【正文】 本文中時(shí)間詞如After supper，Sometimes，in the evening等的巧妙使用，使得本文看起來邏輯清楚，條理分明。為了使意思更加連貫可適當(dāng)使用連接詞。根據(jù)材料可知，本文主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，第三人稱進(jìn)行敘述，寫作中主語時(shí)態(tài)及主謂一致等問題。【答案】One possible versionDear Mary,I’m very glad to introduce（介紹） my classmate Zhang Ying to you. She is a 14yearold girl. She has a lot of good habits. She gets up early every morning. In class she likes to ask her teachers some questions. After school she always exercises （for a long time）. After supper she helps her parents with housework. （She is really a good girl. ）But she has some bad habits, too. She often eats junk food for breakfast. Sometimes she quarrels with her classmates in class. She doesn’t go home on time and she always watches TV or plays puter games for more than an hour in the evening. （This makes her parents unhappy. ）I think Zhang Ying is a very good girl. Do you think so?YoursHuang Deshun【解析】試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文，題目中給出的材料較為齊全。詞數(shù)不少于60個(gè)英語單詞。TimeGood habitsBad habitsIn the morningGet up earlyEat junk food for breakfastIn classAsk some questionsQuarrel（爭(zhēng)吵） with herclassmates sometimesAfter schoolAlways exerciseGo home lateIn the eveningHelp her parents with houseworkWatch TV or play putergames for more than an hour要求：語言要通順，表達(dá)要正確。并且一些連詞的使用，比如so, or, but等也使文章具有連貫性，是一篇不錯(cuò)的文章。寫作時(shí)注意不要使用太復(fù)雜的句型，以免出現(xiàn)語法錯(cuò)誤，為使句子具有連貫性，可以適當(dāng)使用連詞。時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。s contribution （貢獻(xiàn)） can make a big difference. Yours,Lihua【解析】【詳解】本文是一封倡議書,倡議大家保護(hù)大象。 象牙ivoryDear classmates_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I believe everyone39。倡議書的結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。3）應(yīng)如何保護(hù)它們（不少于三條）。 提示：陸地上最大的哺乳動(dòng)物，可以活到80歲。文中in the natural world, not only…but also, get out, such as, also等詞（組）的恰當(dāng)使用，使上下文意連接緊密；本文還采用了豐富的句型，比如：It is +形容詞+（for sb.） to do sth.；There be句型；時(shí)間狀語從句等復(fù)合句，大大增加了信息的容量，使文章增色不少，這是一篇不錯(cuò)的范文。寫作中注意連詞、固定短語的交替使用，使文意連接緊密，還要注意使用豐富的語句，注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系，最后最好要表達(dá)出人物的感想和看法。It’s spring now. Many people like to go out for some activities. I think it’s great to get close to nature. 【答案】It’s spring now. Many people like to go out for some activities. I think it’s a good way to get close to nature.When we are outdoors and in the natural world, we can not only breathe fresh air and enjoy the beautiful scene, but also relax ourselves for the ing study or work.There are many different ways we can get out into the natural world, such as hiking, cycling, camping and climbing. Cycling is my favourite. I join a cycling club, and often go out with other members. While cycling, we can forget our worries and have fun together. Also, we can learn to be a part of a team and help each other.Whatever you