【正文】 請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示，為該欄目寫(xiě)一篇英文稿件，并鼓勵(lì)同學(xué)們積極參 加課外活動(dòng)。許多學(xué)校創(chuàng)造性地開(kāi)展了課外活動(dòng)，如朗誦、唱歌、講故事、演話劇、辦刊物以及舉辦各種體育活動(dòng)等。18．（它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開(kāi)思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。ve improved our spoken English with his help./ Next week Mr. Green will leave for ，豐富了習(xí)作內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣，是本文的最大亮點(diǎn)。而He came to teach English in our school three years ago./He is easy to get along with, but he39。s wish him a pleasant journey.【解析】亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。s helped us a lot in our Englishi studies. We39。s worked hard. He39?！敬鸢浮縇adies and Gentlemen,First of all, allow me to thank you for giving me a chance to speak here. Mr. Green is from Australia. He came to teach English in our school three years ago. He is easy to get along with, but he39。重慶中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá)假設(shè)格林（Green） 先生是你班的一位外籍教師，在他回國(guó)前夕，學(xué)校將為他舉行歡送會(huì)。點(diǎn)睛：首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn)；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作；在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過(guò)渡，必要時(shí)可適當(dāng)運(yùn)用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞，使文章過(guò)渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢；最后要檢查主題是否明確，表達(dá)方式是否恰當(dāng)，所用時(shí)態(tài)、人稱是否符合要求，語(yǔ)法、拼寫(xiě)、標(biāo)點(diǎn)、移行、大小寫(xiě)等方面是否有誤等。同時(shí)要注意語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫(xiě)太長(zhǎng)的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡(jiǎn)單的易拼寫(xiě)的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意郵件的格式，時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱主要為第一、第三人稱。Dear Peter, I’m Li ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours, Li Xin【答案】Dear Peter, I’m Li hear you are ing to Beijing to visit the Palace Museum .Let me introduce it to is also called Purple Forbidden City. It is the largest and most well reserved imperial residence in China was built in 1406. It took 14 years to build the Forbidden City. The first ruler who actually lived here was Ming Emperor visitors from the world visit it every day. In 1987,the United Nations Educational,Scientific and Cultural Organization recognized the Forbidden City was a World Heritage,the largest ancient palace in the all like think you will also like am looking forward to ing soon.Yours, Li Xin【解析】這是一篇提綱類作文，要求寫(xiě)一封電子郵件給你的新外教Peter，向他介紹北京故宮博物院。要點(diǎn)內(nèi)容：（the Forbidden City）的基本情況（又名……； 建于14061420；古代皇帝emperor 寢宮；……）（1987年UNESCO World Heritage；世界上最大的古代宮殿；……）。廣東中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá)假如你是九年級(jí)一班的李新，你們的新外教Peter想去北京參觀故宮博物院，希望你能給他作一個(gè)大概的介紹。英語(yǔ)作文，要忠實(shí)于材料，不必?cái)U(kuò)展，注意用好連詞，多用非謂語(yǔ)，慎用較難的句型，一定不能寫(xiě)錯(cuò)句?！敬鸢浮緾olorful weekdaysIt is my honor to show you our colorful activities and today I mainly tell you something about the part time activities in my school. Here is an introduction of my school’s part time activity. Our school has various activities after class. The activities begin at 4：20 and end at 5：20 every day. The groups on different subjects include sightseeing, speech contests, art festival, volunteer activities, and sports meeting and so on. Among them, I would like to take part in the sightseeing and art festival the most. Because the activities are wonderful.So I really hope that we can have less homework so we can have more time to participate in the part time activities to relax ourselves. Hope you can join us and enjoy every moment in my school!