【正文】 增強邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。提示詞語:kind，politely, trouble, offer, proud，society提示問題:What do you think of showing kindness to others?How do you help them kindly in your daily life?What do you dream about being kind to them?It39。假如你是李華，請用英語寫一篇短文投稿，談?wù)勆钪心銓λ颂峁┥埔鈳椭慕?jīng)歷。同學(xué)們，請奉獻你的友善，為創(chuàng)建和諧社會做出貢獻。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用, 讓文章更出彩。使用了一些比較好的字句。應(yīng)用了較豐富的語言結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯，用詞準(zhǔn)確、句子通順、行文連貫、表達清楚，具有較強的語言運用能力。適當(dāng)使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。寫作中，應(yīng)注意描述的全面性，盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上；結(jié)合材料內(nèi)容，可知本文主要是第一人稱，一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)進行敘述。 【答案】Saving the EarthThe earth is our home. We should take care of it. But some things we have done are bad for the earth. We have polluted the earth and made it sick. We cut down too many trees and change rich land into desert. Many factories pour waste water into rivers and lakes. Pollution has caused some serious problems. For example, much of the land is poor, some rivers and lakes are dirty. Even the temperature of the earth is rising. The earth is crying for help.What shall we do to save it? My suggestions are that we should plant more trees, put the rubbish into dustbins and stop factories from pouring waste water directly into rivers. After all, we have only one earth. We should do everything we can to protect it, or we’ll be punished and lose our home.【解析】試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文,動筆前首先要認(rèn)真審題,弄清題意。根據(jù)提示，以“Saving the Earth”為題，寫一篇80詞左右的短文。句型：It is ＋adj. for sb. to do sth.；when引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句。文中采用first, second, finally表述自己的觀點，語言層次感很強，表達準(zhǔn)確。在寫作時,要根據(jù)提出的幾個問題為中心圍繞展開，再進行適當(dāng)?shù)难由臁 important for us to develop our good learning habits. I often do some things in my daily life：First, I get ready for new lessons before class. Second, I listen to the teachers carefully and take notes of the important points in every class. Third, I always finish my homework on time. At the same time, I do much reading every day. Finally, I work hard and turn to the teachers and classmates when I have difficulties.Only in this way can I learn better and improve myself faster.【解析】【詳解】1. 題干解讀：這是一篇提綱式作文。假如你是李華，請用英語寫一篇短文投稿，談?wù)勀闶窃趺醋龅?，以及為什么這樣做。 良好的學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣是成功的一半， 只有擁有了良好的學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣， 學(xué)習(xí)才能得到提高。s easy for me to go around. 他們的公寓在悉尼市中心，所以對我來說，到處走走很容易。Dear Sir/Madam,I’m glad to receive your and I have read it carefully. I have decided to live in ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I’m really looking forward to this study tour!Many thanks,Li Ming【答案】例文：Dear Sir/Madam,I’m glad to receive your and I have read it carefully. I have decided to live in the Green family. The old couple have no children but two dogs, so they will have more time to municate with me in English and I can play with their pets as well. Their flat is in the centre of Sydney, so it’s easy for me to go around. I can also use the Wifi to keep in touch with my parents. My family can afford the cost of 350 pounds.I’m lucky to have a buddy during my stay at your school. I expect him/her to help me with my problems in my study. I can chat with him/her in English to improve my speaking skills. I love history so I want to visit some places of interest at the weekend. I’m also curious about the local food and I want to have a taste.I’m really looking forward to this study tour!Many thanks,Li Ming【解析】【詳解】這是一篇應(yīng)用作文，郵件內(nèi)容要回答郵件中的三個問題，可分為三個段落進行回答。2. 文章要求語意通順，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范，不能出現(xiàn)真實的姓名、校名等信息。請閱讀以下信息，并回復(fù)一封電子郵件。s easy for me to get alo