格內(nèi)的要點(diǎn)提示，并結(jié)合你的家庭實(shí)際情況，給你的英國(guó)筆友Sam寫一封信，向他介紹一下你的家規(guī)，并向他展示一個(gè)溫情智慧的中國(guó)家庭。家規(guī)是中華民族傳統(tǒng)文化的重要組成部分。注意固定搭配及主謂一致的問題，例如:There was/ were...注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系，具有條理性。作文要包含材料上的所有信息，通過介紹這個(gè)故事，發(fā)表看法或者觀點(diǎn)。目的是宣傳和弘揚(yáng)中華優(yōu)秀傳統(tǒng)文化。要求：1. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié), 以使行文連貫：詞數(shù)：100左右. 2. 不得在作文中出現(xiàn)學(xué)校的真實(shí)名稱、老師和同學(xué)的真實(shí)姓名。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面的內(nèi)容提示, 用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文參加此活動(dòng)。短文中句子結(jié)構(gòu)以簡(jiǎn)單句為主，也使用了并列句和復(fù)合句以及一些較復(fù)雜的高級(jí)句式，語(yǔ)句之間也使用了較好的連接成分，如We should be polite to others and try to behave well. 、It’s kind of you to help people in need. 、Meanwhile, We can help clean up our city in order to make it clearer and tidier.、We can’t spit anywhere and we shouldn’t throw rubbish everywhere. At the same time, we shouldn’t break traffic 。文章條理清晰，有層次?！军c(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求，向中學(xué)生們發(fā)出號(hào)召，共同參與到城市“雙創(chuàng)”活動(dòng)中來。寫作時(shí)應(yīng)注意：首先英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語(yǔ)是不同的，不能逐詞翻譯，寫漢語(yǔ)式的英語(yǔ)，而應(yīng)從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)考慮，使用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯、短語(yǔ)和句型，以常見的主謂賓或者主系表構(gòu)成的簡(jiǎn)單句為主，穿插使用并列句或者復(fù)合句，改變文章節(jié)奏，提升文章檔次。根據(jù)這個(gè)內(nèi)容，寫作時(shí)，把短文分成兩個(gè)層次，這樣可以使文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰、條理。題目中并沒有規(guī)定具體的寫作內(nèi)容，而是用圖表的形式，列出了寫作的提綱。要求：，意思連貫，語(yǔ)法正確，書寫規(guī)范；，并做適當(dāng)?shù)耐卣梗?. 行文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)人名、校名或地名；4. 詞數(shù)80左右，（短文的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；Since the government created the civilized and healthy city, our living environment has improved a lot. Everyone plays an important role in building our city, so good behaviors can be seen everywhere.As junior high students,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Let’s take action now. Our actions can make a difference and lead to a more beautiful city.【答案】Since the government created civilized and healthy city, our living environment has improved a lot. Everyone plays an important role in building our city, so good behaviors can be seen everywhere.As junior high students, on the one hand, there are a lot of things we can do. We should be polite to others and try to behave well. It’s kind of you to help people in need. Meanwhile, We can help clean up our city in order to make it clearer and tidier. Also, we can plant more trees and keep off grass. On the other hand, there are many things we shouldn’t do. We shouldn’t make a lot of noise loudly in the public. We can’t spit anywhere and we shouldn’t throw rubbish everywhere. At the same time, we shouldn’t break traffic rules.Let’s take action now. Our actions can make a difference and lead to a more beautiful city.【解析】【詳解】瓊海正在進(jìn)行“雙創(chuàng)”活動(dòng)，即創(chuàng)建文明城市、創(chuàng)建健康城市，城市的生活環(huán)境有了很大的改變。自雙創(chuàng)以來，我們的生活環(huán)境得到了很大的改觀，人人積極參與雙創(chuàng)活動(dòng)，讓人點(diǎn)贊的文明行為隨處可見。t get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams too much.、My parents wanted me to be the top student in my class、In this way, I feel less stressed out so