【解析】話題作文寫(xiě)出的句子要達(dá)意，完整，語(yǔ)法正確，合乎習(xí)慣，特別是句式，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞形式要有根有據(jù)，選用比較有把握的詞匯，用恰當(dāng)?shù)木湫蛯?xiě)出確切反映內(nèi)容要求的句子。河南中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá)你們學(xué)校的生活豐富多彩嗎？請(qǐng)以“Colorful weekdays”為題，介紹一下你們學(xué)校周一至周五（weekdays）都有哪些課外活動(dòng)。這些較好的句型和短語(yǔ)有We should build a harmonious class, because it’s important for us to grow up happily.、When I have some problems, I always talk to them and listen to their advice. 、When some of my classmates are sad, I’m always ready to give a hand and cheer them up.、I’m really good at English, but some of my classmates aren’t. I will help 。語(yǔ)法規(guī)范，句式表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)的習(xí)慣。短文中作者結(jié)合了自己日常生活中的所作所為，使文章的內(nèi)容非常真實(shí)。首先短文內(nèi)容完整、充實(shí)。另外還應(yīng)注意語(yǔ)句之間的連接，使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞或副詞，使文意銜接緊密、意思連貫。這是寫(xiě)作中的一個(gè)難點(diǎn)。這是一篇開(kāi)放性的作文，題目中只給出了話題和大概的一個(gè)提綱，具體的寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容需要我們自己思考，發(fā)揮想象力來(lái)充實(shí)完成。北京中考模擬）為了幫助同學(xué)們樹(shù)立集體觀念和提高班級(jí)責(zé)任感，你校英文報(bào)刊正在以“ Building a Harmonious Class” （創(chuàng)建和諧班級(jí)）為題征文，請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文投稿，談?wù)劙嗉?jí)成 員應(yīng)該如何創(chuàng)建一個(gè)和諧的班集體，作為一名成員，你通常是怎么做的，以及還需要再做些什么。切忌堆砌詞語(yǔ)和句子，注意運(yùn)用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞使句子連貫流暢。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開(kāi)思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。此外，picked up, bumped into, fell in two, put into, after a while等詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。提示詞：plate 盤(pán)子， trash can 垃圾桶, color pen 彩筆， color 給…上色， _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】After lunch, Li Hua picked up the plate and wanted to send it to the kitchen. He bumped into his brother named Li Zhong, and the plate fell in two. Li Hua was worried and going to put the broken plate into the trash can. His brother stopped him and said, Why not turn them into paintings? Li Hua agreed happily. Li Zhong brought color pens. They discussed a minute. After a while, two pieces of the plate turned into two beautiful fishes. They were very happy.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇看圖作文，要求根據(jù)圖畫(huà)敘述一個(gè)故事。山東中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá)根據(jù)所給圖畫(huà)，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇約80詞的短文。短文中使用了較豐富的句型和短語(yǔ)，如They pete for the first and cheer for the winner.、The student who jumps farthest must share the experience with his classmates.、Though the ball is very heavy, they throw balls again and again until they are satisfied with the result.、I think exercising is very useful to them.、Second, if they do sports every day, they will be healthier than 。短文以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主，正確使用了謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的形式。第二段中發(fā)表了自己的感想，升華了文章的主題。【點(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文?？梢院?jiǎn)單句結(jié)構(gòu)為主，穿插使用并列句和復(fù)合句，調(diào)整文章節(jié)奏，提升文章檔次。通過(guò)分析可知，這篇短文應(yīng)主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，根據(jù)表達(dá)的需要確定應(yīng)使用的時(shí)態(tài)。文章可以分兩段，第一段介紹圖片內(nèi)容，第二段談?wù)撟约旱南敕?。河北中考模擬）請(qǐng)以“Never Give Up”為題,寫(xiě)一篇短文,簡(jiǎn)要描述圖中的三個(gè)畫(huà)面,并談?wù)勛约旱南敕?要求:1. 文中不得涉及真實(shí)的人名,校名和地名?2. 可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,使短文連貫,通順?3. 詞數(shù):80個(gè)詞左右,已給出的部分不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)?提示詞:the long distance running, the ball throwing, the standing long jump, practiceNever Give UpThe . exam is ing. Students of Grade Nine prepare for it every day. Some___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________