【正文】 在收尾部分表達(dá)了作者積極的人生態(tài)度，表示如果還有機(jī)會自己還樂于參與，這樣使得這篇文章結(jié)構(gòu)完整，表意更加清晰。寫作亮點：既然這是一篇記敘文，就應(yīng)該完整地呈現(xiàn)故事，需要加上必要的背景，指明時間（Last summer），地點（in rural area），簡要概括事件（teach children English），這是文章首句的點睛之筆，信息量豐富。【答案】Last summer,though it was hot,I volunteered to teach children English in rural I arrived there,I couldn39。10．寫作某英文網(wǎng)站的“ Student Life”欄目正在向中學(xué)生征文，標(biāo)題為“ A time when I made someone happy”，請你寫一篇英文稿件，內(nèi)容需包括以下要點:1. Who was the person you made happy?2. When was it?3. What did you say or do?4. Why did it make him/her happy?5. How did you feel at that moment?注意：1．詞數(shù)：100左右（題目不計入總詞數(shù)）。寫作時，避免漢語式英語。時態(tài)為一般過去時，靈活運(yùn)用動詞的過去式?！敬鸢浮縇ong long ago, there was a man called Yangshi. Once he went to visit his teacher, Chengyi. Unfortunately, Mr. Cheng was sleeping in the room. He didn’t wake up the teacher. So he stood in front of the gate. At that moment, there were snowflakes flying over his head and it was very cold. But yangshi still stood in the snow until Mr. Cheng woke up. When the teacher woke up, the snow was very deep. Yangshi was like a snowman standing at the gate. Finally, the teacher was moved deeply.After reading the story, I think we should respect our teacher. We should study hard.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇材料作文，主要介紹中國的經(jīng)典故事, “程門立雪（Stand in the snow to wait for Master Cheng respectfully）”。內(nèi)容提示：1. 楊時去拜見老師程頤一老師在睡覺一楊時在雪地等一老師醒來發(fā)現(xiàn)楊時在門口2. 通過介紹這個故事, 發(fā)表你的看法或者觀點。9．為了宣傳和弘揚(yáng)中華優(yōu)秀傳統(tǒng)文化, 某雙語雜志將舉辦征文活動來介紹中國的經(jīng)典故事, “程門立雪（Stand in the snow to wait for Master Cheng respectfully）”是其中一個選題。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；語言表達(dá)要符合英語習(xí)慣。要求仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確本文主要從三個方面來寫：介紹足球運(yùn)動及其好處；說說自己的偶像；談?wù)勛约旱膲粝?。短文的開頭已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)；，不要逐詞翻譯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使短文連貫、通順；、校名等相關(guān)信息。請你以足球迷的身份，根據(jù)下列表格中的要點提示，用英語向同學(xué)們介紹足球這項運(yùn)動并談?wù)勛约旱膲粝搿Ｎ闹杏玫搅艘恍┖玫木湫停篢he air is badly polluted because there are more cars on the road these days.；We can plant more trees and more trees in order to live better and more 。表述靈活。2.內(nèi)容上應(yīng)注意描述的全面性；語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。要求中已經(jīng)給出了部分提示，動筆先應(yīng)先認(rèn)真閱讀提示，確定寫作內(nèi)容。,詞數(shù)不少于80。7．環(huán)保話題是人們最關(guān)心的話題之一，請以Change for a better China為主題，結(jié)合自己家鄉(xiāng)的變化寫一篇英語短文。語言準(zhǔn)確、得體，表達(dá)自然、流暢。其次短文中使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱，語法規(guī)范，用詞準(zhǔn)確，注意了動詞正確形式的變化。短文分三段，第一段基本是題目中給出的開頭，作者使用一句話引出下文；第二段是主體，介紹了過去美好的回憶以及不開心的事情；最后一段對未來進(jìn)行了展望?！军c睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求，回憶了自己的初中生活，并展望了未來。句式結(jié)構(gòu)可以簡單句為基礎(chǔ)，穿插并列句、復(fù)合句以及其他復(fù)雜句式的使用，提升作文檔次。寫作時應(yīng)注意：文章中應(yīng)包括表格中的所有信息，不能遺漏要點；第三部分的內(nèi)容中還需要自己發(fā)揮想象力進(jìn)行補(bǔ)充，注意應(yīng)合情合理，與上文很好地銜接。內(nèi)容應(yīng)主要包括三部分：首先是初中三年里的美好回憶；然后是不開心的事情；最后展望自己未來的高中生活。題目中利用表格的形式，展示了文章的具體內(nèi)容，學(xué)生們可以此為提綱進(jìn)行寫作。s unbelievable that I39。不開心的事情； 。請你根據(jù)以下提示，寫一篇發(fā)言稿。6．馬上要初中畢業(yè)了，大家都是依依不舍的。整篇文章在謀篇布局上，比較嚴(yán)密。接下來說出自己對此事件的看法，不信守承諾會導(dǎo)致失去別人的信任，對大明的建議是除了認(rèn)錯之外，還需要再次保證永不再犯?！驹斀狻渴紫?，第一句話直接點明作者的觀點，大明是犯錯了的。The Importance of PromiseDear editor,People always emphasize（強(qiáng)調(diào)） the importance of the promise, and they hate people who break their promise. Promise is very important. Everyone should keep it. Yours,Tony【答案】The Importance of PromiseDear editor,People always emphasize（強(qiáng)調(diào)）the importance of the promise, and they hate people who break their promise.Recently, a thing happened to my friend, and I think it was really his fault. Last weekend, my friend Daming had a date with his friend Lingling to watch a movie. But he to